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Kingdom Hearts: The Beginning of the Shokos

Discussion in 'Archive' started by Ventus, Jan 23, 2009.

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  1. LivingDeath

    LivingDeath Dormina'd

    The cloaked man appeared and said, "Good choice. That heartless was the first test to you. 'are you ready to wield a weapon'. Now the final test." said him. Suddenly he summoned a giant, pure black, heartless with creepy yellow eye. "Here's the final test, 'are you are one of the person that keyblade chosen you? There is no friend of yours to rely on. Only keyblade can help." said The cloaked man.
     
  2. Ventus

    Ventus Kickass Keyblader!

    >Nice idea guys! Also Chris is out of the house but he's on the ground, running out of breath. The girl (Crystal) is safe too and she is lying down on the ground also<
     
  3. Nova

    Nova A Ghost Staff Member Administrator

    Crystal had lost conciousness somewhere in the escape from the fire. Even though she couldn't make herself wake up she could still feel the hot, sticky smoke burning her lungs and throat. She coughed a few times without waking up. Suddenly the blackness of the inside of her eyelids turned into the blackness of the smoke as she seemed to realive everything that happened in her dream but it was all happening backwards. Back in the house with the boy that saved her and then the boy wasn't there anymore and she was in the burning house alone but the fire was getting smaller and she was surrounded by the creatures again. Just as she thought this rewind in her thoughts would never end, it stopped. She was standing in the doorway of her house. Her brother was sitting at the table with a glass of orenge juice and her dad was getting ready for work. Her mom was sitting at the piano, her favorite instrament in the whole world. This is what she had seen just before they turned into heartless before.
    "Mom!" she said, panic tightened her throat and made it hard to get her words out fast enough. She had seen this before. THey were going to turn into those creatures again! Her dad came out of his room suddenly, this was not what happened the first time. He knelt down in front of her with his hands on her sholders looking in her eyes "Crystal don't be afraid." he said gently as the rest of her family dropped what they were doing and came forwad as well.
    Crystal was still stiff with panic "Dad! Carson! Mom! Guys we have to get out of here! There comming!" her voice echoed on itself.
    Her dad shook his head "Crystal calm down we don't have much time."
    Her mom nodded "Listent to him honey. The monsters are gone you're safe now with Chris and Nichole."
    Crystal shook her head "No... that means... it all really happened didn't it? You guys are..." she started crying.
    Her brother, Carson, walked up to her and put his hand under her chin and lifted her gaze back up to him "Hey you really think death is gonna keep us down baby sis?" he said with a grin "We're still right here with you forever but those heartless didn't just attack you for a reason."
    Her mom hushed him "Carson, let's not be too brash about this or she'll never understand."
    Crystal looked between the three of them "Understand.... what?" she asked. Her shock and pain still lingered in her heart but she had to be strong for them.
    Their parents looked at eachother and then her dad sighed "Crystal theres something we never told you... about..."
    Her mom had a tear in her eye and her dad put his arm around her comfortingly as he spoke "Crystal you aren't really our biological daughter. The girl, Nichole, you have seen her before once but I think you were both too young to remember. Yen Sid brought you to us when you were a small child and told us to protect you. He said that you had some special job you would have to do someday."
    Crystal was shocked "HUH! Wait a second! What no way!" she said, freaking out a gain.
    Carson laughed and messed up her hair "I told you she'd freak. Thats just who she is." he said. "Look Crys, just because we aren't blood siblings doesn't make us not family right." he grinned "We still had good times."
    Crystal felt like she was going to cry, "...Yeah... we did." she agreed. She looked back at her parents "So what is this 'special job' I would have to do?"
    Her 'mom' sighed "THose creatures that attacked the house were called Heartless. There are three other types of monsters just like them: Unknowns, Nobodies, and Shokos. Those creatures look for any reason to take the hearts of people like us and like you and try to be whole again. They spread darkness through the worlds like wildfire."
    Crystal shook her head "You're saying I have to stop them?" she said, again panic raised in her chest.
    Her father shook her head "Not alone. You will help Chris and Nichole and their friends and of course we will also be with you every step of the way."
    Crystal shook her head "No... mom dad I"m not ready for this." she said as all three of them started to dissapear. They were gone but Carson remained "It's ok, sis." he said more gently than before. He hugged her, she could barely feel him physically but as soon as they came in contact Crystal felt more calm and confident. "I'll see you again lil one." he said as he also dissapeared.
    *Physically she's still asleep next to Chris on the ground. I'll be posting whats going on but she's not going to wake up for a while if thats ok.*
    The house around her dissapeared and Crystal was standing on the ground on some island thingy surrounded by fire. There was a tower looming above her almost tall enough to touch the night sky.
     
    Last edited: Jan 27, 2009
  4. Ventus

    Ventus Kickass Keyblader!

    Chris opened his eyes, to see Nicole, looking frantically for something and then he saw the girl lying down next to her, seeing sweat pouring down her face. She coughed and Chris sighed.
    "I hope she's alright..."
    Chris tried to get up to see if Nicole was okay but his legs screeched in pain, as he trie4d to raise himself up. The wood that punctured through his legs scarred most of his right leg. He felt blood, dripping down from the wound. Chris put his head back down and looked over at the girl again. Did he save her in time?
     
  5. Nova

    Nova A Ghost Staff Member Administrator

    Crystal didn't see anywhere else to go so she hesitantly walked forward to the door of the tower. She cautiously put her hand out to the nob of the door and turned it *Her real hand twiched as she reached for the door in her dream* she opened the old looking door, it didn't make a sound as it slowly swung open. She walked in and looked around. She found herself in a circular room with a winding staircase along the wall. The staircase ended half the way up the wall and there was some kind of portal they led into. Her heart pounded loudly as she looked around, at the stars on the rails of the stairs and the floor and the tall ceiling. Why did this place look so familiar?
     
  6. Ventus

    Ventus Kickass Keyblader!

    Christopher saw the girl twitch her hand, as if she was twisted a handle on a door. She was having a dream. Maybe the girl fell in a coma!!! All these thoughts were running through his head. Chris began wondering how Nicole felt about Chris. Would she like him, if they got to know each other better?
    He turned his head towards Nic, who was still looking for something.
    With a wispy voice, he asked "Hey Nic, who are you looking for?"
    Suddenly he noticed, Sorahiko vhas vanished.
    "What happened to Sorahiko?" he asked with a rough low volumed voice.
     
  7. Keyblade Master Roxas

    Keyblade Master Roxas Shake the Core.

    Sorahiko was confused, and he was fuming with anger right now. Sorahiko ran to the huge heartless he was thinking to himself what do he mean by "Keyblade" and why did he felt that he just wanted to keep on fighting he wanted power and why he came here. "Only the keyblade can help"..those words repeated into his mind. Suddenly he raised is hand and before he knew it a shining "Oblivion keyblade" appeared on his hand it just came out of nowhere, his heart was was beating very fast, he closed his eyes and though of all his friends he didn't know where they went when all of this destruction happened in the little hamlet of Twilight Town. He was thinking about Nicole, and Christopher and his Mother and Father all of them, their where images of them in his mind smiling and waving and telling him to go with them...though when he looked at the other side...all he saw was darkness, the darkness was like luring Sorahiko to it. Sorahiko was running...running to His friends Chris and Nicole and is parents and his friends, the people that he really cared about......when he opened his eyes..he was running towards the giant heartless, he swung his keyblade and with one swing, the heartless was pouring what looked like more heartlesses. Then, the giant heartlesses fell over Sorahiko..now he was totally surrounded by pitch black, he closed his eyes he didn't want to see anything all he wanted to do was get out of their, he slowly opened his eyes and let out his hand waiting if anybody would help him.
     
  8. Ventus

    Ventus Kickass Keyblader!

    Suddenly an old wrinkly hand, touched Sorahiko's and a bright light abolished the darkness around them.
    The old man with a blue cloak around him spoke in a deep husky voice, as if he was about to die "Hagora"
    The old man and Sorahiko landed onto the ground of Twilight Town and the old man stood up and taken the cloak off to reveal Yen Sid in his magician clothes but he looked extremely dirty and black skin started to bubble over his normal skin. He stood up, facing Nicole.
    "Nicole, you must go with your friends and fight the masters of these Shokos. Stop their plan alongside your friends and defeat the evil that lies in the World of Destruction. Seal the 10 keyholes of the worlds and open the gateway to the Shoko's stronghold. I can only use one more spell until my life is over, I will rebuild Twilight Town, which it once was and form a barrier around the world until you get back. Good luck, Nicole"
    Yen Sid started to fade and the buildings started to regrow from the ashes. The world went back to it's original state and the Shokos disappeared from the face of Twilight Town.
    "Good luck Nicole" his voice echoed as he disappeared from sight.
     
  9. Destiny

    Destiny Guest

    "Yen Sid, NO!" Nicole yelled. It was to late. Everybody in town was back. She chancged her clothing with magic in her Twilight Town cloths. She sighed and ran over to the railing, they were at the train station square. She looked out over the town and out into the rolling hills. She let her head fall on the railing.

    "I can't do this, why did he do that, I need more training, I can't, oh Yen Sid, why?" Nicole said aloud not paying attention to her friends and she saw a new girl who looked burned up.
     
  10. Ventus

    Ventus Kickass Keyblader!

    Chris looked up again and saw Sorahiko again. He smiled, seeing that one of his friends was okay and then he turned to see Nicole upset, having her head planted onto the railing. Chris tried to get up but his legs stung, causing him to shout in anguish. There were burns all over his body too. He laid back down, hoping Nicole or Sorahiko would help him and the girl out.
     
  11. Destiny

    Destiny Guest

    Nicole turned around and stuck her arm out as on both of them their burns healed then she returned to looking out over the city.

    "Yen Sid, please come back..." Nicole said again. She began to walk off forgetting about the otehrs. She didn't really care anymore. She failed once, Yen Sid said to go, but she failed him, and he was gone, she couldn't go. She failed to protect Twilight Town, that was something she wouldn't mess up again.
     
  12. Ventus

    Ventus Kickass Keyblader!

    Chris got up from the ground and walked over to Nicole.
    "Hey, I'm sure Yen Sid wouldn't want you like this......"
    Chris, without hesistation touched her right shoulder with his left hand.
    "Sorahiko and I want to help you....."
     
  13. Keyblade Master Roxas

    Keyblade Master Roxas Shake the Core.

    Sorahiko was happy that the town was back to normal, it looked the same it always did..the sun was shining bright and you can hear the train tracks. Sorahiko looked down now looking sad...he didn't want to tell Christopher and Nicole what happened.."N-Nicole..." Sorahiko squeaked and swallowed he was glad that he could talk now..he was glad that he was out of that awful place. "I want to help you..Yen-Sid will come back...I know he will.." Sorahiko forced a smile.
     
  14. Destiny

    Destiny Guest

    "Will he, I need to go." Nicole said running off. She ran down the street and into the woods. She leaned against a tree and looked over to teh old mansion which looked like a leaf mansion. Nicole walked over to the gate and opened it and closed it behind her. She walked over and pulled on the door and was able to break the ivvy growing over it and entered, ivvy and much more was in teh mansion, it was hard to breathe from all teh dust. She went and walked to the back wall where a window was at little ivvy, she opened a door and walked out in the gardin closing the door behind her. She continued to teh back wall and jumped it. She walked deep into the woods. Soon she found the little valley, down in teh valley there was three open fields now covered in weeds a foot high, also a small pond. The area was kind of dark. She found teh walking path which was just a dirt road. She walked down and saw a windmill, an old barn falling apart and soon a house that was barely standing all black. At one point it was white. Nicole looked at it. It was the house she was born in, the house her family died in, the house Yen Sid saved her from, the house which started her life with Yen Sid. She walked over to an old tree stump and sat down. She made her cloths the corceress outfit of hers and looked at the house staring at it trying to think of what life in it be like.
     
  15. Keyblade Master Roxas

    Keyblade Master Roxas Shake the Core.

    Sorahiko tried to stop her from running, he looked at Christopher and followed her. Did he say something bad, he didn't even know who yen-Sid is, but he saved him so he must be somebody powerful he thought to himself. And to Nicole Yen-Sid must be somebody who took care of her ever since she was little. Sorahiko sighed and ran after her. Sorahiko came upon a what looked like a mansion with vines everywhere..to him it looked familiar too, liked he have been their once...
    (He was born in Radiant Garden) but he felt like he belonged here like he has been their long ago..but he tried to remember but never....it gave him a shiver down his spine just thinking about it. The he saw a gate that was covered with vines and even more vines but it looked like Nicole already went inside the Mansion. He looked back and then back at the Mansion..should he go in? or should he just wait for Christopher and the girl? Sorahiko couldn't wait he wanted to see nicole and talk to her he wanted to know more..about Yen-Sid and why all of these strange things been happening around Twilight Town.
     
    Last edited: Jan 27, 2009
  16. Ventus

    Ventus Kickass Keyblader!

    Christopher sighed. Did he upset her at all? He suddenly remember, putting his left hand on her right shoulder.
    "I'm such an idiot!" he shouted, annoyed at himself. Chris ran towards the girl and slowly put her in his arms. She was still out.
    He carefully ran down the streets and followed Sorahiko's faint image, who was running through the forest. Being careful, not tripping over the long stems of the trees, he followed Sorahiko and then he stopped but as Chris was about to stand next to him, he started to run again.
    "Hey, Sorahiko, wait up!"
    Chris suddenly remembered his brother. He needed Chris' help.
    "I need to go find my brother....I haven't got time for this. Why did she have to go and run off!" he exclaimed, looking at the mansion, still holding the girl, in his hands.
     
  17. LivingDeath

    LivingDeath Dormina'd

    Xarret looked to Sorahiko who had a keyblade. "I knew that you are keyblade chosens. But still can't use it." he smiled when he remembered what test he give to Sorahiko when that happened. It was oblivion keyblade that he 'borrow' to Sorahiko. Only to add seasoning that called 'bravery' to him. Then he thought 'so what should i do next? Should i add more seasoning to his heart?'
     
  18. Keyblade Master Roxas

    Keyblade Master Roxas Shake the Core.

    Sorahiko stopped running he heard Christopher but he kept running. He stopped in front of some stair cases that was covered in dust, looked very old broken pieces on the flat flooring of the mansion. He touched it and dust went into his nose...he couched a couple times. And he was yelling out Nicole name. But no answer. "Wh-where is she" Sorahiko said to himself, now he was worried for her..what if something happened to her..he couldn't do anything to save her...he was thinking now thinking about the strange cloaked man he saw. He shook his head and looked around the mansion searching for Nicole.
     
  19. Ventus

    Ventus Kickass Keyblader!

    Chris walked inside and saw Sorahiko, checking to see if Nicole was inside the mansion.
    "Okay, Sora, I'll check the garden"
    Chris walked over to the glass doors and opened them. The dust overwhelmed his sense of smell and he blew his nose to get the dust out. As he entered inside, he breathed and smiled. It was very musky in there.
    Still carrying the girl in his arms, he walked around the garden but she was nowhere in sight. Chris saw a wall at the end of the garden.
    "I wonder if she's there"
    He put the girl down and carried her around his shoulders. He climbed up and felt the girl let go of his shoulders, due to gravity. He grabbed her by the stomach and placed her onto the ground below, very slowly, being careful, not to harm her. He walked with the girl in his arms again, for around twenty minutes and Chris saw Nicole, looking at a burnt down house.
    "Nicole, I'm sorry....." he said, walking upto her.
     
    Last edited: Jan 27, 2009
  20. Keyblade Master Roxas

    Keyblade Master Roxas Shake the Core.

    Sorahiko smiled a weak smile, and he went up the stairs, he saw that their was a door on the side of the staircase, he looked at it and it was a big door covered in vines and spiders three or four spiders where crawling their where like the size of a fist. Sorahiko shrieked and too off his shoe and killed them, he touched the vines and it sting him, it burned of of course because they had torn ALL OVER IT! though they where really tiny he couldn't see them. Sorahiko didn't care about the pain he just wanted to get threw those dumb vines, he did until he saw a white door it looked very old. It was open! he entered it and their was a long dining table chips of its peices where on the floor and dust was everywhere, he saw a window and it's curtains where torn off he saw a little piece of it laying on the table..."W-What is this place....? It looks really familiar...." Sorahiko looked around and saw piles and piles of old pictures the drawings where fading like it have been drawn years ago. Sorahiko looked at the first pile and he saw what looked like a boy with three people. He looked at it closely and saw that the boy in the middle looked like him but....different. Sorahiko gasped and he started to cough he couldn't stop coughing the dust was getting inside of him, he ran out of the room and closed the door real shut. "Who..who was that....?" Sorahiko put his hand on his heart which was beating really fast, now he really wanted to see Nicole and Christopher.
     
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