A.O.D. OOC

Name: Nic (Nicole goes by Nic)
Codename: the black eye
Race: (mix) german and cherokee
Sex: girl
Weapon: spy gadgets just a bunch of spy gadgets (I'll make the list late)
Special Ability: spyig- eaves dropping, sneaking, so on
Description: (Pic
History: Nic is a normal child living in Washington D.C. nothing special. Her grandfather on her father's side was in the world war II. Her great grandather was also in world war II. Her great grandmother is a native american cherokee. Her great grandmother doesn't talk about it though.
Nic is a normal highschool sophmore, she knows how to work computers and stuff. She's also good at eaves dropping. She was discovered by the A.O.C. when she hacked into their database accidentally. However she explained to them what she was doing and stuff. They left her alone. Until when they were all normal and stuff Nic saw them and hid from them. She heard them talking and spoke to them from the shadows then stepped out. They took her in then. She is the youngest one in the A.O.C.
Secondary Weapon: a hand gun
Other: Spy and computer hacker type of person



Ok Now I need a summary and a sugestion perhaps when to hop in maybe the presdent or leader introducing her.

 

I didnt leave. Oric was caught off guard by...lets just say "an old friend". He saw the bullet coming, but for some reason couldnt move. A nastalgic numb through out his body. He was hit in the chest, but isnt dead. He'll soon re-cooperate.
And I'm so sorry about the head quarters of the A.O.D.
I take full responsibility, and I am truly sorry for the miscommunication. Truly I am. Now...as for my newer addition to the plot, I have introduced a named antagonist...General Dawk. To clear any and all misunderstandings, he is from Russia who has currently been deployed a General of Muslem/AlQuaeda troops who are after us (the A.O.D.). Russian spies all over the globe have tracked our movement for sometime, and have caught on to a plot of their destruction (whether its A.O.D itself, or merely someone in the A.O.D, it isnt known yet). Russia has taken a secret course of action to stop any country try to harm it. So, they are currently after anyone who had left the Russian military in the last 10 years. And who else but Oric has led them to the A.O.D.
Whether Russian spies have a misunderstanding, or the US governement wishes try and takeover Russia in another world war is currently unknown...

(Sound good? If you guys dont like it, I'll just edit it...)

 

Summoner, please read posts carefully. You mistook something that my character was thinking as something that he said out loud. Also, realisticly there should be no way your character took time to learn the northern praying mantis style of martial arts. He might have learned a few things yes, but not enough to be cocky. Your character is supposed to be the technician, busy always upgrading and designing new weapons, no?

Before posting anything new I suggest re-reading it and making sure it fits your character.

Also, you have yet again god modded.

 

I saw the same thing as well. Plus you need to be more reasonable with majority of your posts, SB. Like I said reread, learn, memorise, comprehend every post before yours. That's what makes RP'ing RP'ing. You're not really RP'ing.

 

Name: Rasha
Age: 19
Country: Russia
weapon: 2 of them.
Special ability: dodging bullets
Appearance:
History: knows Oric from Russia. trained spy for a Elite network currently working in Japan (which means he's no longer with Russian military). Was a friend of Oric's, and has come looking for him do to some ill news he has discovered about a possible World War concerning Russia.

 

*not me....*

 

Please do not douuble post, please do not spam. Sorry but things are getting sort of crazy so I can't do this RP, but since SB's gone it should be fine.

Plus I have told SB the defantition of SB months ago and many times up to this date.

 

-_-_-_-. First off, I did not god modeled & I can prove it. When I said "praying mantis mode" That doesn't mean that it was a martial arts fighting style. It was a "stance", a beginning technique to prepare Randoni's attacks when he is fighting hand to hand (Something which you should reread on the post with my character & your character fighting Zerieth) & with the whip only.

Also, when I brought up the thing about praying mantis mode against Zerieth character, he didn't count it as god moddeling & went along with it. Also, the praying mantis is not a ability, but a stance to prepare Randoni's attacks. I also had put a lot of weaknesses on the new bullets & the new shotgun for Arthas that Randoni had made, so really, after going over this, I don't see no god moddeling.

If you is still confused at what I mean by "mode" or "stance" let me give you an example KH style. The fighting stance that sora has before a boss fight.

 

True saying that you took up the stance of Praying Mantis is not God Modding, but making my character jump or dodge is G.M. and yes I counted it.

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If mine and your character were to fight, this is how it should look:

Haresuno Posts:
Alastor leaped into the air as to avoid Ran's attack.

summonerbrandon Posts:
Ran brought back his right arm, which held the whip firmly and readied for his next assult. He waited for Alastor to begin his fall to the earth before his right arm crossed passed his cheast, making the whip wrap around a small metallic pipe from which Ran jumped into the air and swung his body at Alastor.

Haresuno Posts:
Alastor saw Ran beginning to swing himself at him in a full body assult so Alastor prepared himself by bringing both arms up in a guard at cheast level.

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Taking control of a character during a fight should only happen at instances such as:

summonerbrandon Posts:
Ran's body smashed into Alastor and the two of them were flung across the room. Ran let his grip around the whip go as his body soared through the air. The impact from the two colliding seemed to hurt Ran more than Alastor -this would be true do to the fact that your character is signifactenly smaller than mine- but the force of Alastor's back hitting the wall was enough to have him in a coughing fit.

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Summoner, if you require help in your posts I'm more than willing to help, but if you were trying some how -unintentionally or intentionally- to make your character THE MAIN protagonist then the fault lies with you on many mistakes made through out the RP.

Again I stress that in the future re-read your posts and ask yourself questions such as "Is this how my character would really act?", "Am I breaking any of the rules?", etc. etc.

 

I didn't made my character as the main protagonist. I didn't even have the thought about doing that. I even made sure that I be careful not to god model & seeing that you said that you is the master in martial arts, I said that my character tried to hit you & you kept on making my character's attacks miss you.

Didn't star said that that's not god moddeling, but if someone don't want a character to be used yet, that it's powerplaying instead? I thought about having my character act childish & make the thought of trying so hard to get his way make him miss, so the only thing that I said is that your character moved out of the way or jumped or made my character's attacks miss & that's it.

I said Zerieth & my character fighting because in the first page of the rp, I used the mode against his character & I told him to go over it so he knows that I didn't god model. I been knew that my character is not a martial fighter & I really want him to keep on missing attacks.

 

To quote God Modding from Urban Dictionary:

If you don't want your character to hit then simply work things out via PM with other people. This matter could be simply resolved by either you or I saying that we had permission to do so.

Now addressing your earlier statement, I said weather you tried to intentionally or unintentionally -either on purpose or not. You'd be the latter or unintentionally-. My character never stated in verbal words that he mastered anything.

 

Since i must concentrate to my final exams and to achieve perfect score, i won't online for a month.
Could someone take charge as my character for a while?

 

thats what I meant, I didnt mean he could never get hit. He's just good at dodgeing. Like someone who is really hard to hit in dodgeball, but it doesnt mean they cant get hit with the ball.

I will.

 

Okay, Mythril a dodge ball doesn't move at the same speed a bullet does so that comparison does not do you justice. Being able to dodge a bullet would take a heck of a lot of speed and a dodge ball is easier to see then a bullet.