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Our Kingdom Hearts Story (OOC/SU)

Discussion in 'Archive' started by Ventus, Nov 18, 2011.

  1. Ventus

    Ventus Kickass Keyblader!

    Vanitas, you really have to think about your writing. Hayden doesn't know what these creatures are. Also this is in past tense, not present tense (it isn't hits, it is hit). Hit isn't a very good word either. How about slashed, plunged, whacked, thrust, flurried?
     
  2. Destiny

    Destiny Guest

    Umm I think you missed my post. If you wanted it change let me know(but I think it'll help being in the other dark characters)
     
  3. TheKnightofAwesome

    TheKnightofAwesome /人◕ ‿‿ ◕人\

    @ Destiny: I don't mind the powerplay, but sora and I have a little thing planned. I can work around your post without going too much out of character, but just keep that in mind please.
     
  4. Destiny

    Destiny Guest

    Oh pm your idea and I'll plan it around, and I'll fix the post so it can happen. I have just watched many rps where the other dark characters never get a chance. I figured they can get a chance then.
     
  5. 1Gannon1

    1Gannon1 New Member

    Name: Michael Blue

    Age: 19

    Role: (Future) Friend of Chosen Three

    Weapon: http://th07.deviantart.net/fs46/PRE/i/2009/199/c/f/Greif__The_Angels_Harbringer_by_MrHide_Patten.png

    Bio: Long ago, far before the worlds split and before the world of light even formed, hearts souls and bodies did not exist. Life had formed a few times, but the only life that had stayed within the void was a race of god-like beings known as the Cardian Elves. They were immortal, powerful and all-knowing, if there truly was anything to know within the void. The failure of life saddened them, and with their power they forged the world anew. Three Cardian masters of great power were chosen to build a new world, one of light and wonder. The first master, Luxen, forged the first matter on a forge of pure light. Time and space were formed through his will, and the world of light was born, though not as we today know it. But even with a form to take, life still did not flourish. The second master was not discouraged; A fair maiden of the name of Dawn wove a great aura out of twilight, without physical form yet endlessly connected with the physical world; the first soul was thus formed. With time, grass began to grow and the sky was born. But yet still no true being existed save for the Elves themselves. And so the final master, Umbrox, charged a core of pure dark aura, the very essence of the void. With his will, it began to beat, and slowly grew into something even he did not control. And so with the cooperation of all three, they finally forged the first human to populate this world and placed it on an island known by the name of destiny. Over the Aeons, a great many new species formed and the world went on without their intervention. In the end, when the gods were no longer needed, they fell down to the earth, and lived alongside the humans as guardians, protecting them though the Cardians were now but ordinary humans. Though they appeared as any other human would, they are the only onMes today who know of the beginnings of the world of light. Michael is a direct descendant of Luxen, and as such he should be a Cardian royal. But he has been denied his birthright simply by the fact that he had never known. Recently he has become aware of strange auras stirring, auras of valor and wisdom. Auras of keybladers. Now he is seeking out the chosen three, soon to join them on their journey to protect the world of light that his ancestor formed.

    Personality: Michael has a very intimidating air about him, but when you get to know him he is both courageous and loyal. He is willing to make almost any sacrifice to help his true friends, but he would never hurt innocents to do it. He is slow to anger, battling for the good of people rather than out of hate of the enemy, but when he is truly angered he is a force to be reckoned with. His greatest flaw, perhaps, is that he is stubborn.

    Appearance: http://i205.photobucket.com/albums/bb27/Shadow-Village-Ninja/Anime/ShadowWarrior-1.jpg

    Theme: No-Heart Battle Theme
     
    Last edited: Dec 10, 2011
  6. Ventus

    Ventus Kickass Keyblader!

    BK, wasn't he just with Justin? You can't randomly appear out of nowhere. Please edit your post.
     
  7. Ventus

    Ventus Kickass Keyblader!

    I don't know how to end this part. Justin and the girls need to be on that ship too. Destiny, can you talk to me or maybe joint post with me on MSN?
     
  8. TheKnightofAwesome

    TheKnightofAwesome /人◕ ‿‿ ◕人\

    Dom's out of the picture for the time being, but maybe Jet can do something to conclude our little Destiny Island Arch, if he's the "Sora" of the story then maybe I can work in something. If needed I can edit, but I think i have an idea.
     
  9. Destiny

    Destiny Guest

    I'll log on now, but I can't be on long because it is super late
     
  10. Ventus

    Ventus Kickass Keyblader!

    Vanitas, Hayden would not know about Kingdom Hearts or the history of Sora. This is your last warning. I've already told you before to think about your character. One more screw up and your character will be either taken over or killed.
     
  11. 1Gannon1

    1Gannon1 New Member

    Anyone going to look at my character? Just making sure I haven't been forgotten.
     
  12. BK-201

    BK-201 Member

    The role for protector is used up but, I do like the character.
     
  13. 1Gannon1

    1Gannon1 New Member

    Changed from protector to future friend of keybladers.
     
  14. Ventus

    Ventus Kickass Keyblader!

    I'm not really looking for extra characters. We're kind of full right now and when I start an rp, I usually don't add new characters.
     
  15. DarkAngel

    DarkAngel Banned

    is it too late to join?
     
  16. Ventus

    Ventus Kickass Keyblader!

    Vanitas, you took over my character and said he was in the room. You broke the rules of the forum. I said I'd give you one last chance before so I guess I have to force you out of the roleplay by either death of your character or taking over Hayden.

    It may be a little late Desifer but if you want, you can make a sign up and if I think its good enough, you can join!
     
    Last edited: Dec 13, 2011
  17. DarkAngel

    DarkAngel Banned

    Alright I will start work on it...
     
  18. Noir

    Noir

    I'm going to fight the tears then.
    I'll start a LEAVING thread right now..
    Man what I am going to do right now..
     
  19. 1Gannon1

    1Gannon1 New Member

    WAIT a minute... When I submitted a perfectly good profile, you said that you were unwilling to add new characters, but now that some random dude asks if he can sign up? Do you have something against my roleplaying?
     
  20. DarkAngel

    DarkAngel Banned

    no...Soras just known me eversence I loged on...he was one of my first friends...and if you read he said "IF HE LIKED IT" And as far as I can tell you guys are Deleteing and editing alot...I have an idea for that but I need soras premision...also would it be ok to make a freind of the keybladers that they mistake for a Antagonist at first?
     

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