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A new hope

Discussion in 'Archive' started by KnuXl3s, Jul 27, 2008.

what do u think of the story on tthis RP

Poll closed Feb 15, 2009.
  1. do you like it

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  1. KnuXl3s

    KnuXl3s New Member

    " then dont do it then you regect duh" Nagi said standing over his brother
    "here let me hel you" Nagi stuck out his hand
     
  2. Ventus

    Ventus Kickass Keyblader!

    He took his hand and stood up.
    Shino looked to the ocean and saw a fleet of ships coming towards the beach. They were water tribe.
    "Nagi, I think we've got big trouble"
     
  3. KnuXl3s

    KnuXl3s New Member

    "yeah but I hope not I am not in the mood to fight and not gain anything out of it the water tribe is so week" nagi said
    "ehh but maby they dont wanna fight"
     
  4. Ventus

    Ventus Kickass Keyblader!

    Suddenly the fire tribe flag was raised instead of the water tribe flag.
    "No it's the fire tribe!"
     
  5. KnuXl3s

    KnuXl3s New Member

    "Sweet our alies" Nagi said in joy
     
  6. Ventus

    Ventus Kickass Keyblader!

    The ships made their destination and surges of soldiers surged out of the water tribe ships.
    A commander stood infront of them.
    "You two get ready for battle, the air nomads and the water tribesmen are going to attack the city"
    "...No....sir"
    "WHAT?!"
    The commander looked outraged.
     
  7. KnuXl3s

    KnuXl3s New Member

    " I am not going to fight I am trying to end the war and cause the I lost my mom so sorry commander but I'm out" Nagi said standing up to the commander
     
  8. Ventus

    Ventus Kickass Keyblader!

    "SOLDIERS SEIZE THEM NOW!!!"
    Five soldiers surrounded them.
     
  9. KnuXl3s

    KnuXl3s New Member

    "ahhh shino stand next to me" and then Nagi melted through ground
     
  10. Ramayana

    Ramayana New Member

    Meanwhile on an Air/Water boat....

    Daimo hated water.
    But he liked fighting.
    Why he had signed up to fight the fire nation, he did not know. Maybe it was a spur of the moment thing. But, anyways, there he was, in the grey armor of the air kingdom, with his blue trench coat still on. The recruiters would never get that.
    Ajusting his spear and katana, Daimo prepared to fight.
     
  11. Ventus

    Ventus Kickass Keyblader!

    One of the soldiers grabbed Shino by the throat before they descended down.
    "HELP!" Shino screamed as he was thrown into a metal cell inside the ship.
    "TAKE THIS BRAT TO THE JAIL AT OUR AIR KINGDOM BASE AND PUT HIM IN A PRISON!"
     
  12. KnuXl3s

    KnuXl3s New Member

    "ohh no you dont " nagi screamed as he started hiting fire soilders with giant slabs of rock
    "Shino no" nagi screamed as he ran towards his brother the he was hit in the back of the head witht the hilt of a sword. Next thing he knew he was in a metal cell sitting next to his brother.
     
    Last edited: Jul 30, 2008
  13. Moogle

    Moogle Well-Known Member

    (Have you any courtesy? Wait for people, jeez!)

    Ven walked along the beach, and spotted the soldiers.

    "Well, whadd'ya know. A couple of tin-cans."
     
  14. KnuXl3s

    KnuXl3s New Member

    " Shino you up brother where do you think they're taking us ohh yeah that kingdom base I bet, amn this sucks" Nagi said as he rubbed the back of his head
     
  15. Ramayana

    Ramayana New Member

    In the ships bridge, a scout entered the command room. "Sir, we have located a prison ship. Should we attack."
    "Yes. Pick a team of 20, rescue any prisoners, then scuttle the boat with waterbending."
    "Sir!"

    Daimo was on deck when someone tapped his shoulder. "We could use you." Daimo was half-dragged to a boat, which, propelled by waterbenders, moved quickly towards the prison ship.
     
  16. Ventus

    Ventus Kickass Keyblader!

    "Yeah, are you okay brother?"
     
  17. Moogle

    Moogle Well-Known Member

    "Looks like they're about to set off.. Might as well help the poor chaps."

    With light feet, He hopped from his part of the beach onto the top of the ship.

    "Hello sirs... may I intrest you in a trinket or two?" Ven asked, revealing a handful of jewels.
     
  18. Ventus

    Ventus Kickass Keyblader!

    >The ship is all ready at sea<
    "What do you mean, who are you?"
     
  19. KnuXl3s

    KnuXl3s New Member

    Nagi looked out a windo in the ships hull
    "huh a water ship why are they here in earth and fire territory" nagi said with a questioned loomk on his face
     
  20. Ventus

    Ventus Kickass Keyblader!

    "A water ship?...it could be another infiltrated ship"
     
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