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Kingdom Hearts: Uprising

Discussion in 'Archive' started by GrandShadow, Dec 25, 2009.

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  1. Tsukiyomi

    Tsukiyomi Shinto's Moon God

    Want me to change my evil guy to evil leader?
     
  2. GrandShadow

    GrandShadow I accept your challange.

    i think Z said he'd make the evil leader. so if he decides not to then feel free.
     
  3. Tsukiyomi

    Tsukiyomi Shinto's Moon God

    Ok then. I bet Z will.
     
  4. Become

    Become The Pink Opaque Staff Member Moderator Content Writer

    I'll attempt to make a leader.
     
  5. Ventus

    Ventus Kickass Keyblader!

    no offense but you're not active enough...
     
  6. Become

    Become The Pink Opaque Staff Member Moderator Content Writer

    Leaders generally don't do much of anything anyways, not until the end.
     
  7. GrandShadow

    GrandShadow I accept your challange.

    Mog, Z; we're just waiting on you guys now
     
  8. King of Darkness

    King of Darkness What up Monica

    Can I change the alliance of my character? Maybe confused of which side he should ne on? And maybe he dosen't like taking orders??
     
  9. GrandShadow

    GrandShadow I accept your challange.

    i just read through to check something.

    i guess it would be ok if you want to do that king, but i'd prefer if you don't change his alliance.

    @mog: i'm sorry, i never noticed you edited the character in. i kinda figured you'd just post the template. she's accepted.
     
  10. Ventus

    Ventus Kickass Keyblader!

    nice sign up moogle!
     
  11. Become

    Become The Pink Opaque Staff Member Moderator Content Writer

    Yeah, said character is in the finishing stages. I've been creating her between an iTouch ans a laptop. Just need to start getting all of the pieces together.

    Here she is. I hope she's not too much. I really tried to make her a non-god character. :p

    Name: Taliena/Natalie Savage
    Age: 19
    Alliance: Nobodies (Leader)

    Appearance:
    Just like her Somebody had been, Taliena is simply a drop dead gorgeous looking individual. From head to toe, she appears to be of the highest class of physique, and sheer beauty. Standing at a height of 5’6’’, she is of a well build, highly athletic form, with a moderately glossed, tanned complexion. Her hair is smooth, and well kept, dropping down straight passed her shoulders, and his usually found tied up in a bun, or in a ponytail for combative situations. Otherwise, she simply leaves it down, preferring to keep it ‘unthreatening’, as she fells that a woman with her hair down is a rather unimposing figure. He color of her hair is of a dual nature, being of a ‘golden blonde’ with light brown underlaying strips showing through. But by all means, the most beautiful part of her that seems to catch everyone’s attention from the get go, are her eyes, which are of a blue-gray, and arguably, two of the most alluring eyes that could exist. Of late, she has done the research on the old ‘organization’, and has appeared to grow into a great admiration for their methods, believing them to have formed the base with which she must work. Therefore, she attempts to emulate them in whatever ways possible. Thus, she has taken it upon herself to wear the standard outfit of the old regime, consisting of the trench coat, and the whole nine yards of it. Yet she doesn’t opt to wear black. Instead, she has decided upon a lighter purple shade, purple being a color that she has a strong fondness for.

    Biography:
    In the passed few years, the world of Radiant Garden has come to know several names quite well for various reasons. One such name is that of the Savage family, ‘headed’ by father Fredric Savage, and his wife, Karen. Some time ago, the Savages found themselves in charge of several local business endeavors, many of which come out successful for the family. From that day, the family began to accumulate a shocking amount of wealth, one that was topped only by that wealth of the world’s king. In fact, the Savages were well in with the new King of Radiant Garden at the time, and were constant diner guests within the castle. Just as the world had come to know the parents, so too would they come to know the child. Not long after the Savages reached prominence in their finances, young Natalie Savage was born.

    With wealth surrounding her an all sides, her upbringing would be one that turned her into just as ill seen person as her parents. She grew up becoming filled with desires, and her parents, being too old to bear another child, would be constantly inclined to give their only child what she wanted. Unlike other children at the time, she did not play games, or play fight with others. Rather, she took part in the serious adult discussions administered by her parents, and their wide range of guests. Many times, she would find herself in the limelight, getting all of the attention, and others allowing her to run free with her ideas. So, one could say that she was allowed to let her mentality develop right from the get-go. In any case, other children never saw much in her, other than a spoiled girl, trying to make herself better than anyone that opposed her.

    Unlike many others, the heartless that took heart never swarmed, and there were not very many of them either. In fact, the taking of her heart was far from being a tragic process. A single heartless came upon her a year ago, stalking into her bedroom while she lay sleeping. It was quick, and it was painless, and she didn’t figure out until much later that anything had even happened. She simply carried on with her life, and still carries on with it as though nothing has happened, still thinking that she has her heart, even if it wasn’t believed she had one to begin with.

    Personality:
    Class, Elegance, and Arrogance –
    Given her upbringing within one of the wealthiest of families in the worlds, she was raised under a strong sense of top class mannerisms. This means that everything that she does and says is done with a formal, and classy air. Her garments, even her trench coat, are made from the finest of silks, and are often accompanied by a plethora of jewelry to go with it. Even the organization style boots she wears with her current attire are made more extravagant than others’ would have been, being made from a finer leather material, shined to the point of letting off a glare in the sunlight, and being encrusted with diamond along the bottom edges. Her speech seems to be more refined then most others’, and her voice tends to carry out in an ‘I’m better than you,” sort of way. Despite her young age, she can often be seen sipping upon top class wines, and dinning upon the ‘best’ of meals.

    Even her plans for leading her fellow nobodies to victory seem to be costly from a monetary standpoint, and sometimes, more complex than they really need to be.

    Superiority Complex –
    Taliena was raised as within a wealthy home, one in which everything seemed to go her way all the time. When she wanted something done, her maids, or her butler did it for her. When there was an item which she lusted after, her parents would always be sure to see to it that she had said item, even if it meant disallowing another child from having it. This upbringing of spoiled nurturing turned the young girl into a being who felt as though she was deserving of anything, and everything her eyes caught sight of, so long as it was something that she desired to own. Even today, she believes that everything is of her own property, and will take things out from under anyone’s nose to get what she wants. She is also likely to attempt to buy out possessions from others in order to get them. She is also not above pitting others against each other to gain what she desires. She is constantly seeking attention.

    So of her greatest beliefs of entitlement: She deserves a keyblade; She deserves to be in charge of the nobodies; She deserves she believes to be loved by others ‘for who she is’; She deserves to be the ruler of her own kingdom, or as she calls it a ‘Queendom”.

    A Hard Leader –
    Let us just say that Taliena has read ‘The Prince’ just one too many times in her days, and has taken much of the lessons offered in the text a bit out of proportion, and too much to heart. She sees herself as being the most able leader, simply because she is of a higher social breed, and better off economically than most others would be. Yet she knows, or rather, she thinks that her wealth will breed animosity towards her from others. Thus, she uses a combination of payment, and hard authority to lead. The notion of a kind leader seems to be lost in her to some extent, and she often makes her followers compete for her favor, and reward. Those who win her favor at a given time are rewarded the most for even the most unproductive of tasks. All in all, a group under her lead is a competitive one, if a person commits to it.

    Flirtatious –
    Well, most girls do like guys, and considering that Taliena fails to understand that she doesn’t have a heart anymore, she remains to fall into that category. And she’ll flirt with just about any guy that she meets, even if he’s not on her side. She tends to break through personal boundaries at times, and can get a bit overbearing with such endeavors. She often convinces herself that she is in love with people, even though she can’t feel any emotions.

    Weapons:
    Psion Headband –
    Worn around Teliena’s head, is a gold made headband, which runs the fullness of her head around the forehead, and around the back of her head, being worn over her hair. So really, it’s more of a crown of sorts. Upon the front of the headband is a violet orb, the size of a marble, embedded into the surface of the gear. The headband’s surface, outside of this, is etched with a series of fluttering, wavy designs. The headband is designed for the purpose of allowing the same energy employed in the use of telekinesis to be converted into a form of pure energy, which she can use for the purpose of attack or defense. Yet the use of this device in excess uses up a much larger sum of mental energy, even more than her standard telekinesis.

    The Bubbles –
    Exactly what these things are is not really known to anyone, save perhaps the gods at Olympus, and even they seem to be unclear on how they were made. The Bubbles appear to be of solid structures, but at the same time, they seem to be formed of some sort of energy. The truth is that these are formed of a nameless form of matter, which gathers itself around Taliena in a series of clear, yet whitish bubbles. They are in fact the outward manifestation of the very essence of Taliena’s thoughts that are deemed too potentially dangerous to be channeled directly through her mind, or through the Psion Headband. Through these bubbles, Taliena puts out the deepest of her thoughts, and imaginative ideas, bringing them forth through flashing patterns of The Bubbles, the thoughts becoming less directly harmful, but more useful in her endeavors. Normally, these bubbles are set hovering close to her body, usually within two to three feet of her, unless she decides to leave one behind somewhere to pull of a sneak attack. When bubbles are used up, they vanish entirely, and new ones manifest when a new thought is started, or an old thought or idea is returned to for an extended time.

    ((I’ll admit, The Bubbles are even a bit much for my tastes in terms of power. I had the idea and decided to try them. If they’re too much, I can omit them from the character)).

    Powers:
    Being stripped of her heart, and therefore, any sort of real emotions to feel and experience, Taliena has developed a mind that is like no other in the Realm of Light. All of her power rests firmly upon the crux of the power that can be achieved by a free ranging mind, left unhindered by the constraints created by the effects of emotions. Those powers used by her range from various telekinetic abilities, to mentally crippling telepathic assaults upon the minds of her unfortunate victims. A fight against this beauty becomes an ultimate test of ones mental prowess and endurance to a level that is never quite reached these days. Of course, her powers have their limits. Overuse of these powers tends to leave her a bit flustered, and her senses distorted for a while (sort of like being drunk).

    Telekinesis -
    This a term that is generally coined as meaning the power to simply move nearby objects, and move them to ones content. But in actuality, the power is far more than the simple movement of matter from one location to another with bit a thought. At its fullest capacity, telekinesis is a power that can achieve the effects of actions normally carried out by be body by means of the mind focusing on that very action, creating similar effects. Yet the mind is both more durable, and more powerful (in Taliena's case anyways) than the likes of the body. Essentially, her mind allows her to project superhuman levels of strength, the effects of which include lifting heavy objects, crushing them, or simply tearing them apart piece by piece (ie - knocking down walls, or breaking holes into them). Also encompassed by this power is the ability to mimic physical attacks through telekinetic methods. Yet such techniques require that she have her target within her sight, and clearly at that, otherwise, she is unable to attack them directly. Every move that she uses through these means mist be accompanied by the proper body movement to go with it. This barring the use of telekinesis to use for levitation.

    Telepathy -
    This is a power dealing with the ability to connect ones mind with the minds of those around them. Usually this is consisting of the telepath using their mind to talk with others in private. This can be used over a significant distance, and with the aid of external equipment, it can be spanned across worlds. Otherwise, she can only use it to communicate with those upon whatever world she happens to be on. While she is unable to read minds, she possesses a rather keen intuition through which she implies, and guesses at the thoughts others are having at a given moment. Usually, she can only point out the more obvious things, and the less hidden parts of their train of thought. She cannot directly influence the thoughts of others, yet she can use her power to manipulate how others perceive her own thoughts. Altering the sound of her thoughts, she is able to speak in the inner voices the voices of others, a technique she calls “Mental Ventriloquism”. Potentially, this can be used to insert thoughts and ideas into the minds of others. Through combining the powers of telepathy and telekinesis, she can create 'psychic pulses' or waves, which, if meeting their targets, grants her a level of dominion over their minds for a short period of time.
     
    Last edited: Jan 1, 2010
  12. GrandShadow

    GrandShadow I accept your challange.

    i really only see one problem with her; where's the drive to destroy and conquer? the leader of the heartless and nobodies is supposed to be wanting to conquer everything. she doesn't have that.
    could you also explain 'the bubbles' better? i don't get how they're a weapon.
     
  13. Become

    Become The Pink Opaque Staff Member Moderator Content Writer

    1. Her drive to conquer is explained in her personality. She feels entitled to pretty much everything. Therein rests her desire to rule over anything.

    2. The bubbles are as they are explained. They are devices that literally implement her thoughts upon her environment, to some extent. So basically, she can use them to create illusions, and such.
     
  14. GrandShadow

    GrandShadow I accept your challange.

    well, that doesn't seem like much. she's coming off as a snotty rich girl more then an evil leader

    illusions, ok. that wasn't explained well in my opinion.
     
  15. Become

    Become The Pink Opaque Staff Member Moderator Content Writer

    I figure that would lend itself to some development within the RP. A bit of displeasure, and such. I mean, that's why some people actually conquer places and people. Because they feel entitled to their rule. I won't mention any anecdotes here, because the only ones I can think of I'd be in bad form to mention them here.

    Mainly illusions are all I can really think of at the moment. In the not so near future, there will be more to her powers, as I intend to carry the character beyond the RP once it is over. But for now (within this RP), illusions will be the primary power of The Bubbles.
     
  16. GrandShadow

    GrandShadow I accept your challange.

    well i'll go with it for now. she's accepted.
    i'll go set up the rp and make the first post


    KH: Uprising RP
    Its up. feel free to post.
     
    Last edited: Jan 1, 2010
  17. Become

    Become The Pink Opaque Staff Member Moderator Content Writer

    Is Severi also the head of Radiant Garden? Or is that a different person?
     
  18. GrandShadow

    GrandShadow I accept your challange.

    different person. he's head of the resistence, i guess you can say he runs the cities defense
     
  19. Become

    Become The Pink Opaque Staff Member Moderator Content Writer

    I thought that there was someone who was gonna play the head of RG. Or did that fall through?
     
  20. GrandShadow

    GrandShadow I accept your challange.

    Roxas want Severi to be king but after some discussion i said no
     
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