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Watch me walk like a zombie

Discussion in 'Audio and Visual' started by NeRo, Aug 1, 2012.

  1. NeRo

    NeRo Your Supreme Lord And Savior Staff Member Administrator

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    Sound the air horn!!!​
     
    NeRo, Aug 1, 2012
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  2. Vor

    Vor Princess Eater

    I like this, how the render is cut off and reappears in a different location, the only thing I find bad about this is the fact that most of the color is in one corner and not spread around in the signture or in the middle to balance it out.

    Other than that, this tag is pretty good, but you've made better in the past
     
    Vor, Aug 2, 2012
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  3. NeRo

    NeRo Your Supreme Lord And Savior Staff Member Administrator

    Thats fair enough, it was a entry for a contest im currently in and i'm wining so i'm happy for that fact.
     
    NeRo, Aug 4, 2012
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  4. Consilum

    Consilum New Member

    Playing to your strengths, I see. Well, since I don't know much about how a magazine layout should look, I don't know what I could really critique on. I do like it, especially the text. A nice flare and the empty space really makes it look nice.
     
    Consilum, Aug 5, 2012
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  5. EtherealSummoner

    EtherealSummoner Lamentations 3:22-26

    Its good... but it is very confusing because I really don't know which one to look at. I am paying attention more to the middle and right side than I do to the left side but I am positive it is all of that yellow and the other bright colors.
     
    EtherealSummoner, Aug 5, 2012
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  6. Angel

    Angel Lion Heart Staff Member Administrator

    It gives the feeling of way too busy between the multiple texts, images, and effects. It becomes difficult to determine the main focus of the tag. I don't particularly like the text or how it sticks out specifically "VOX". The effects to the left are one-sided. It doesn't really apply or fit to your theme and color palette.
     
    Angel, Aug 9, 2012
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