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Kingdom Hearts II: Neo Organization XIII (O.O.C. & S.U.)

Discussion in 'Archive' started by Reonarudo Butsuchiru, Oct 7, 2009.

  1. Roxotho

    Roxotho Banned

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    (Just imagine longer white hair, Whiter eyes, not as creepy looking)
    Name: Garenx
    True Name: Ragen
    Height: 5' 8"
    Weight: 155 lbs
    Gender: Male
    Age: 19
    Faction: Neo Organization XIII
    Member Title: The Fading Light
    Member Number: VIII
    Birthplace: Twilight Town
    Personal Treasure(s): Friends, His own Strength
    Likes: Training with Fellow Members
    Dislikes: Heartless, His own Memories
    Weapon(s): Twin Longswords that are a bright white in color, they seem to reflect any light that hits them
    Ability: Offensive Light Magic (Beams, Energy Spheres) and Defensive Light Magic (Curing, Force Fields), however using it drains his strength
    Lesser Nobody: Assassin
    Ultima Form: After being consumed with the saddness and pain of his own memories, he transforms into a being giving off intense light. Though all that changes in appearance is that he gains two angelic white wings and dons a white cloak instead of a black one, his powers no longer drain him, in fact, it seems that the more he uses them, the stronger he gets. While he is faster and stronger, he cannot seem to fully control his new powers.
    Bio: Ragen lived a happy life, he had many friends, he was a kind person, and he was madly in love, spending all of his days with her.....This was not to last.
    When the Hollowed attacked his home, he saw the love of life die before his own eyes. as he listen to her last words, she was cut off by fading into darkness. saddened by his loss and tormented in not knowing what his love's last words were, he removed his own heart, hoping to free himself of emotions. then Garenx was born. he joined the organization not because he wanted to create Kingdom Hearts, but hoping that in doing so, they could destroy all heartless and bring the love of his life back to life. he is never able to sleep, because in doing so, he has nightmares of the last memories he has as a person. though he smiles and laughs with other members, he is often depressed, unable to shake the memories weighing down on him. when fighting against the heartless, he goes all out, only pausing to heal and shield his fellow members, though doing so drains him, he still does this because he shudders at the thought of losing more people who are close to him, and does not want it to happen again.
     
  2. You're the first to actually follow the template. Good work and you're accepted!
     
  3. Roxotho

    Roxotho Banned

    OOO!
    I thought of another one for the Hollowed! I'll leave the # blank and u can decide, i don't really care:

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    just picture this except with a more mischeveous look and a darker shade of red hair
    Name: Jeantress
    True Name: Jean
    Height: 5' 7"
    Weight: 135 lbs
    Gender: Female
    Age: 17
    Faction: The Hollowed
    Member Title: The Taunting Mirror
    Member Number: XII
    Birthplace: Radiant Garden
    Personal Treasure(s): Her strength over others
    Likes: Taunting people, making fun of people, humiliating people
    Dislikes: being taunted, being made fun of, being humiliated
    Weapon(s): A tall narrow shield with a mirror on it.
    Ability: Dark Reflect Magic (no, she doesn't NEED to use her sheild to use Reflect magic)
    Ultima Form: Her body appears to be made of glass, except not as brittle, any projectile will bounce back and home in, so close combat it the only choice. she also uses the moves of her foes, much like a mirror.
    Bio: Always the butt of everyone's jokes, when she became a member of the Hollowed, she vowed to never again be the tauntee, but be the taunter. She joined the Hollowed in hopes to become even stronger. She also appears to know Garenx, however he does not know her.
     
    Last edited: Nov 10, 2009
  4. All right then she can be number 12, when you get back, you need to edit her member number. Other than that, she is accepted.
     
  5. dualblade

    dualblade Break!

    Hey,SB,can you give a discription of Sand Assassin heartless?Thats what your post read,and I have never heard of them.If they are from 358/2,you can just say they are and I will have an easier time looking them up,otherwise can we have a description of what they do?Unless you had it in your profile...
     
  6. EtherealSummoner

    EtherealSummoner Lamentations 3:22-26

    Oh. Those are new heartless that I've made up. They actually have a more, slicker body version & they actually use their daggers & lethal poison breaks to take out a large chunk out of their opponents health. They are more nimble & they can also run on walls & track down enemies. Actually, the idea came from Prince of Persia & I started to make a design in my mind as I took one of the enemies from that game & started to make some changes in it's powers. It have more power, but they are slower.
     
  7. dualblade

    dualblade Break!

    Hmm,can I have a physical description?Or atleast the type of heartless that they have a slicker body version of?
     
  8. Yeah about that summonerbrandon that's a problem. You cannot create a new heartless as we cannot create a new lesser nobody. You're gonna have to edit your post.
     
  9. EtherealSummoner

    EtherealSummoner Lamentations 3:22-26

    Ok. I'll just replace them with another heartless.
     
  10. Make sure it's one that we all know of, thanks summonerbrandon.
     
  11. EtherealSummoner

    EtherealSummoner Lamentations 3:22-26

    I've changed aorund the heartless.
     
  12. Cameron

    Cameron New Member

    Now as checked Brandon's profile again, is a character allowed to have three stages? Like all the others only got normal and ultima, but Siah has a something like "trance" form too.
     
  13. EtherealSummoner

    EtherealSummoner Lamentations 3:22-26

    I don't think it'll be a problem. I mean, look at Ansem. He had three stages himself. Her Trance form is a little bit more powerful than her regular form, but not strong than her Ultima form. She's not unleashing her full potential in Trance form.
     
  14. Cameron

    Cameron New Member

    Ah. I've got no problem with it then, but lets Reo decide about it.
     
  15. Well, I didn't say anything about another form other than an Ultima though summonerbrandon, you can list it as part of your characters ability though. Also for a further note, Ultima Forms shouldn't be released now, remember we are just starting and only in the first chapter, we got 12 more to go.
     
  16. EtherealSummoner

    EtherealSummoner Lamentations 3:22-26

    XD I wasn't going to make Mistress Siah unleash her ultima form already. That's just not good for this rp. Trance form is a form ability that she can access to taht's all to herself, but is not Ultima form.
     
  17. All right, just make sure you edit that into her abilities in your character template.
     
  18. EtherealSummoner

    EtherealSummoner Lamentations 3:22-26

    -___- Since Roxotho went & got his butt banned (Don't ask me how he got banned. I don't know myself.), may one of us control his character or make one in his place? Also, may I make a Neo Organization member? XD This is to make things so interesting.
     
  19. Well for one, that would be a "no" for the control of anyone's character, but we do need more people involved. So as a "royal decree," all characters with users with no posts in about 3-4 weeks is assumed "abandoned," so that's a "yes" but you need to specify which characters you want to control but you only get one. Also, yes, you may make another character for the Neo Organization summonbrandon but make sure you cover the rules and I think the only numbers available are 10-12. There are three spots left for the Hollowed.
     
  20. Cameron

    Cameron New Member

    ignore this.
     
    Last edited: Nov 14, 2009

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