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Divine Magic OOC

Discussion in 'Archive' started by Zerieth, Dec 2, 2009.

  1. Answer Man

    Answer Man Man I'm Awesome

    name:Z
    age: 14
    race:senz
    affinty: earth
    bio: never knew his parents, always been a wandered till he found his powers, after that he went to school to learn how to use them and master them. Never understood why the gods made the earth like this or why there was war and history lost. he's heard about the two sides in the war and has chosen to stay out of it. one of his biggest dreams is to meet the gods and ask them where and who are his parents and why they didn't want him. till he found a very strange and old book, that if anybody found out about, they would kill.
    pic:http://s.bebo.com/app-image/7932920...quizzaz.com/img/q/u/08/04/08/earth_bender.jpg
    how he is: go with the flow guy, easy to get along with, raley gets mad, loves to make new friends becomes strong when close friends or any are in danger, and never lies.
     
  2. GrandShadow

    GrandShadow I accept your challange.

    Name: Sendo
    Age: 20
    Race: Senz
    Appearance:
    [​IMG]

    Abilities: As a Senz, Sendo specializes in elemental magic, particularly the branch of Fire. Even within Fire magic he specializes, with spells that create a manipulate lightning. Overall he has a mastery over that magic to such an extent he prefers to be called a lightning mage. The rest of his magic is pathetically weak and he usually forgets he can even do it.

    Personality: Sendo is kind and loyal. He dislikes killing though he won't hesitate to do so when the situation calls for it. He's stubbern to a point and always insists upon being called a lightning mage. He's occasionally forgetful of names but does his best to remember. He has a small case of amnesia, he can't remember anything from before he joined the mages school 10 years ago.

    Bio: Most he doesn't even know himself. The first thing he remembers is waking up on the schools doorstep. When he showed the ability to use magic they admitted him and began training him. Overall his spells were weak but he made up for his strength with his ingenuity. He eventually passed and is currently traveling with a few other graduates. Secretly he hopes to discover about his past. Nobody else knows this though because they don't even know he doesn't remember it.
     
  3. EtherealSummoner

    EtherealSummoner Lamentations 3:22-26

    I might join. If I do, then I will choose either a Seance or a Reen.
     
  4. Zerieth

    Zerieth Head Game Reviewer

    I feel that we have enough people to start. More will be accepted, but i think only 2 or 3 would be best at this time. I'll post the current people on the front page. Also, can we please have someone else, other than a senz? There are way to many now, and i was hoping for some balance to this rp. If you guys want, you may have 2 characters, but that's it. If you want to wait until later when the magi come in contact with senventra you can.
     
  5. Moogle

    Moogle Well-Known Member

    I'm making a Reen right now.

    Name: Nadania Kuro

    Age: 17

    Gender:
    Female

    Race: Reen

    Affinity: Light, particularly in the defensive arts. Such as creating and holding barriers and whatnot.

    Personality: Nervous wreck. Tsundre.

    Weapon: Twin Haow - Two weapons made of cloth, made to stop swords and other sharp objects. also can be used to grab things like a whip.

    Bio: Her past? It's not one of glory, romance, mystery, or existentialism. She's just been another one of the many mages that have been raised at the Academy. Nadania's mother died in childbirth when she was born. She would only hear the truth about this years later on her father's deathbed. He also told Nadania that he knew the guilt would have consumed her if she were any younger. He died soon after those truths - an epidemic being the cause. She was ten at the time. From there on, she swore to practice the arts of healing and to make sure others do not suffer the same fate as her parents. Also resulting from the events that have transpired, her personality became rather fragile, causing her to be a nervous wreck. Since then, she has lived at the Academy dorms - skipping a year due to a natural knack for defensive magics and the like.

    Appearance: Feed her by ~sinziar on deviantART
     
    Last edited: Dec 5, 2009
  6. Zerieth

    Zerieth Head Game Reviewer

    Thank god! A reen! Also Shadow your pic is account inactive. Lolz.

    Ok, i got the rp up. I'll post a link here and on the front page.

    Divine Magic RP
     
    Last edited by a moderator: Dec 5, 2009
  7. Moogle

    Moogle Well-Known Member

    Finished. . .
     
  8. Zerieth

    Zerieth Head Game Reviewer

    At last, but could you guys please stop with the mary sues?
     
  9. Moogle

    Moogle Well-Known Member

    . . . Were you saying that about mine?
     
  10. Zerieth

    Zerieth Head Game Reviewer

    Umm, just about all of them were kinda mary sueish.
     
  11. Moogle

    Moogle Well-Known Member

    Meh, I couldn't think of anything better this time around. I tried to circumvent most of that with the "Not one of glory, romance, or mystery" part. Although. . . *Edits*




    EDIT: Sound better to you? I elaborated on mine.
     
    Last edited: Dec 5, 2009
  12. GrandShadow

    GrandShadow I accept your challange.

    damn and it was tthe perfect pic too. i'll just describe his appearence in my first post.
     
  13. Desert Warrior

    Desert Warrior Well-Known Member

    What was mary sueish about mine?

    Oh, and I have another character. Although I'm sure that my idea will probably have some problem with it. Here goes.

    Name: Tim
    Age: 33
    Gender: Male
    Race: Reen
    Affinity: Darkness
    Pic: [​IMG]
    Weapon: [​IMG] and some throwing shurikens and kunai.
    Bio: Tim was once part of the magi school. So he had gone on his journey, collecting scrolls and whatnot to return to the libraries. But afterwards, his past remains a mystery. At some point in his journey, years ago, he abandoned it. He takes no allegeance while still collecting the history the traveling mages are trying to acquire.
    Personality: He is cold and calculating. He does not show emotion and is an enigma.
    Other: Because of his skill in darkness, he is able to disappear and reappear at will. He is not a master of his race, but he has some skill in light along with his great skill in darkness. He is basically a ninja. Oh, and he channels his light and dark energy into his swords, giving them the distinctive look they have.
     
  14. Zerieth

    Zerieth Head Game Reviewer

    All are accepted.

    Tragic loss of parents is mary sue. It is better though, thanks moogle.
     
    Last edited: Dec 6, 2009
  15. Cameron

    Cameron New Member

    Still able to join? If so, I'll edit the template later.
     
  16. EtherealSummoner

    EtherealSummoner Lamentations 3:22-26

    Ok. I will join. Hope this template is to your liking.

    Name: Alexander "Lezardus" Incatratrum
    Age: 13
    Gender: Male
    Race: Seance

    [​IMG]

    Weapon: He carries a staff given to him by his mother called the Event Horizon. With this staff, he can actually make it turn into a wand & vice-versa. In staff form, it increases his magical powers, but weakens his aim, but in wand mode, it's the opposite. He can also use the weapon to make him float to places that even others cannot reach. Still, with the curse on it, the curse makes his spells even stronger, but makes it quicker for him to faint. If he goes over the limit of using his spells, he can go either fatigue, near-death, or even worse. He don't always use this staff though. He also use another staff called the Exti.
    [​IMG][​IMG]

    Personality: Quiet, but wants to express himself. Loves the darkness. Want to sacrifice himself. Uses spells to keep other people quiet or confused when they try to pick on him.

    Bio: He went to school by the name of Lezardus, but others don't know his true name except the adults. He wants only to stay at home away from the other kids. Even though there are kids that surrounds him, he wonders if he actually have true friends or fakes. his staff was made during the world between the gods & the other races when a legendary wizard was fighting off a necromancer. The wizard won, but it came with a price when the necromancer cursed it. Because of that, anyone in his family use their powers carefully if the staff ever gets to them or they just use a different staff that they like. Went to the Academy school at the age of 8, he was slowly gaining strength & control over his powers, but he is way too frail in physical form. He started to grow & obtain the power to actually use gravity spells at the age of 12, but using those spells sometimes can wear him out in five minutes or less if he overdo it.
    Being able to use the powers of force to bend the powers of light & darkness, necromancers sometimes targets him for being able to use this ability.

    Theme Music: YouTube - Dark Cloud 2 - Stella Magic Temple

    May I make another character?
     
    Last edited: Dec 9, 2009
  17. Desert Warrior

    Desert Warrior Well-Known Member

    Seace's affinity is only Force. Gravity is their master ability. Like how Divinity is Reen's master thing, and (Ether I think) is the third group's master thing. I don't remember what that third group is called. Too lazy to look.
     
  18. EtherealSummoner

    EtherealSummoner Lamentations 3:22-26

    So gravity & Aura are the same as force? Ok. I'll get rid of Affinity then.
     
  19. Become

    Become The Pink Opaque Staff Member Moderator Content Writer

    How is tragic loss of parents Mary Sue? There are plenty of real life people who lose their parents tragically. History doesn't make a character Mary Sue. Their personality, and for some part, their appearance does.

    If you're going to base whether a character is mary sue on the tragedy within their histories, then everyone's characters might well fall into that category, even your character would fall into that to an extent, based on what you've posted in the IC about.
     
  20. Zerieth

    Zerieth Head Game Reviewer

    Trust me, it is. Disney has a lot to answer for in the respect. My own mother, who is published, told me to never commit the sins of Disney, who mary sues everything. Tragic loss of parents is mary sue. In a big way to.
     

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