Xiti's Poetry Collective

Xadi's Poetry Collective

So, this be my poetry collective.
^.^​

I'll post stuff that I write here, and below are links to each poem. Feel free to critique, criticize, praise or threaten. It will all be aptly noted.

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Untitled #2
I Miss the Silence
Spurious Sabbath​

 

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Your eyes shifted to reveal
the smallest of windows framed in
notched hazel and glitter;
but by the time my glance had sailed your optic canal,
traversed the hidden sinew and
sprinted the bridges we'd built
between your brain cells, my focus was
...................…….....……......................c
.........................……......………................r
...............................……..…...…...........u
....................................…....................m
.........................................…….…......b
....................................................……..l
….....................................................i
....……................................................n
………………………………......................……..g
..........……..........................................- like bereft driftwood gliding toward the
..........……..........................................edge of a waterfall – taking an amaurotic plunge
..........……..........................................and hoping all this falling for you
..........……..........................................would have softened some of your
..........……..........................................dam[n] defenses by the time I tailspin and
..........……..........................................hit rock-bottom.

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Nothing? After a week!?

 

Thanks! >.<

I have loads of stuff I've written. but I'm only gonna be posting new stuff here - too much hassle hunting all my older stuff out. Haha.

 

Haha. Thanks! ^.^ I do use too many big words I'm trying to cut down. Haha.

 

My English is crappy whenever I'm not writing poetry. It's the only time English seems to work in my head.

 

Where're you from?

 

Jolly old England.

Your English is really good.

 

I've never heard Finnish, so I couldn't agree or disagree with you. And yeah - You speak better English than most British people I know.

 

Take care!

See you tomorrow

 

Untitled #2

I wouldn't bother giving me a penny
for my candid thoughts:
you'll find a five dollar epic
in the Romantica section
of your nearest run-down book store
(give it a month, it'll be at the bottom
of a bargain bin before you know it).

But still, I’ll conjure up novel ideas of you
wearing in the mattress with me,
keeping the conversation strictly
[your] tongue [frolicking] in [my] cheek,
and convincing myself that my wheezing,
carnal brainstorms will eventually stop.

Then again, think of me as your safe bet:
the only doom that's looming
is me loving you to death.

 

Yeah - this is one of my less intense ones. And thanks - glad you liked it.

And yeah. It's about looking into the eyes of someone, realising how fast you're falling for them and hoping they'll feel the same by the time you're head over heels for them. ^.^