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Xiti's Poetry Collective

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics' started by Xadimurti, Aug 10, 2008.

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  1. ~Narikoo~

    ~Narikoo~ New Member

    Whoaw ! Simply amazing ! I'm not sure I understood all the words, but I'm sure I understood that your poems are really beautiful ! ^^*
     
  2. LDC1121

    LDC1121 New Member

    I thought it was good work! : ) But try to be careful with the words you use next time. : )
     
  3. Xadimurti

    Xadimurti New Member

    Thanks - and I'll try to, next time. :p

    Thanks Nariiiii! You're so sweet! ^.^
     
  4. Xadimurti

    Xadimurti New Member

    I Miss the Silence

    Bromide apologies always flow
    from your split lip: the dainty drips
    causing chaos to your collar's cerulean.
    The words turned to psoriasis on
    the surface of my lungs: grating at
    the muscles, searching for the smallest
    gap - worming their way out - becoming
    atrophic ash on my athirst tongue
    whilst you broke necks to
    turn that onion sweet; sculpting the
    layers into some magnificent
    monument to ignorance: an acidic
    hearing-aid, preventing any sound-
    induced-ripples from reaching your eardrum
    after venturing over amber swamps
    and through arrogant woodlands of hair.

    I miss the silence.

    I miss the awkward mucus it lines my
    stomach with, keeping the words at bay,
    leaving me to concentrate on counting to
    ten [so we can go back to square one].
     
  5. Kyuu

    Kyuu your worst nightmare.

    Whoa, that's also awesome work! -^^-
    This time I translated whole poem! Yay, good work! ^__^
     
  6. Xadimurti

    Xadimurti New Member

    Hehe. Thanks - I might be writing another later if work stuff doesn't get in the way, if I do I'll post it. :p
     
  7. Kyuu

    Kyuu your worst nightmare.

    Good, I can't wait till then. -^^-
    But now I have to go to take a shower and to bed. Damn school days. >.<
     
  8. Xadimurti

    Xadimurti New Member

    Haha. Well, sweet dreams! Here's one of my older ones in case I don't find time to finish a new one:
     
  9. Xadimurti

    Xadimurti New Member

    Spurious Sabbath

    The grass was always
    greener on the other
    side of our Sun[day],
    slowly teething a comb
    through your bed-made
    hay, ready to sit in the
    hands of praying uncertainty,
    where beauty can't be
    cropped. With all
    anathema fetishes seized
    from the bellows of
    utmost intellectuals:
    "Everlasting destruction
    from the presence of
    our Lord".

    Faith to fray --
    sweaty palms harbour
    splinters and grope steel,
    waiting for God to make
    his way back from
    filigree nicotine and
    pick-me-up demitasse.
    The crowned chasm:
    a profusion of electrons
    running through each
    follicle, and reaching the
    pits of pin-prick pupils;
    reprimanded by the
    breeze of [exp]loaded
    barrels. Mentoring heroes
    are never as impregnable
    as they are in my
    comic collection.
     
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