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Kingdom hearts Fan Fic

Discussion in 'Traditional' started by Rhodis=Jynx, Jun 20, 2008.

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  1. Rhodis=Jynx

    Rhodis=Jynx New Member

    Oh, thanks....My spell check is allways driving me Crazy with these names...........
     
  2. 1-up salesman

    1-up salesman New Member

    lol please make another chapter I want to read some more of this brilliant fic.
     
  3. Rhodis=Jynx

    Rhodis=Jynx New Member

    I'm blushing......... yeah not really but thanks. Oh by the way, it's dude.

    Chapter 7

    “Well done Saix.” Xenroc said sitting besides Jynx and Xigbar.
    “I wish you would have let me kill them.” Saix said looking at Xenroc.
    “If you do, we will return you to the way you were. A lowly dusk. Do you want that?” Xenroc said his metal claw glowed ominously.
    “Rhodis, Aroth, Erah. Are you there!” Sora’s shaken voice said over the speakers.
    “Yes, we are all here Sora. What is it.” Rhodis said, his voice still a little choked.
    “We were just attacked.”
    “The Organization?”
    Sora stayed quite for a long time.
    “We need to land and talk.”​
    The ride was very quite on both ships with not so much as a whisper between any of them. Rhodis’s visions were coming true. A war was brewing and there was nothing they could do about it.

    “Sora, This is Rhodis. There is a simple planet up ahead. We will land there.” The darkness of space hugged the ships tightly as they flew towards another unknown planet with an unknown future. The planet slowly grew into being ahead of them, mostly green the planet seemed very healthy.
    “Warning, enemy gummy ships approaching Warning, Warning.” The computer said in a faint woman’s voice.
    “Perfect. Battle stations! Aroth, you take front guns, Erah you take rear.” Rhodis ordered holding the controls firmly in his hand.
    “Rhodis!” Soras voice yelled. “Look out! Another one of them is........” Sora’s voice cracked and sizzled into static but Rhodis had a bad feeling that he knew what he meant.
    “Erah, you take front guns Aroth get up and draw your keyblade.” Rhodis demanded pushing the ships throttle into full.
    Sora drew his Keyblade again and ordered Riku to charge forward.
    “What is it now?” Riku asked a bit tired and agitated.
    “Marluxia’s right beside us.” Sora said not hiding the grating hatred in his voice.
    “Marluxia went alone?” Toxnes asked Xenroc sitting in the white throne room.
    “No sir, he took Luxard with him.” Jynx said sitting sideways in his white throne. Toxnes nodded slightly and faced a stone door.
    “Who destroyed Glacial?” Toxnes asked staring at the door.
    “That would be Hexar my liege.” Came a strong voice.
    “Paxin? When did you get in here?” Xenroc said standing up quickly and clicking his claw.
    “I never left, I was told to stay here till told otherwise, I would never disobey.” The tall nobody fell to one knee before his leader.
    “Hmmm, Very good. I have a test for you. Luxard and Marluxia are about to fight Aroth and the others. See to it only one of them returns alive.” Jynx said his eyes brightly shining.
    “As you command.” Paxin stood back up and started into a portal.
    “Not yet! First we need to disguise you as a normal person for the world they are headed to.” Jynx slid off his throne and floated to the ground. A small wisp of purple light shone on his fingers.
    “What were you before you died?”
    “I don’t remember.”
    “Good, but remember not to use your organization name.”
     
  4. 1-up salesman

    1-up salesman New Member

    Cool!
    25 characters?
     
  5. Rhodis=Jynx

    Rhodis=Jynx New Member

    Keyblade weilders

    Sora
    Kairi
    Riku
    Erah
    Aroth
    Rhodis
    ?????

    Neo Orginazation

    Toxnes
    Dexath
    Xydroh
    Exaros
    Hexar
    Rixcu
    Mexsan
    Paxin
    Xenroc
    Cexid
    Vivex
    Muertox
    Jynx


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    Then we have random charecters from difrent worlds so....... alot more than 25
     
  6. Rhodis=Jynx

    Rhodis=Jynx New Member

    I am releasing the names of a few of the worlds i'll be visiting in this fan fic.
    The book Dragonlance, planet Krynn
    Advent Children, whole planet and a little space.....
    The legend of the sleepy hollow, Sleepy hollow
    The Labrynth, ......labrynth

    Chapter 8

    “Fire!” Rhodis yelled as the gummy ships swarmed towards their ship.
    “I am firing!” Erah yelled pulling the trigger and praying that she hit something. Rhodis eyed the darkness around the ship looking for a sign of their new attacker.
    “Rhodis.” Erah said.
    “Not now.”
    “Rhodis!”
    “I said not now!”
    “RHODIS”
    “What!”
    “We are going to crash.” Erah said pointing to the planet zooming in on them.
    “Holy........”
    “Duck you two.” Aroth yelled jumping over them pushing them down just as they hit the atmosphere. The ship around them shook and fell apart. The screen flashed and shattered sending glass all over the ship. Rhodis and Aroth covered their necks and all of Erah below them.
    “Reflectaga!” Erah cried and a small mirror like shield formed around them just in time as they smashed into the ground.
    “Good...” Rhodis said but at that moment the lights went out. “......Night.” Sparks sprayed every now and then lighting the remains of the ship little by little.
    “You alive in their.” Called a strong voice
    “We can’t find where we are.” Rhodis called to the voice.
    “I’ll go get help. Raist! Brother! There is something strange here they need help.” The voice said to an unseen brother. Sparks flew again eliminating a way to the door.
    “Aroth, Erah, you guys ok?” Rhodis said slowly standing up.
    “yeah I’m fine.” Erah said staggering up.
    “I’m ok.” Aroth said slowly making his way up.
    “Are you guys still ok in there!” Came the strong voice.
    “Yes!” Erah yelled.
    “Stand back, Raist can you get them out?” The voice said to its brother. They all listened for an answer but instead heard a strange language like the speaking of a spider. The voice grew and raised musically chanting and repeating itself.
    “Stand Back!” The strong voice yelled. Soon after this a large bolt of lightning tore through the ship cutting a hole large enough for them to fit through opened in the ship. Light poured in through the hole, but it was soon blocked out by the head of an enormous man.
    “Hello. You guys ok?” The large head called.
    “yeah. I think so, we are coming out now.” Aroth said walking slowly and deliberately toward the hole. Erah and Rhodis followed close behind him moving through the rubble towards the light.
    “Raist! I don’t think their from Krynn!” The large head said moving out of the light.
    “No brother, they are not.” Came a cold and raspy voice. All three keyblade wielders stopped in their tracks.
    “Before we come out. Who are you?” Aroth said maybe ten feet from the hole.
    “I am Caramon and this is my brother Raistlin. Who are you?” The large voice said.
    “Brother. Their names are tired, hungry and weary. I would advise you not pester them.” Raistlin snapped coldly at his brother. The three keyblade wielders exchanged glances then Aroth continued to climb out of the ruined ship. The sun blinded him temporarily but when his eyes adjusted he knew something was wrong.
    “Why isn’t there a crowd here?” Aroth said looking for the two people.
    “Tanis and Sturm are keeping them back.” Called Caramon from beside him. Aroth turned and faced a man as tall as him but at least twice as muscular. The man Caramon had dark brown hair and strong facial features. He dressed in very dirty cloths that would fit in years ago. He wore plate mail armor that was dented in many places and a sword with dried green blood on it.
    “Aroth, what dose he look li......ke oh my god!” Rhodis said looking at the masculine Caramon. Rhodis is exactly six foot three and he stands only three inches taller than Caramon but three of Rhodis side by side would equal the mans broad shoulders.
    “AHHHHHHH!” Erah screamed behind them.
     
  7. KnuXl3s

    KnuXl3s New Member

    xenroc is my Kh character in this fan fic thats right I am in this

    If you dont belive me ask the writer
     
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  8. Rhodis=Jynx

    Rhodis=Jynx New Member

    o_O.......yes he is the person Xenroc is based off of.........I feel like being nice and posting another chapter......
     
  9. Rhodis=Jynx

    Rhodis=Jynx New Member

    Chapter 9

    All three men turned around with weapons drawn. Erah stared at a man wearing blood red robes holding a plain wooden staff with a disembodied claw holding a crystal ball.
    “Who are you!?” Aroth shouted pointing his giant black keyblade at the man.
    “Stop please stop.” Caramon pleaded. “This is my brother Raistlin.” The large man said sheathing his sword and stepping between them. Aroth and Rhodis looked at the red robed man a few minutes more than vanished their keyblades.
    “Aww, Magic! Just like yours Raistlin.” Caramon said staring at the men’s hands.
    “No! Just Keyblades.” Called a sinister voice from behind them. Everyone turned and faced the voice and standing on the wreckage of the ship was Luxard.
    “You!” Rhodis yelled.
    “Me!” Luxard returned jumping down from the wreckage drawing a handful of cards and hurling them at Aroth.
    “Not so fast.” Aroth grinned while slicing the cards in half. Luxard landed softly than flipped a card out of the deck and threw it to the ground.
    “Ace of hearts!” He cried than from the card a giant snake like heartless grew from the card.
    “Selthium Balluritso Hebrisum Kaskara!” Erah chanted over and over. Beside her the red robed man began a chant of his own. Both sets of spidery words grew and shrank sounding like a choir of spiders.
    “Firarga!” yelled Rhodis and a fireball shot out of his keyblade hitting the heartless but doing little damage. It reared back a moment than lurched forward and struck at Rhodis. Aroth took the moment to cut for the beasts head bring his giant blade down towards its skull. The giant heartless turned quickly and avoided the blow but also stopped its own strike at Rhodis.
    “Come on Keyblade wielders’ kill the heartless.” Luxard taunted. He smiled slyly and watched his beast strike again and again each time narrowly missing its mark.
    “NOW!” Erah yelled and a bright green flash filled the sky around them. When the light dimmed Aroth and Rhodis each had a green glow on them. The men jumped at the beast and stabbed forward. It quickly slithered out of the way finding itself being stabbed in the back. The giant heartless looked down and Caramon had sunk his sword in the giant beast.
    “That one you can kill.” Luxard said coolly. The heartless hissed than launched forward towards the man. In that split second Raistlin stopped chanting and from his hand darts of flame launched towards the snake and Luxard. The giant beast stuck his own body in the way to block the shots to Luxard. The flame hit it and burned deep into its dark core. The heartless roared and screamed.
    “Farewell!” Both Rhodis and Aroth said from behind the snakes burning body. Both men still were glowing green when they preformed a double sonic and sliced straight through the snake. It Roared in agony than vanished releasing a heart into the sky.
    “Your turn Luxard.” All three keyblade wielders’ said in unison.
     
  10. 1-up salesman

    1-up salesman New Member

    Who are these Raistlin and Caramon guys?!?!!!!!!!
     
  11. Rhodis=Jynx

    Rhodis=Jynx New Member

    Two charecters in this world of kryn. If anyone here reads Dragonlance then they would know.
     
  12. 1-up salesman

    1-up salesman New Member

    RRRGGHHH!!!!!!
    Please make worlds that have characters that I am actually familiar with!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    (Nah)
     
  13. Rhodis=Jynx

    Rhodis=Jynx New Member

    I am releasing the names of a few of the worlds i'll be visiting in this fan fic.
    The book Dragonlance, planet Krynn
    Advent Children, whole planet and a little space.....
    The legend of the sleepy hollow, Sleepy hollow
    The Labrynth, ......labrynth
    Somthing wicked this way comes, the carnival
     
  14. KnuXl3s

    KnuXl3s New Member

    huh those sound like kewl levels

    hey i read dragonlance and I have seen the movies and I know some stuff from what u tell me
     
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  15. Rhodis=Jynx

    Rhodis=Jynx New Member

    I am sick so I had time to come online and post another chapter......

    Chapter 10

    Sora and Riku watched helplessly as the other ship crashed on the planet. Sora pulled up slightly and set them down maybe a mile away from the wreckage.
    “We gotta go help them.” Riku said jumping out of his seat and running to the gummy ships door. When he opened it Marluxia walked in.
    “Hello Sora.” Marluxia said brandishing his scythe.
    “We don’t have time for this.” Sora yelled running at Marluxia.
    “Fine, but I’ll see you later.” Marluxia said than without a word he stepped back and vanished.
    “Why did he just leave without fighting?” Kiari asked running up to Sora.
    “He knows he doesn’t need to fight, he is just toying with us.” Sora said angrily as he and Kiari continued to walk out of the ship and head towards the wreck.
    “Riku.” Called a voice inside his head. “You know she doesn’t love you. You gave into the darkness. Remember?” Riku smiled.
    “Yeah, but if you don’t remember, I defeated the darkness both within me and within Sora.” Riku smiled than ran to catch up with Sora.
    “She won’t take your ring. I have peered inside her and I know you two will never marry.” The voice taunted.
    “Shut up Xehanort.”
    Marluxia smiled from a distance. Luxard was going to die and he didn’t even need to dirty his hands. Paxin was on his way and with him comes death.
    “Hexar, ‘The Screaming Silence’. “ Exaro said looking down at the little girl in the organization attire. “We must teach you some self control. you can’t just destroy planets because you just want to.” She didn’t speak, she just looked at her red ball.
    “No, I am not angry. Why would you think that?” He asked and yet again she said nothing.
    “Ah! You really think I care about what Jynx says. He only thinks about this Rhodis. I am more concerned with getting us our hearts back.” He sat down beside her and put his arm on her shoulder.
    “Of course I will help you find your family.” He said grinning. “And I’ll help you kill Sora just like you wanted.”
    Luxard fought with all his might but he was nothing compared to the strength of the five heroes. No matter how he tried to win they stopped him. He was running low on cards and Ideas.
    “Luxard, save us the trouble. Just transform like Siax did.” Rhodis said striking Luxard on the knees breaking them.
    “You don’t want that.” Luxard said refusing to fall.
    “Blizaga!” Erah yelled smacking him in the chest with an ice missile.
    “I think we do.” Aroth said pointing his keyblade to Luxords thought.
    “Fine.” Luxard whispered than the cards he had left sprang out of the deck and surrounded him. He didn’t make a noise other than harsh breathing underneath his cocoon of cards.
     
  16. KnuXl3s

    KnuXl3s New Member

    hmm I like this chapter
     
  17. 1-up salesman

    1-up salesman New Member

    That was good!
     
  18. Rhodis=Jynx

    Rhodis=Jynx New Member

    I have nothing better to do, so i'll post another chapter

    Chapter 11

    “Caramon, get Tanis and the others. We are going to need them.” Raistlin said his voice had a tint of urgency in it. His brother didn’t wait to ask any questions but ran as fast as his legs would carry him.
    “What’s wrong wizard?” Erah asked him.
    “I feel like I did when Solace was attacked by a red.” Raistlin said his voice distant and detached.
    “A red what?” She asked.
    “Dragon.” The cocoon broke apart and a large white and grey mass flew out of the spot where it had been. Flying before them was a monster half man and half dragon.
    “By the gods!” Came Caramons voice. “A flying Draconan!”
    “I warned you! I told you that if transformed you wouldn’t want it.” Luxord screamed in obvious pain. His body continued to shift and shake violently but it never made a lasting change.
    “Caramon! Get the others now!” Raistlin yelled to his brother and he began to chant again.
    “You three protect him till I get back o.k.?” The large man asked before he started to run.
    “Fine.” Erah said rolling in front of the red robed man. Luxord heard his chanting a swooped low for the attack. His left hand had changed into a claw which he attempted to use as a weapon but the swipe was blocked by Aroths Great keyblade. Instinct kicked in and Luxords claw grabed the blade and lifted the key and Aroth into the air.
    Aroth held the handle tightly till they were nearly twenty feet up. Aroth swung himself up and kicked Luxord in the chin. Luxord didn’t flinch but instead hurled both Aroth and his key to the ground.
    “Gravaga!” ‘Aroth yelled as he fell pulling the transformed Luxord with him.
    “Pheather Fall!” Raistlin said and the orb on his staff glowed brightly for a moment. Aroths decent slowed to a slow glide. Luxord, though, didn’t slow down. He swooped straight through the Gravaga and struck the mage in the arm. Blood splattered onto the ground.
    “I am too tired to cast another spell. The next one will kill me.” The bleeding mage said.
    “Good, one less cynical monster on Krynn.” Grunted a thick accented man in full armor. His armor had a rose etched into the front of it.
    “Raistlin!” Caramon yelled running up to his brother who shunned him off and pointed to Luxord.
    “Kill him brother, before he kills us all.” The mage hissed than he began to cough roughly.
    “I can help, let me cure him.” Erah offered moving up to the two.
    “No!” The mage gasped. “My curse is my own. I chose it for my power. Let me be!” His brother gave him a worried look that was smacked off his face as Luxord dived again slashing the big mans face.
    “Tanis! I have never seen a draconan like this before. How about you Flint. Flint! Stop staring like that he may think it is rude.” A small pointed eared man said jumping up in down in front of the man in armor, a dwarf and a man with pointed ears and a red beard.
    Luxord flew up higher than before and smiled a sharp tooth grin. He yelled out and a large surge of power flowed to his body.
    “Keyblade wielders! I was holding back. Witness my true form!” He yelled hysterically.
    “Luxord don’t! It will kill you to transform!” Yelled a familiar voice. Sora ran up to the scene bringing Kiari and Riku with him. Luxord ignored Soras cries to him and continued to summon his power.
    A bright surge of white light filled the air and when it dimmed flying high above them was a white dragon with the nobodies symbol on it’s chest.
     
  19. KnuXl3s

    KnuXl3s New Member

    Hmm this one was a little but besides that it was awesome good job dude
     
  20. Rhodis=Jynx

    Rhodis=Jynx New Member

    Sorry for the long pause but college has been a lot more time consuming then it should be :p....... I'll be back later bye
     
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