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A Star Wars Story

Discussion in 'Archive' started by LatiJediLukeAndLeia, Jul 8, 2009.

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  1. The Storm

    The Storm New Member

    "Hm hm hm... Good. Even one as stubborn as you should know that those words are more than just simple phrases. You really dont know? By saying them, you just increased your connection to the Force greatly for the time being. The closer you are to the Force, the more strength it will show you."
     
  2. Legendseeker

    Legendseeker OPON Content Writer

    Ronian sat down at the bar, keeping an eye out for anyone who looked at him the wrong way. The bartender came walking up to him. "What you want?"
    "I'll have a... DOWN!" he shouted, pushing the bartender to the ground. Just then, blaster bolts rained over the bar, sending glass flying. Ronian drew one of his blasters and began firing back. The attacker ducked behind a pillar. "I had a feeling you were here." Ronian said. "You know, the Empire is paying dearly for me to kill you."
    "I won't go down that easy." the man shouted from behind the pillar. "You'll have to do your best to catch me!" he dashed forward into the streets, Ronian right behind him. When Ronian burst out the door, he saw the man jump into a speeder and start flying off. Not today. Ronian thought, and activated his jetpack.
     
  3. Colonel Caboose

    Colonel Caboose The Man, the Myth, the Legend

    The man was thinking to himself, no mandalorian is going to catch me just like that, but than the man was knocked off his speederbike. when the man caught his breath and looked up, he saw that two commando droids had knocked him off. The droids told, "stay down, you are under arrest by master Ronian, roger, roger." the man then thought about escaping the droids, but then more came. He was utterly trapped. He could a jetpack nosies getting closer and closer.
     
  4. Answer Man

    Answer Man Man I'm Awesome

    Rina looked at Sarah, and started to ask her one big question.

    "I need you to tell me everything you know about John Resse. how you know him, who he is, his weakness and strengths. Please, I need this information." I will help me along the way.
     
  5. LatiJediLukeAndLeia

    LatiJediLukeAndLeia New Member

    "John Resse was my apprentice not to long after I made the rank to Jedi Knight, I had gotten permission form Jedi master Yoda to train him a few months before his birthday he would be eleven years old I trained him for five years a few months after he had received the rank of Jedi Knight he turned to the Dark Side his strengths and weakness I think could be used to turn him back to the Light Side when I get out of the hospital I plan to look for my old apprentice to try to turn him back to the Light Side. If you were to find him what do you plan to do to Resse? Kill him?” Sarah asked Rina.
     
  6. Answer Man

    Answer Man Man I'm Awesome

    "he has a bounty, i would find him and bring him back here alive and get my money, he's wanted alive. If you want I could help you find him, I've had many experiences like this, helping people looking for someone with a bounty. I hate bounty collectors, so if I can, I wont let them get that person."

    She looked over at Sky and his brother. "Who are they?"
     
  7. LatiJediLukeAndLeia

    LatiJediLukeAndLeia New Member

    Sarah thought about it for a moment "That sounds fine." Sarah replied.

    Sky and Kristen looked at Rina "I'm Sky." Sky said "and the girl standing next to me is my younger twin sister Kristen."

    John had finally reached the hospital that Sarah was at "Soon Sarah you will know the true power of the Dark Side." John thought as he walked inside the hospital.
     
  8. Answer Man

    Answer Man Man I'm Awesome

    When John stepped in Rina felt scared, something she never felt before, like something powerful and real evil was coming there way. Her legs felt heavy as well.
    "Someones coming, someone powerful, and dark."
    (sorry i can't make these longer, got a lot to do.)
     
  9. The Storm

    The Storm New Member

    (slight bunnying here Shadow, hope you dont mind)

    Ops stayed in his meditation chambers with Menos for several days, no food, no water, no sleep, no outside influence, just the two of them. The gifts Ops was bestowing on Menos were unimaginable. And Menos, surprising even Ops himself, was a quick learner. In the seven days he had learned quite a few lessons... Including two new Saber techniques.

    He learned how to shield his presence in the Force, the Art only the "True Sith" could learn. this was Ops's first step in figuring out whether or not Menos really was his chosen disciple, and Menos passed the test with flying colors.Now, even if Menos were standing behind the most powerful Jedi Master in existence and used a strong acclimation of Force energy, the Master would not be able to sense it. Only Putus Ops could still feel his presence in the Force.

    The second lesson he learned was how to survive with only the Force. Now, he could go weeks, even months without food or water of any kind, and still look and feel like he had just gotten the best nap of his life.

    The lightsaber techniques were different. Ops taught Menos two: Makashi and Ataru. Makashi was a traditional Sith technique used by the now infamous Darth Tyranus. It was a very elegant, yet deadly style. It made more use of dexterity than power, allowing the user to run his opponent ragged within a few moments of the duel.

    The other style he taught, Ataru, was a powerful strength style that fed on the Force heavily. Instead of evenly balancing Force power in combat, as most warriors do, the Ataru form channels the Force directly into the user's strength. Every blow is a blast from a Star Destroyer, every overhead attack filled with the power of a falling star. Of course, Ops would teach Menos more in time, but for now, this would suffice. He was already proving himself much more promising than his other apprenti.

    Praesentia cruised gently into the crisp, smog filled outworld of Nar Shaddaa. They came upon a landing platform, cooling the jets and putting out the landing gear. The door to Ops's chambers opened and one of his apprenti stood there, stout and spoke.

    "My Master, we have arrived on Nar Shaddaa, as per your orders."

    "Very well..." Ops replied in a monotone, uninterested fashion. "Meet us on the platform."

    "Very good, My Master..." the apprentice said, casting a dark, sneering look at Menos before exiting the room.

    Ops turned to Menos, his face unable to be read through his mask.

    "Remember this, Trechery is the way of the Sith, my apprentice. Eventually, they will attempt to turn on you in their own quest for greater power. It is how we Sith have grown so strong over so much time and why we will always be stronger than the Jedi. We have no mercy for the weak."

    Ops turned and sent a whisper through the Force at Menos that said Follow Me in his mind.
     
  10. GrandShadow

    GrandShadow I accept your challange.

    (i don't mind)

    If I must. Menos stood and followed Ops out of the room. As he did he looked around. Many were glaring at him in either jealousy or fear. Others ignored him doing what they were ordered. As Menos looked out the window he could see they were still in hyper-space. "Where are we going again?"
     
  11. The Storm

    The Storm New Member

    Ops gave him a serious look, but it could not be seen through the mask.

    "We have just arrived on Nar Shaddaa. I feel it is the perfect place to continue your training. I have shown you the path, and now you must follow it. I know for a fact that there are two Jedi Outcasts on this planet.... Both were former Masters. My task to you is to hunt them down and destroy them. However, this will not be easy. Talk to Bounty Hunters and local Tradesmen to get your leads... That should help you get your bearings."

    Ops faced him again, "A word of caution my apprentice... These Masters may be Outcasts... But they were still Jedi once. On such a thriving world like Nar Shaddaa, one would think it easy to find one who serves the Light, simply by looking into the Force. But that is not the case... Instead of searching out their Lighter presence which they have undoubtedly masked... Search for the more subtle Dark presence... That is where you will find your rogue Jedi."

    Ops turned and walked away from Menos, moving towards the cockpit of the ship. A whisper entered Menos' ear. I will still be able to give you counsel through the Force, when and if you need it.

    As Ops entered the main cockpit area, one of his apprenti approached him fervently.

    "Master, are you sure he is the one?"

    Ops replied dryly with little interest. "Yes."

    "But Master... how can you be so sure? How can you have the clairvoyance to see whether or not he is the-"

    The apprentice's throat locked itself shut, silencing his words immediately. He grasped at his neck but there was nothing there. It was like an invisible clamp had his throat in a deathlock. He slowly rose off the ground, as if being lifted by a hand that was grasping his neck.

    "You dare to challenge my power?"

    The grip on the apprentices' throat tightened, as his neck muscles contracted upon themselves. A red veil descended upon his world as his breath gave away... And then a blast of light sent him into the crushing blackness of death.

    "I do not need to be questioned by this filth..." he retorted to one of his other apprenti. "See to it that he is removed from the ship immediately... This trash is cluttering my floor."
     
  12. GrandShadow

    GrandShadow I accept your challange.

    Menos watched Ops kill his own servent before leaving. As he did he closed his mind from him. No need for him to read my thoughts. If I had been given a name or appearance then this would have been easier. Oh well, may as well take his advice. Menos began to go down a metal path leading to a bar. He walked up to a bartender who was cleaning a glass. "Hey, bar keep. Come here." The human bartender walked over, an obvious look of annoyance on his face. Menos smiled as the man got close. Before the man could react Menos had reached up and grabbed the mans head. He was put into a trance as Menos read his thoughts and memories. Two, both in tattered silver cloaks. Jedi, could tell from the lightsabers they flashed asking for a private room. Met with someone, unimportant right now. Left for... got it. Menos released the man who collapsed on the ground unconcious. "Thanks for your help, keep." As Menos turned around there was at least fifteen people around him wanting to attack him for hurting the bartender. "Please, you aren't even worth it." Menos closed his eyes and the group was blasted away with a powerful Force wave. "Simpletons." Menos left the bar, aheading fown towards the slums of Nar Shaddaa.
     
  13. Answer Man

    Answer Man Man I'm Awesome

    Rina looked back at Sarah and them, we have to go now, someones coming, a very powerful person. I wll see if I can give you sometime, but hurry.
     
  14. Colonel Caboose

    Colonel Caboose The Man, the Myth, the Legend

    "master incoming message from polis massa, patching it through..."

    this is droid 1 to master, it seems that imperials didn't want any trouble and sent in a cloaked ship that landed on board the space station, the only person to get off of it seemed to be a sith, by scanning his lightsaber hidden underneath his black cloak. his lightsaber is a standard sith lightsaber used during the sithwars. what are your orders master?"

    Jet quickly told the droid in a panic out what might be happening on the space station," number 1 go find the ex jedi that I hired to get the lady off the station and and help him get to the lady before he does!" Jet then started speaking to the computer, "Get us into polis massa space now!" The computer didn't waste anytime, within the next five seconds they were there, but then it went from good to bad, 3 star destroyers jumped into polis massa space too. "computer fire all weapons on the first star destroyer, then put all power besides the shields and put it into the enignes and pull up next to the second one and leech their shields and take that power and the power from the guns that aren't next to the star destroyer and blow the crap out of it. then start firing on the third. now open up the hanger doors and all fighters launch!"
     
  15. GrandShadow

    GrandShadow I accept your challange.

    Menos was searching around multiple grey and brown buildings. They were all so worn, as if the slightest tap would make them crumble. As Menos looked around he also searching through the Force for any sensitive to his astral touch. Suddenly two beings recoiiled and hid there presence in the Force. Gave yourselves away. Menos quickly went to where he sensed them. Once there he noticed two people in silver cloaks. Just like the 'keeps memories said. With a flick of his wrist he blasted the cloaks off them revealing a silver haired man and a young blonde boy. "So a master and his padawan? Well at least one of you may be fun." Menos pulled out his lightsaber and charged. "Run Mikel!" The padawan ran while the man pulled out his own lightsaber and activated it. The red lightsaber of Menos clashed with the blue of the master. The two began slashing and parrying each other in rapid succesion. Neither seemed to get ahead. Without warning the master was blasted back by a pulse that emitted from Menos. "Come on. I'm holding back and you can't even touch me." Menos deactiveted his lightsaber and turned his back on the jedi. The jedi levitated and flung things at Menos while charging in with his lightsaber. Menos moved and twisted, dodging the trash thrown at him. The jedi began swinging his lightsaber wildly. Menos continued to move just enough for the lightsaber not to touch him. Quickly, Menos punched the jedi in the gut with his lightsaber. While holding his fist against the master he activated his lightsaber. The red beam seemed to sprout from the Jedi's back as he laid impaled on it. Menos turned his saber off and let him fall to the ground. He used the Force to grab the fallen master's lightsaber and clipped both his and the masters onto his belt. Now for the brat.
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    The padawan was running as fast as he could. Despite not being trained much he could sense when his master had fallen. He tried his best to sense the sith but found he couldn't. That's when Menos leapt down in front of him. "Try as you may even a master can't sense me unless I let them. So, will you choose the easy death or will you try to fight?" The padawan pulled out his lightsaber. "So be it."
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    Menos walked back onto thevship. He went before Ops and kneeled. "Done, and here's proof." He tossed both the lightsabers of the Jedi. "Now, whats next?"
     
  16. LatiJediLukeAndLeia

    LatiJediLukeAndLeia New Member

    John went up to one of the raspiest desks and asked "Hi do you have a Sarah Resse here." "One moment." replied the raspiest.

    Sarah managed to climb out of bed walking over to were Sky Kristen and Rina were standing.
     
  17. Answer Man

    Answer Man Man I'm Awesome

    Then at that monent john walked in. Rina saw himand knew at that monmet hewould be hard to fight, he wasn't like other siths, she fought. She looked over at Sarah and was shocked by her face.
     
  18. LatiJediLukeAndLeia

    LatiJediLukeAndLeia New Member

    "Ah Sarah." John said he had an evil smile on his face "I do believe that you and I will be leaving I have something special planed for you."

    "John I told you back on Naboo I'm not interested in ruling the galaxy with you."

    "Come on John leave her alone." Sky replied.

    Ignoring Sky John replied "You will be ruling the galaxy by my side whether want to or not."
     
  19. Answer Man

    Answer Man Man I'm Awesome

    "So your John, You have a big bounty, I'm not a bounty hunter but I need the money, so I'm bringin you in alive or dead! Also your not taking anyone any where! Her eyes turned yellow like a tigers her energy was so great you could see that it was purple. she brought out two purple lightsabers and charged at him with one big lunge, half of her knowing see might not live.

    (just wondering, can we make like this a party thing, like Sarah and them becomea big gruops just wondeing.)
     
  20. LatiJediLukeAndLeia

    LatiJediLukeAndLeia New Member

    John brought out his red lightsaber and prepared to block the attack. He wasn't going to kill any of them he only wanted to rule the galaxy with Sarah by his side.

    OOC: Sure that's ok with me.
     
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