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You're The Reason

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics' started by Consilum, Apr 25, 2012.

  1. Apr 25, 2012 #1
    Consilum

    Consilum New Member

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    You're the picture to my frame,
    You're the candle to my flame.
    You're the one who rids me of pain,
    And you keep me from going insane.

    You're the burning fire
    That lights my desire.
    You're the song in my quire,
    i know this; I'm no liar.

    When I told you i loved you, I meant it.
    The proof of that is in this pendant.
    You're the one who has witnessed
    My unconditional love that's endless.

    You're the reason I live,
    You're the reason I get up.
    You're always in my heart,
    And nothing can tear us apart.​
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  2. Apr 27, 2012 #2
    Suriel

    Suriel New Member

    There’s only some “I’s” left unchecked and a missing comma but that’s about it.
    It’s short, sweet and simple. I like it.
     
  3. Apr 28, 2012 #3
    Reprise

    Reprise Semi-present

    As Suriel said, short, sweet and simple. Nice job.
     

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