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ETERNAL SAGA TO THE DOOR...OOC and SU

Discussion in 'Archive' started by DESTATI, Oct 30, 2010.

  1. DESTATI

    DESTATI New Member

    Yes, if you consider a fresh one to be a new one.

    Again, I hope that my desires are understood as integral to the effectiveness of this story. Using new, fresh content is inspiring and also involves a more creative involvement in the process of developing the story itself. Please tell me if you think otherwise. I find it best to work with others who have a similar mentality to myself and wish to accommodate those who may not understand my reasoning.

    Oh, and by the way, I would greatly appreciate it if anyone could tell me how to delete a post. I am unfamiliar with the method of doing such on this site and acquire assistance!
     
    Last edited: Nov 3, 2010
  2. Moogle

    Moogle Well-Known Member

    Ah, I apologize. I forgot that only veteran members and up can delete their posts or something. Ask a mod ( light Blue, red, or Grandshadow) to delete them for you. Preferably one that is active. It might help to give them the post links directly.
     
  3. Zerieth

    Zerieth Head Game Reviewer

    *Tears of joy* At last, someone who cares about the quality of his role play. Ah thank the good lord.

    I will have one up soon. Also if its a double post your worried about the mods will get to it.
     
  4. Become

    Become The Pink Opaque Staff Member Moderator Content Writer

    I'll see what I can pull together then.
     
  5. Moogle

    Moogle Well-Known Member

    Name: Hisui
    Gender: Male
    Age: 19
    Personality: (Dominant-Realistic) Ascetic
    Appearance: His eyes are normally jade green in color, but they lose the color if his ability is activated. He keeps his jet-black hair short and spiked, though he tends to wear a hood over it. Speaking of hoods, he tends to wear thick, baggy hoodies combined with even baggier pants. This makes it nearly impossible to distinguish his true physical form, one that is very lean and fit, if a bit malnourished at times. He keeps himself this way in case he gets involved in fighting the monsters that plague the times.

    Bio:
    Hisui was a child born and raised in the Land of Dragons, though his name was different. His childhood, albeit plagued with fears of the Mongol raids, was happy one in his village in the mountains. His family was small, just him and two parents amongst the hundred inhabitants of the town. And life was good. However, one thing must be known before this tale goes on; You see, Hisui was born with a strange disease that left two black rings around both his wrists and his ankles. Try whatever the entire village might, nothing removed the bands. As time went on, they became a regular sight and the villagers forgot.

    And now, we must continue on with the darker part of our story. On the eve of his 13th birthday, Hisui woke up to a noise in his home. The boy knew that he should investigate, that he should stay in bed – but he went against his gut instinct and investigated anyways. He approached his parent’s room and found that a monster with glowing yellow eyes was above them, clutching a glowing object, later found to be a heart, in its hands. But at that point, his parents were no more, and the boy knew that he had to leave - leave the creature that seemed to sink into the very shadows and vanish and the disappearing bodies of his parents - and escape this unapproachable nightmare that beset him. And so he ran. And ran. And ran. Never looking back.

    Enter: the introduction

    Night fell harshly...

    Hisui awoke from a dirty mattress in a corner of a small hideout he and his friend lived in. Sitting up, Hisui stretched his arms in a yawn from the small nap he had taken. Looking around, he failed to see where his friend had gone to. Standing up, Hisui figured that he just went out for a walk or something. Looking to the cloth hung in the dugout room of theirs, Hisui felt like a walk himself and thought to find his friend amongst the streets of the little village he had ran off to away from that demon which had killed his parents that one night.
    Hisui knew that not many could sympathize with his situation. But his friend, being an orphan himself from a heartless attack near the time his own parents were taken, understood his plight as he shared in the pain and sorrow of loneliness.
    Walking out now, Hisui looked up at the moon with eyes shining a jade light from beneath dark spiky bangs under a black hoodie. Seeing the clouds roll by, he realized just how late it was. Looking concerned now, Hisui started pacing and turned a corner only to find.....

    YouTube - Kingdom Hearts Birth By Sleep - Dive Into The Heart ~ Destati

    Dark claws mercilessly grasping a heart....

    Hovering over a still body...deprived of the light....

    Seeing darkness only....but the shadows of the heartless....

    Eating away at the heart...growing stronger in the night


    Infuriated, Hisui's eyes shimmered in the night. The heartless looked up at him and pounced in an instant. Yet, the powers of the boy's eyes finally revealed themselves and saved him, as he turned to the sides of him seeing darkness evaporate in a flash of green light.

    Confused, Hisui knew not of what to do next. Stumbling back, he fell down shivering with the cold breeze on the paved road. Gazing now only on his poor friend before him fading away slowly, Hisui held his knees and sank into the night.

    Why is it me? It is always me!

    ...
    Hey, kid....It looks like you could use a hand....

    ....A heartless like that doesn't just attack anyone; you must be special for him to attack you.....


    Hisui turned around to see a man standing with a sword on his back with brown long hair flowing down. The twilight of the moon shaded with shadows hung on his face and streamed down his clothes. There, he looked like a mysterious hero.

    Hisui:
    Special...But, he attacked my...my friend here, too!


    ...
    Exactly...It wanted you to come looking for him...It tried to draw you out so that it could take you down and steal your heart for itself....That's why....you're special


    Hisui:
    But, why?


    ...
    It's because you have a strong heart: one that would make it stronger....


    Hisui:
    My heart is strong?


    In that moment, the man out stretched his hand...

    ...
    Yes....

    But....

    The heartless are bound to attack you again....

    It is not safe alone....

    Come with me.


    Hisui:
    What!? But, I don't even know your name! How can I go with you when I don't even know you?


    Leon:
    Name's Leon...

    If you're smart, you'll come with me...

    The choice is up to you....


    And so, the two went back to Leon's homeland: Radiant Garden. There, Leon trained Hisui. Now, a few years later, Hisui being 18 has joined the Radiant Garden committee with Leon, Yuffie, Cid, Merlin, and his apprentice Rexzo. Leon has been what Hisui had lost: a father and a mentor, one who would teach him the ways of the world with a stern hand - but a kind one as well. As time went by, he developed a strong rivalry with the only other one close to his age: Rexzo. And thus, they have a kinship that only rivals can have. Their ages make them the youngest members on the aging Committee.

    What adventures lie in wait for Hisui? Only the future will tell as the path fated for him to take unveils as the journey continues forth!

    Weapon: He has none that he needs.
    Abilities:
    Swordplay: Hisui is somewhat well versed in swordplay techniques, having been taught by Leon and company.
    Eyeforce – An incredible and special technique that relies on a combination of his arm’s tattoo and his eyes to direct a flow of magical power. He uses both his arms and eyes to direct the flow, and only when both the palm of his hand and his eyes are focused on the same location will it work. The tattoos mimic the eye’s shape on his palm (Or on the bottoms of his feet when the need arises).
    - Blank Force: The dormant state. His eyes are normal, but they are ready to be used at any time.
    - Point Force: The basic attack of Eyeforce. His eyes turn negative, if you will, losing the iris and flipping colors. I.E. the white part is black and the iris is white. In this form, the iris becomes a focused point, going as small as screw head. The tattoo on his palm becomes a black dot.
    - force:
     
    Last edited: Nov 25, 2010
  6. DESTATI

    DESTATI New Member

    I am excited. At the moment, I cannot spare too much time to comment and officially decide. I am sorry for the inconvenience, but I will find time tomorrow to do so. Please do not feel disheartened. Thank you.
     
  7. Moogle

    Moogle Well-Known Member

    'S alright. Just glad to know you're still alive and browsing this forum.
     
  8. DESTATI

    DESTATI New Member

    You would be told if I had planned to abandon this already. No, I am planning with Rexzo and will make time soon to approve and to start it, so that you all may see where we wish to go with things.

    Just be patient. Remember: I am not dead; just a little busy though.
     
  9. Destiny

    Destiny Guest

    I'm still interested in doing this RP, I'm just waiting for your reply to my pm involving something you and Rexzo were planning
     
  10. Rexzo

    Rexzo New Member

    At last, I come from behind the curtain I was hiding behind!

    Believe it or not I am a real person, not just a figment of DESTATI's imagination. Truly, I am sorry that I have not posted very much on this thread. It may not appear to be so, but I actually have been helping create ideas with my good friend here. I've read through everyones profiles and I'm delighted by the amount of hard work everyone is putting in. I am positive that this thread can become one of the very best KH RP's ever created with this amount of participation. I will be posting my profile shorty. Also, I will make sure to keep up with the pace of this thread. Anthony and I am trying to create the best storyline for everyone so please be patient. Thank you all, and have a nice day.

    By the way, I'm really the owner of this thread Anthony just thinks he is. A delusional man, really.
    :D
     
  11. DESTATI

    DESTATI New Member

    I will get to you at some time soon, but I am at the moment focused more on the immediate plot. So, be patient please.

    You didn't! I was thinking that you didn't really exist, but here you are! You hear the man.(besides the part about him being the owner: please, who posted first!)

    I will start with him by doing the intro rp for you all to see and then get to involving and working with you in the future. Still, my point is for you all to witness how things should be run, so pay attention. Again, I am sorry I haven't had the most time for this as of late. Please stay involved!
     
  12. Moogle

    Moogle Well-Known Member

    Once again, it is good to know you still exist and haven't forgotten about this.

    /on standby
     
  13. Destiny

    Destiny Guest

    I want to point out, for other's other than DESTATI and Rexzo who already know, I did not create this amazing well thought out character. This character was made by DESTATI and I was asked if I could control this character and play her role in the role play.

    Name:
    Airi

    Ai:love, affection combined with
    Ri: pearl, jasmine

    In her name, purity, kindness, and love are stressed as apart of her essence as a character.

    (Also, I think it is quite humorous that I just thought of this name and then realized, "Oh! It's Kairi without the K but with a completely different meaning!")

    Theme:
    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MS5eSjCI69Q

    Age:
    18

    Nature:
    Sweet and affectionate, insightful and considerate, pure and uncompromising, willful but not always ready to be brave but always passionate

    Origins/History:

    As anyone would guess, long after their adventures, Sora and Kairi returned to Destiny Island once more and raised a child in the town close to the sea...the same town the three in their youth lived in and departed from in play and adventure.
    Resembling more like her mother, Airi has long hair with spiky bangs and tips that sway in the breeze, brown just like her father, but shaped just like her mother except that she wears a pin in her hair with a pink pearl shining in the sun. Her skin from her birth was flawless not unlike a pearl as she is named; so smooth and even colored. Airi's soft, light voice as well as her appearance in general reflect the purity of her spirit and the kind essence she exudes from day to day.
    Being the daughter of both a chosen key blade hero and master and as well even more importantly being the daughter of a Princess of Light, Airi was born special into a world of lingering light so beautiful and pure in her heart alone. Beyond her gaze lay mysterious and awesome things that she saw as beyond corruption, so she naturally never doubted their purity.
    Living in a world without darkness before her, the new Princess of Light, Airi, heard of all the tales of the great saga from Sora and Kairi's memories with reverence and fondness. Being unable to see the things they saw, she asked many questions with the most passions seen in a child and sought above anything else to witness Kingdom Hearts for herself along with the many other worlds out there.
    Thus, great drive as well as great sorrow grew in Airi as she escaped from time to time playing with others hollowly at Destiny Island. Without inspiring hearts and curiosity like her own, she grew older and older looking out to the sea waiting for something, just something, to take her off her feet in adventure. She just felt it in her but thought little of her own sorrow and worry. Just believing in the fate left for her, her own destiny, bequeathed by her parents as the new Princess of Light with a purity anew in the world, Airi looked to the blue sea and sky watching the clouds and waves as they passed by and washed up on the shore....

    A girl stood before the sea. Her long sleeves swayed in the cool ocean breeze as her hair as well breathed the sea air. A necklace also arose somewhat in the cool wind. Star shaped, it had been given to her by her parents as apart of an oath that she would go wherever her heart guided(Huhuh...Oathkeeper key chain made necklace)Gazing at the setting crown of the world and the red shining rays emitted around the horizon, a tear drop fell from a cheek to the sands to be swallowed by the sea waves into a new, larger world of mysteries and unfathomable beauty. The sound of the ocean echoed destiny...the setting sun: the holy richness of life offered to her beyond the horizon. Standing before the waves that she hoped would take her away, the trees above rattled like jail bars, holding her in a prion surrounded by water. In her hands lay a clear bottle with something inside turned to the ocean.

    A wild boy with spiky red hair similar to his personality squinted at something blue and white in the distance much like the peaceful blue sky and the soft white clouds over head. Seeing now that it was apparently someone standing alone before the waves, he called to his friends just hanging around him ready to depart from the Island to their homes.

    Who's that?

    Hey, guys! Do ya know that girl over there?

    A few turned to see her themselves...

    Oh, her? She's always standing near the sea just looking out. But, you wouldn't know, Saji. This is your first day and all! said a brown haired sporty boy

    Oh...she looks kinda lonely though... thought the red haired one

    Don't worry! You'll get to meet everyone around here! No use worrying about her though...She just stands there....and stands there....

    WELL! I'll go talk to her! Maybe she's nice.

    Hops over the high rise neglecting to take the wooden stairs to the beach...

    Hey! How do you know she wants anything to do with us?! LEAVE HER BE!

    The red haired boy just ran and turned his head back to retort.

    There's no point in just standing around wondering! I'll find out for ya!

    Turning back around, the boy ran while his other friends just scoffed and turned away whispering to themselves that maybe it wasn't a good idea to invite him to the Island.

    Stopping, the boy was startled with a sniffling nose and thought the wind was playing tricks on him.

    At his pause, the girl's face turned around to see him. Seeing her, the boy gasped...

    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MS5eSjCI69Q

    Beauty and passions welled in an eye.
    Shining forth the gracious light bequeathed so that it may never die..
    Radiant and pure in the heart of a princess divine
    With angelic tears cried by the heart of the ethereal deprived.

    Why's she crying?

    At the moment he saw her face, the smile and the shining light blue eyes radiated in the sun as the flowing tears glistened. The pearl as well shined amongst the light of the eclipsed sun hiding behind her setting and fading below the horizon. Holding in her hand lay a bottle with what looked like a note inside. Staring at it, the boy was trying to figure out the significance when he noticed her look surprised at something in the distance. Turning around he saw what she had noticed: his friends leaving.

    Immediately, without turning back, the red haired boy ran back and called out to them.

    Wait!

    Hey, guys! Wait up!


    The girl just managed to wave and smile at them though they never looked back at her. Waiting for a moment in though, she then realized she still held the bottle in her hands. Turning back around in the sun, she held up the bottle as the sun reflected her face and then turning it the note inside.

    Dropping the bottle, she knelt down and pushed it further so that the receding waves would take it where it might be read. She stood back up and then whipping away the tear, watched the bottle shining softly now recede with the waves into the far sea, cold and dark as the sun fully set on another day...another day....
     
  14. DESTATI

    DESTATI New Member

    Oh boy will you guys be excited...

    What remains waiting will be unraveled shortly....

    We are in the mass planning stage....much will reveal itself soon enough!

    Do not despair!
     
  15. Rexzo

    Rexzo New Member

    Name: Rexzo

    Age: 19

    Race: Human

    Position: Outcast, "Searching"

    Alignment: Neutral

    Weapon: A vast knowledge of science and magic far beyond his years.

    Abilities: Nothing(physically) out of the ordinary. Intelligent and analytical.

    Physical Description: A normal golden haired man. His pupils are abnormally big, taking up most of his eye, and his physique is normal. Once again, nothing special too special.

    Clothing: White lotus robes, covering almost his whole body.

    Personality: Lost. Always thinking of why. Kind, and normally accepting but not all the time. Can become very defensive.

    History: No one knows. He wonders the streets of Radiant Garden searching. People don't even recognize him. He spends most of his time on the top of a very large hill. Looking over the vast emptiness of the Great Maw. There he meditates and thinks. One place he can call home.​
     
  16. DESTATI

    DESTATI New Member

    @Rexzo

    Good but include radiant garden committee info, with apprenticeship info, and his relationship with Hisui. Also put theme music please

    As well, make sure you've updated your profile thread too

    Make sure to send me segment also
     

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