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Kingdom Hearts: Uprising

Discussion in 'Archive' started by GrandShadow, Dec 25, 2009.

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  1. Dec 29, 2009 #41
    Answer Man

    Answer Man Man I'm Awesome

    plus he wrote alot.
     
  2. Dec 29, 2009 #42
    Become

    Become The Pink Opaque Staff Member Moderator Content Writer

    And that's a problem?
     
  3. Dec 29, 2009 #43
    GrandShadow

    GrandShadow I accept your challange.

    @answer: writing a lot is fine. in fact i prefer it. lets me get a better picture of the chaeacter being presented.

    @Z: well for powers, its just a little much. i know it can be watched and it'll work out, but i just feel its a little much.
    but for the bio, i don't like how thier entire history is on one planet but then they just happen to get caught up in this war. the characters feel like they were made for a different rp and you're just forcing them into this one.
     
  4. Dec 29, 2009 #44
    Become

    Become The Pink Opaque Staff Member Moderator Content Writer

    Well, their conflict started upon one world, and carried itself over across other worlds as Zeije tried to escape his prosecution/death penalty. Generally, I created them for the sake of a subplot, which will become entwined into the main plot. They sort of have that Cloud-Sephiroth relation, except, probably not as awesome. Adn as for their powers, their strength superiority are marginal, really, or they can be, and their 'magic' is restricted such that it can't be used to completely waste worlds in one blow. I intend to use them in more of a melee fashion anyways.
     
  5. Dec 29, 2009 #45
    King of Darkness

    King of Darkness What up Monica

    Name: Vex

    Age: 19

    Appearence: [​IMG]

    Alliance: Evil (Heartless)

    Bio: Vex's original name was Jordan and he was once a great warrior. But not for good but for evil. He fought in the name of Darkness, thinking it was the right thing. When he turned into a Heartless it made him appreciate the Darkness even more. So now he works under his leader still thinking the Darkness is the only path to 'peace'.

    Weapon: Not including the sword on his arm, he has twin pistols in his back pockets.

    Personality: Has a split personality.

    Powers: Darkness, fire, lightning, rarely ice
     
  6. Dec 29, 2009 #46
    GrandShadow

    GrandShadow I accept your challange.

    @king: accepted

    @Z: i'm still not really liking them.



    i'll post my final character tomorrow
     
  7. Dec 29, 2009 #47
    Become

    Become The Pink Opaque Staff Member Moderator Content Writer

    I just don't see how they'll be an issue. I mean, their no more powerful than other characters, whose only powers stated are 'advanced magic' or similar. Besides, the KH games often run intertwining side plots with characters that aren't always connected to the main plot. So their subplot really isn't a problem by KH standards.
     
  8. Dec 29, 2009 #48
    Moogle

    Moogle Well-Known Member

    While subplots aggravate me to NO END, I have to agree with Z on this one. And plus, at least he actually defines his characters' moves very well as opposed to SOME PEOPLE. No, that is TOTALLY not a direct potshot at half the users in the RP area (including/excluding myself).
     
  9. Dec 29, 2009 #49
    GrandShadow

    GrandShadow I accept your challange.

    well you don't see a problem with it and yes, by KH standards its fine. but i do see a problem with it. in KH all the characters had thier stories twisted so that they fit in the game. like cloud and leon coming from the same world, despite being from different games. even the disney characters had thier stories tweaked a little.

    but Z, your characters don't seem to have that. you made them how they are and then just thrusted them into something that they weren't made for. they'd be great in some RPs but they feel forced for this one.
     
  10. Dec 29, 2009 #50
    Become

    Become The Pink Opaque Staff Member Moderator Content Writer

    I could tweak my characters' bios. But given the way the story for the RP is, None of the characters should have had the time to become wrapped up in anything to do with the KH story.
     
  11. Dec 29, 2009 #51
    GrandShadow

    GrandShadow I accept your challange.

    what do you mean?
     
  12. Dec 29, 2009 #52
    Become

    Become The Pink Opaque Staff Member Moderator Content Writer

    The RP takes place after 1000 years of peace and quiet, and such (as you stated in the story, nothing much has been happening). And the way the story is, it sounds like the creation of new heartless and nobodies has only just been starting, yet a few of the bios that I've read on this thread seem to have their characters being attacked by teams of heartless and/or nobodies. So exactly how long ago did the heartless and nobodies begin to resurface?
     
  13. Dec 29, 2009 #53
    Moogle

    Moogle Well-Known Member

    Meh, my character is more or less finished. I can't think of any more mana-ey moves at this point.
     
  14. Dec 29, 2009 #54
    GrandShadow

    GrandShadow I accept your challange.

    about a year before story starts. sorry, i should've been more specific.


    @Mog: can you post the character then?

    here's my final character

    Name: Reyox

    Age: 26

    Alliance: Good

    Appearance:
    [​IMG]

    Bio: Reyox is Yero's Nobody. When Reyox came into the world, he instantly knew that he had done wrong. He knew he shouldn't have given his original self to darkness. So to make ammends to what he believes was his crime, Reyox is aiding the resistance. He leads attacks or carries out stealth missions. However he can redeem himself, he will.

    Personality: Reyox is almost entirely unfeeling. The only emotions he ever seems to show are regret and guilt. He hides the fact he's a Nobody as he believes it will make his allies turn on him. He's intelligent, able to make keen observations and notice what others would miss. He follows orders to the letter, never faltering under pressure. Once the war ends, he hopes to live alone where he can't bother anybody.

    Weapon: The sword in the picture, named Forevers Void. He usually carries it around in his hand.

    Powers: As a Nobody, Reyox can use portals of darkness. However he doesn't because it would give away the fact he's a Nobody, which he's trying to hide. He's very skilled with his sword, able to take on multiple foes at once. Like Yero, Reyox can manipulate his feeling of gravity. He mostly uses it for flight, but can also make a small barrier of repulsion. The barrier works only on physical objects as gravity has no effect on energy.
     
  15. Dec 29, 2009 #55
    Moogle

    Moogle Well-Known Member

    My character is back on page 3.
     
  16. Dec 29, 2009 #56
    Ventus

    Ventus Kickass Keyblader!

    so do we have a leader of light?
     
  17. Dec 29, 2009 #57
    GrandShadow

    GrandShadow I accept your challange.

    nope. feel free to make one
     
  18. Dec 29, 2009 #58
    Become

    Become The Pink Opaque Staff Member Moderator Content Writer

    So, then, what if I made their 'cat and mouse' more recent, and that their arrival on the scene is the result of a heartless related incident? I mean, really, they've been in the chase situation for about a year now anyways.
     
  19. Dec 29, 2009 #59
    Ventus

    Ventus Kickass Keyblader!

    OK I'll get to it

    Name: Severi
    Age: 32
    Appearance: [​IMG]
    Alliance: Good
    Bio: Severi is the leader of light. His role as leader of the light is to protect the people of all worlds from the darkness. Ever since the keybladers became extinct once again, Severi created the group, The Light Knights. Now, the Light Knights patrol all worlds under Severi's orders. He despises the darkness and he is extremist. He has told his knights that; if they see anyone who have a dark aura or anyone who are associated with the darkness, they must terminate the threat. The worlds do not know of this plan but word is spreading. Severi has focused on Radiant Gardens the most. He knows the heartless are coming back and last time they appeared, they mainly appeared on that world. His ultimate plan is to kill all darkness so it will never spread...ever again. A minority of people are starting to believe that the darkness should be terminated aswell but they do not know of his plans. On the other hand, hate for the darkness is starting to spread.
    Personality: Ruthless, violent,
    Weapon: The one on the picture. It is called the Blade of Astradoth. It is a sacred blade, which could cut through brick and stone.
    Powers: Many light elemental attacks. He is a master of the light. He can create a bomb that could devestate an entire town but this takes a lot of energy. Teleporting. Angellic wings. A master of healing and magic.
     
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  20. Dec 29, 2009 #60
    GrandShadow

    GrandShadow I accept your challange.

    @Z: that would be fine then.

    @Roxas: accepted


    now all we need is the evil leader and for Mog to post our last keyblade warrior
     
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