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Kingdom Hearts Ultima (A Sequal of AKHS, one of the most successful RP's) OOC/ SU

Discussion in 'Archive' started by Destiny, May 15, 2010.

  1. Ventus

    Ventus Kickass Keyblader!

    Restart. I've made the world confusing to everyone.
     
    Last edited: Jul 31, 2010
  2. GrandShadow

    GrandShadow I accept your challange.

    i vote option 2
     
  3. Desert Warrior

    Desert Warrior Well-Known Member

    I 'spose #2 is one of the simpler options.
     
  4. Destiny

    Destiny Guest

    Ok option two then it is. DW, can you erase to where you think would be appropiate?
     
  5. Desert Warrior

    Desert Warrior Well-Known Member

    Any guesses (While I do it) as to how many pages it would be?

    EDIT: Too late. 5 pages, 57 or so posts total.
     
    Last edited: Jul 31, 2010
  6. Destiny

    Destiny Guest

    That's insane, ok well(need to look) when they're deleted, I or someone else can make the new post.


    EDIT- Someone else will have to make the post, also whoever does make a note saying posts deleted just to explain the huge time different in the RP.
     
  7. _Roxas_

    _Roxas_ New Member

    ._. I got a Q! Well...I'm a bit confused that's all since I joined in the middle of Radient Garden ^^;

    Maybe some tips or about a summery of three sentences would help maybe?

    I'm still a bit new, this is completely different to 4kids tv fourms XD, sorry
     
  8. Destiny

    Destiny Guest

    Well DW deleted the posts in Radiant Garden, and we're starting over, which is great for you because now you can be the threat in Radiant Garden and stuff.
     
  9. Destiny

    Destiny Guest

    Yeah I know double post but this is important and nobody else in this RP is on the site or on msn right now.

    First off, nobody should have heard Xehanort, second has anyone seen noz and DB, also those of you who I have discussed it with(I believe it might have just been DB) the true enemy is now showing up.

    Next, everybody needs to be active in this RP, I'd hate to see it die.


    Ok then next...


    Name- Master Xehanort
    Age- unknown

    Role- true villian
    Personality- Master Xehanort is a dark evil man. He is very mysterious and controling. He is also very powerful. He doesn't have much of a heart, but he can make it seem like he has one.
    Appearence-
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    Keyblade-
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    History- Master Xehanort's history in this present time is unknown to everyone but Ansem told Destiny that her father knows, which still leaves it as nobody know's Master Xehanort's history.

    What is known is he is one of the very first corrupted keybladers to travel the worlds many, many years ago.

    Other YouTube - ‪Kingdom Hearts Birth By Sleep - The Force in You‬‎


    Name- Ansem
    Age- 16

    Role- friend of Destiny, possesed by Master Xehanort
    Personality- Ansem, as a child is a quite shy boy. He doesn't talk to anybody except for Destiny, when he became possesed by Master Xehanort his personality became different, mysterious and dark. Now that he's free he is friendly but still mysterious and wise. He is also very protective of Destiny
    Appearence-
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    Keyblade-
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    History- Ansem when he was a little boy about age of 3 move to Destiny Island. He didn't have a family or friends, he was an orphan, he didn't know his family. And just that first day he was different. He had a birth mark the shape of a heart on his arm and people made fun of him because of that. He kept it hidden then. The one day though he was forced to go outside for fresh air, he met Destiny, a bright cheery carefree little girl. Right away the two became friends.

    Destiny was popular but she always choose to hang out with Ansem over anybody else. Her friends still would tease Ansem some, but she had her close knit friends try to include Ansem. Over the year time though, Ansem grew away from everybody, he was only close to Destiny. That's when he met a man on the island who apparently was once like Ansem. This man was a keyblade weilder and decided to train Ansem privately to also become a keyblade weilder.

    Over that year time Ansem became stronger and he also began to change some. He felt like someone was grasping his heart. He also wanted Destiny all to himself as the only friend in the world, then he showed up. He was a strange little boy just like Ansem. Was teased and an orphan. However he was stronger than what Ansem was and this boy decided to teach Ansem everything he knew about the "truth". Ansem started turning away from his teacher and went around hurting people until he and Destiny got into a fight due to him almost killing a good friend of hers. That then changed Ansem, but their relationship wouldn't be the same again.

    Ansem began having thought of going to discover his destiny and going with his new friend, named Xehanort. Finally he decided he would leave because that same day, Xehanort disappeared. It was later that day when Ansem's teacher confronted him about not following the same path that he made that's when Ansem realised, Xehanort was holding onto his heart filling it with darkness. Ansem almost lost control and Xehanort almost took over if it wasn't for Destiny showing up to give him a small little package as a going away gift. Ansem never did open it, but he kept it close to him.

    He started his journey though lost and confused until he was found by Maza. That day too he lost all memories of Destiny Island, along with everyone on Destiny Island forgot about him. He did manage to remeber that one important person to him, Destiny.

    The same day taken in by Maza he forgot what his real name was and his name then became Xehanort.

    Xehanort became one of Maza's best servant and the day the twins of ultima recieved their destiny, he was there and to his surprise was also Destiny. He showed no signs of remebering her aloud, but mentally he did. He refused to fight her and dark thoughts in his head made it his goal to make Destiny join him on the dark side.

    Soon after this time Xehanort couldn't take it anymore and fought through Master Xehanort and showed his feelings for Destiny, it was this opportunity that Master Xehanort took, to take over his body.

    Now he's more like a drifting soul with that one person remebering him and knowing who he was, that was all he needed was Destiny to know. He knows that Destiny and Tom will have to fight Master Xehanort and he prays for that day to come and that they will be sucessful

    Other YouTube - ‪Kingdom Hearts Birth By Sleep - Vanitas's Sentiment‬‎
     
  10. Ventus

    Ventus Kickass Keyblader!

    I say someone should take over Maza.
     
  11. Destiny

    Destiny Guest

    I guess I'll take over it, I'm going to send him a PM right now about it.
     
  12. Desert Warrior

    Desert Warrior Well-Known Member

    I am really confused about what is going on right now.
     
  13. GrandShadow

    GrandShadow I accept your challange.

    same here. that's why i'm not posting right now. it was actually less confusing before.
     
  14. Destiny

    Destiny Guest

    Ok I was before, but figured it out.


    The good guys(Johnny, Tom, Tim, Yale, and Destiny) arrived in Radiant Garden, a hiding moogle warned them of the two kings(Kaoru and Hikaru) who are evil.

    Heartless showed up, moogle hid, good guys go fighting heartless. Destiny went after the last one when she saw Aaron and the group met him. A whistle was heard by Destiny that Kaoru made. Destiny look causing memories from her childhood to become aware of the past with Kaoru(similar to what Roxas would go through with Sora's memories).

    During this time Xehanort showed up to meet with Kaoru and Hikaru about defeating the twins and such, he witnessed Destiny pass out which woke his own feelings and past with her. It's when came aware who was controling Xehanort was Master Xehanort, and Xehanort(not master) real name is Ansem(no relation).

    Meanwhile, Destiny sees the memories of Kaoru and also a mystery boy. She is passed out going through this and after the memory of Kaoru she gets another flash back of the other mystery boy. After that flash back she sees the little boy who appologizes and becomes Xehanort/ Ansem. Xehanort/ Ansem shows Destiny their past and history togeather and he warns her of Master Xehanort leaving it that her father knows who Master Xehanort is. Also in the flash back, Destiny learned that both her's and Tom's dad is a keyblade weilder as well.

    Meanwhile, Destiny still passed out, Master Xehanort introduced himself to the group and prewarned them. The group now is aware of their true enemy(Master Xehanort) but they still have to deal with Hikaru and Kaoru(who is sort of like a mutual guy) in Radiant Garden while they now go on their quest to save the light from Master Xehanort.

    And that's about it :) Anymore questions?
     
  15. GrandShadow

    GrandShadow I accept your challange.

    still was less confusing before. before it was just an enemy overun in a dark castle while the twins went after the keyhole and the rest tried to follow.

    now we've got two xehanorts and with how you type, it gets confusing as to which your referring to at the time. and we had you pass out and start up flashbacks that started fine but then got really confusing.

    and now i'm pretty sure that like me, the others weren't posting because you mad e it all confusing. your explanation says that but your IC posts don't make any sense.
     
  16. Destiny

    Destiny Guest

    Which post so I can try to clean it up or whatever needs done.

    but to help more, Master Xehanort(the old dude as the dude from birth by sleep, yeah that guy) doesn't show up until the very last post and anything with Destiny doing anything, it's in her mind like...(the only example I got is a spoiler from birth by sleep) plus there's more than 2 enters to seperate them, but I'll go draw lines to seperate them more.
     
  17. GrandShadow

    GrandShadow I accept your challange.

    well what i meant about the way you type is you type with two people speaking in the same paragraph instead of putting in a
    line break to signify the change in speakers. it's really helpful and lots of people do it(including myself)

    also, even after you 'revealed' that Ansem was Xehanort, you continued to refer to him as Xehanort in your post and when you brought in Master Xehanort, you only put master once or twice but then referred to him as plain old Xehanort, which would confuse people about which one you meant.
     
  18. Destiny

    Destiny Guest

    Well lines are in to help, the only way it's that way was I had an English teacher this year yell at me about doing that saying new paragraphs seperate new subjects, but I used to do that, but I'll have to go back to doing that.

    While for the Xehanort in Destiny's paragraph(referring to her things) it's still sort of Xehanort to her so without saying I/me/we/us it still incorprates some first person sort of thing into it.

    The last post is clean now
     
  19. GrandShadow

    GrandShadow I accept your challange.

    in reports and stuff you shouldn't use line breaks like i said, but in books or other stores whenever its a new speaker we get a line break.
     
  20. dualblade

    dualblade Break!

    Ok,Im not dead.Gonna read the new posts,and depending on how it is going I will see if Seth should come in or not.If I dont do anything this world I will have him come back next world (he should still be in the dark stronghold.)
     

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