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Ustilo - Sign Up thread

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  1. The Storm

    The Storm New Member

    Ustilo - Official Sign Up Thread


    As the title says, this is the Ustilo Sign Up Thread.

    The Ustilo Universe is an incredibly futuristic Star-Wars-esque area. Many planets encompass the Ustilo Universe, all of which may be named as the story goes on. Note that if you do come up with a planet, you MUST describe in INTRICATE detail the planets surface, climate, type of government (if any) Inhabitants, and technology. Note also that this goes for types of lifeforms, if you introduce a new one, you must provide sufficient information to literally "paint a picture" in the readers mind. This goes the same for the "Appearance" section in your SU's. Use detail, otherwise it may be rejected.

    Note that if I reject your Sign Up, you will have the chance to revise it as many times as you want, hopefully improving each time, so dont take offense. Make good Sign Ups, and we can make this Role Play Godly. Please, dont mess this up.

    Storyline: Mercochant has long been a planet of peice and prosperity. Belonging to the Galaxy Hubris, a subsidiary of the Mother Universe, Ustilo, Merochant is the Main Hub of trading in the Ustilo Universe. Mercochant is a huge planet, encompassed by one huge city. High skyscrapers and robotically controlled systems are a regular in the area. It is known as the "High Traffic" street of the Galaxy. Being the Central Trading Hub, nearly every type of Alien can be found on Mercochant. Nearly every item imaginable can be obtained here. Unfortunately, this has made Mercochant an optimal target for poaching and theft. The MSF (Mercochant Security Force) is always at the top of their game for this reason, but still finds dealing with the thefts to be hard on the Planet.

    Another Planet in the Hubris Galaxy, Archos is the Political head of the System. This Planet governs all the rights of all beings in the immense Ustilo Universe, although some of the outlying systems have decided to make their own rules. Archos' rule only extends so far. The current Government is a Democracy, utilizing four Senators from each Planet in the Ustilo Universe. Votes are cast and Laws are placed. This System, unlike conventional Democracy, has outlawed a Ruler of the Democracy, having a rather unsettling event many years ago which has been long forgotten. This Planet plays host to every species of Aliens in the Ustilo Universe, even the vile dissadents of the Outlands.

    The Outlands are a series of Planets outside Archos's jurisdiction that are notorious for Smuggling, Gamblers, Murderers, and the other Scum of the Universe. For the longest time, a group of Gangsters called Nal Aleator has been running a Smuggling operation on the Planet Latrocinor. It is thought this Gang has been behind the many Smuggling Operations in and out of Mercochant. Their ruthless leader (yet to be named, spot up for grabs!) has led the Gang for many years, and lives up to their Vile reputation.

    Among the outlying reaches of the Galaxy, the particularly strange system of Pravus has recently been rebelling against Archos's rule. A seemingly evil being (up for grabs as well) has been speaking his piece about how he beleives the Universe should be run. Unfortunately for Archos, many sentient beings have been giving in to his unusually high influence (one of the characters powers, must be included in his/her SU) and pledged their allegiance to this new Dictator.

    Information: There are numerous free systems in the Ustilo Universe, and each of them have different views about which side to choose. Each Planet also is home to a distinct race of Alien. Each of these must be described in IMMENSE detail. Your imagination is appreciated, as each constructive mind can bring something new to the table. Now, your SU does not just have to be Human, it can be whatever Alien race you decide on. Also, the technology is advanced, but standard rules apply. Do NOT make any device or do anything that would be considered a "God-Mod", and do NOT Bunny. If you do bunny, be sure to converse with the person who's character you are wanting to bunny, along with OK'ing it with me Via PM. If you should violate these common rules, your post must be edited. If you refuse, or if it becomes a constant repetition, you will be Booted from the Role Play, and not welcomed back unless I OK it. Now, have FUN!

    Your SU should look like this:

    Name: (First and last)

    Race: (Alien, if human, Spanish, American, etc.)

    Gender: (M or F, as Alien gender may get confusing)

    Planet: High detail if you are creating your own planet.

    Appearance: (Go into GREAT detail here plz. Color, appendages, etc.)

    Biography/History: (Again, GREAT detail plz)

    Personality: (Good detail needed here)

    Weapon/Altercations: (Favorite weapon(s), reason, Altercations meaning missing limbs, mechanical arms, eye changes, robot upgrades, any special upgrades)

    Ok, start Signing up and have fun
     
    Last edited: Jun 14, 2009
  2. Moogle

    Moogle Well-Known Member

    This is..... very thorough. I may join this. Prepare to be blinded by my Spore Creature skill.
     
  3. The Storm

    The Storm New Member

    I would be honored if you would join. I was very thorough bc I have done lots of RPs, many of which fell through because of lack of action. This way, the possibilities are nearly endless, and it is so open that any person can do anything in this story.
     
  4. The Storm

    The Storm New Member

    Here is my character

    Name: Rrowarkckiassss in Ferinian, in human tongue it is pronounced Rgiss

    Race: Ferinus Viperre

    Gender: Male

    Appearance: Being an inhabitant of planet Inculta, Rex is a lizard-snake. He is able to change color, change size and, at times, if he loses any appendage he can grow them back. This applies to nearly every appendage. However, this power does have a cost. It cannot be used in succession. If a body part is cut off more than once, it will not grow back. He maintains a human stature, his scaly body reaching 6'3". His skin is incredibly rough, being born the traditional Viperre way, his skin is made of Metamorphic Igneous Crystal. This substance resembles the roughness of the arid stones in deserts.

    The skin is peircable though, proving an effective but not invincable shield. The one thing it does provide full immunity from is heat. Being of Viperre descendence, heat is their natural source of energy, and so their skin evolved to withstand tremendous amounts of heat, nearly reaching Supernova. Small stone spikes cover his entire body, yet his face is somehow human. It is a rocky, grainy face, but he has eyes, a mouth, one nostril in the center of his forehead, and small holes for ears located in the very back of his head. He also has a pair of earholes on the tops of his hands. These are used for hearing what others cannot.

    He has small spiked rocknails that are attached to his fingertips. He uses these either for battle or to tear things apart. His teeth are serrated and set in three rows from the front to the back of his mouth. The move like a conveyor belt, new teeth constantly replacing the old ones every other week. His rocky body is colored a deep Brown color. His body will change color depending on both the temperature and the climate of his surroundings. He can also change color at will, making him a very useful spy. Typically, he wears no clothing. This is so he can better "accustom" himself in any situation if needed.

    Planet: Inculta is a scorched desert; home to some of the feircest predators in the Universe. It is known amongst travelers as the "Furnace Planet." The dirt being able to reach temperatures of over 450 degrees, the Planet is rather repulsive to the normal traveler. However, the occassional Game Hunter will attempt to grab a peice of the rare substances the Planet holds.

    Biography/History: Rgiss is a member of the family Ferinus Viperre. This family is a long-lived and long-evolved chain of lizard-snakes. They are known to have some of the toughest skin in the Universe, making them an oppurtune target for most hunters of rare skins and merchant traders. The Ferinus Viperre are a rare species, mostly associated with the other dangerously dark creatures of the Planet Inculta. The Ferinus Viperre are known to reproduce in the center of their known Planet. As the adults are already immune to heat, the eggs which hold their children are not. The egg is taken to the core of the planet and broken open prematurely. The fetus of the baby Viperre is then buried in the molten sand while the parent returns to the surface.

    After several months of "incubation", the baby is ready to leave the core of the Planet. Due to the immense pressure and heat, the newborn's skin grows as Metamorphic Igneous Crystal. The baby then utilizes its claws and digs its way to the surface, fasting all the while and taking 3 weeks to reach the surface at best. The Viperre are able to survive for months at a time on a single meal, losing none of their weight or strength in the process. They do not even require oxygen nor any type of gas to survive, they have no lungs. Their body relies solely on an inner respiratory system which works as long as the user stays active. When the newborn arrives at the surface, it is already able to fend for itself. Rgiss was born this way, along with every other Ferinous Viperre on the Planet. Feeding on small creatures at first, Rgiss was confronted with his first real challenge when he was eighteen months old.

    He encountered a giant Caluxernus, in human tongue it means "stone snake". The Caluxernus swallowed young Rgiss whole. However, due to Rgiss's intensely rough skin, the worm's innards were ripped apart from the inside as Rgiss slid down his throat. This did not kill the worm, however. Rgiss spent the next couple weeks inside the worms stomach, feeding off the worms meals as it ate, sharing with the worm a Parasitic relationship. Unable to gain any nutrients from its meals, the worm soon died of starvation, and Rgiss burrowed his way out of the worm's stomach, emerging from its mouth. Rgiss then spent a few weeks guarding his host's carcass by day, and feasting upon it by night.

    A Caluxernus has the most protein-filled meat in the known galaxy. Rgiss was able to quickly triple in size during the time it took to finish the worms carcass. Time did not pass normally on Ustulo, having three suns, it was impossible to tell how time passed. After a very long time, Rgiss reached his current height and potential. Having ripped apart a recent gang of hunters, he was able to usurp one of their starships. His primative instincts left, and the other side of his brain kicked in. He began to investigate the ship, learning to read the files, learning to speak the trans-galactic language English, and learning how to fly the ship.

    He took the ship and flew blindly into space. Not knowing the known galaxies secrets, he embarked on a mission to find as much knowledge as he could about the new world he had discovered. He landed, by crash, eventually on the Trade World Mercochant. He has wandered the towers and high standing streets of the planet, learning of the Planet's inhabitants and attempting to see their way of life. During this time, he was attacked by another group of hunters. Being on a trade world, his head was as high a price as anything. He was decapitated and dismembered. His body was thrown to the bottom trenches of the Planet, living amongst the filthy poor who resided there.

    Being a Ferinus Viperre, his skull and other body parts grew back within a week. He now traverses amongst the low class peoples. He vows to wreak hazardous vengeance against those that cursed him to his present fate.

    Personality: Rgiss is a vicious predator by nature. When in the heat of battle, he gives in to his animal instincts. In normal relations, he is very calm and collected. Due to his appearance, many tend to avoid him. He has no true uncontrollable animocity toward anything unless he is hungry.

    Weapon/Altercations: Rgiss tends only to use his claws for hunting. In personal combat, he uses a pulsar energy blade the color of the sun that he found amongst the hunters that attacked his homeworld. Using his primitive urges, he has enhanced his dexterous strength with the blade by implying the feirce nature of his homeworld. The name of the style pronounced in Ferinian is called Kwikcklianistriusturoick. In human tongue, it is pronounced Vapaad. Vapaad's strength comes from the ability to harness a creatures natural animocity and applying it to sword combat. Being his creation, he is the sole living master of Vapaad.

    Ok, this is the character I am going to use. This is to give you a "preview" on what you can expect, along with a more firm set of guidlines for the Sign Ups.
     
    Last edited: Jun 16, 2009
  5. Moogle

    Moogle Well-Known Member

    I'll fill this in piece by piece. . . Now where did I put that picture? . . .

    Name: (First and last)

    Race: Barokan

    Gender: M

    Planet: Barok - A frozen wasteland planet - the result of the planet slowly moving outwards away from its sun. Thankfully, the Baroka discovered space travel and the intergalactic routes soon enough that they could make gravity generators and the like to keep the planet anchored in place. But, all the many years of the cold has tuned the Baroka race for extreme conditions. The planet is laden with metals and the like, and the people live in bunkers under the permafrost and snow. However, there are many places above ground where one can go. One of the best kept secrets of the planet is that it contains about 2000 tons of Francium, making them one of the deadliest foes to exist. However, theirs is a peaceful society, and they've only made weapons for self-defense.

    Appearance: YouTube - Baroka Citizen - He is of a larger species, and with that comes a tougher body. The harsh cold weather of his home planet has tuned his body for extreme conditions. His skin is thick and scaly, and his mouth has enough force to rip off the arm of somebody. As for physical strength, he can take on a small tank and throw it through a small house. The three small eyes between his main two are used to see in the dark.

    Biography/History: _______ was once a monk in a Baroka monastery, but eventually became tired of the monk life and wished for something more adventurous. He stole a Baroka fighter from a military base, and while his government didn't chase him down, they did disown him. Now, he takes up mercenary missions and travels throught the universe. . .

    Personality: Not a male of many words. Noble and quiet. He only speaks when he deems where he needs to intervene.

    Weapon/Altercations: Carries a railgun rifle with francium rounds. However, the amount of francium in the rounds is so minor that they'd only cause an explosion the size of an SUV. Also, carries a backpack that has two laser pistol 'arms' that can pop up over his shoulder and fire. Generally, though, he doesn't need to use these considering his brute strength.

    His ship is a Barok heavy fighter (Unfortunately, I have not designed it yet). It is slightly than a usual fighter, but as the name implies, it is more heavily outfitted. I'll fill in weapons once I design the ship.
     
    Last edited: Jun 18, 2009
  6. The Storm

    The Storm New Member

    Excellent. Thanks. Ill look forward to reading it.
     
  7. GrandShadow

    GrandShadow I accept your challange.

    Name: Novek Coros
    Race: Lunar Everto, Latin for Moon Demon
    Gender: Male

    Appearence: White skin and blood red spiked hair. He stands at 6 feet tall with pure red eyes. The whites, the pupil, everything, his eyes are pure red. Has pointed ears and a small tattoo of a crescent moon on his neck. He looks relatively human, besides his eye and hair color.

    Biography: Novek was born on his home planet of Lunaris. Lunaris is a desolate wasteland of silver rock covered in endless moonlight. His people are mostly miners that sell a precious gem known as Devil Light. Devil Light is used as fuel for defense barriers.
    Novek lived his life normally until the age of 30, when his planet was invaded. Novek fought bravely but still was forced off his homeworld. Since then he's been going from planet to planet, trying to discover who it was that took over his planet. He discovered his planet was taken over by the goverment so that they would control the Devil Light buusness. So Novek swore revenge and with his craft he can do it.

    Personality: Novek is carefree and lets things off very easily, unless they're from the goverment. That's when he becomes cold and heartless. Novek is smart and does his best to help others from the goverment.

    Weapons & Abilities: As a moon demon, his strength comes and goes with the cycle of the moon. Depending on the lunar cycle of the planet he's on his strength goes from puny human, to herculeon strength. He has a necklace with a special tech in it. If he presses he gets teleported to the bridge of his ship. In his boots are special anti-gravity jets that let him fly. He carries an energy blade with him at all time. At the press of a button the blade activates and is blood red in color. He also carries a small high powered pistol at his side at all times.

    His ship, named the Lunar Shadow, is a high speed fighter fit for three. He pilots it while his brother is gunner and his younger sister is navigater. The ship has powerful missles and armor piercing laser cannons. It can travel at three times the speed of light.

    here's my second character his brother

    Name: Jake Coros
    Appearence: Jake stands at 5'8" and is muscular for his height. He has short curly black hair with pure black eyes. He has a tattoo of a crescent moon on his right shoulder. He wears a black muscle shirt with a black vest and black cargo pants. He has steel-toe boots which he filed to a spike tip on each.

    History: Jake had overall the same history as his siblings. But while Novek was learning and his sister becoming a navigater, Jake was goofing off on his hoverboard. He would ditch his lessons and enter planetary contests which he almost always won. His family let it go cause he helped bring in more cash.
    When the planet was taken over he escaped with his siblings to a nearby allied planet. That's when he learned he had to take responsibility and help out. He learned many things while there and when they finally left, Jake was a wiser man. He has sworn to help and protect his remaining family no matter what.

    Personality: Jake is very cocky and stubbern, both of which piss off his sister. Despite the attitude problem, he's deeply loyal and cares a lot for those close to him. He hates the goverment and would like to try a direct assault but respects his brother to much to even suggest it.

    Weapons & Skills: Jake has kept his hoverboard throughout his life and has been modding it when he has some spare time. With it he can fly and travel at super-high speeds. It has straps that lock him in, so he has no worry of falling off.

    Jake carries a high powered laser rifle across his back whenever he leaves the ship. He's very accurate and thanks to his hoverboard, he can hit from any vantage point. The rifle is capable of piercing through most obstacles but the energy drain is great so he can't use it for rapid fire.
    He also carries special brass knuckles that create tranch knives on activation. This way he can fight close quarters as well.

    On ship he's the gunner. Using a turret that can rotate all around the ship he eliminates all blind spots. The cannon fires EMP shots to disable the foe before he lauches the powerful missle to finish things off.

    I plan on keeping their sister on the ship. this all you need to know about her.

    Name: Seleen Coros
    Appearence: She wears a blue shirt with short sleeves and dark blue pants. She has combat boots and a tatto of a cresent moon on the back of her left hand. Has pure sky blue eyes and long hair of the same color.
    Personality: Shes kind and reassuring, Seleen helps hold the siblings together during tough times. Her hatred for the goverment is why she puts up with her Brothers crazy schemes
    Skills: She can't fight but she's a first rate mechanic as well as one of the best navigaters in the galaxy. When her brothers are out doing missions and the like, she remains on the ship, upgrading and fixing it.

    btw they go in age like this: Novek 31, Seleen 29, Jake 25
     
  8. The Storm

    The Storm New Member

    Excellent SU's Shadow. Accepted. Btw, not sure if I said this or not, but the character limi for now is as many as you can handle. Unlimited.
     
  9. Moogle

    Moogle Well-Known Member

    I finally have a video (attempting to take screenshots is hazardous to my computer) and I'll have the profiles up soon.
     
  10. The Storm

    The Storm New Member

    Excellent Moogle. Again, I look forward to it.
     
  11. Moogle

    Moogle Well-Known Member

    The profile is finished - except for a name. Can't think of one. . .
     
  12. The Storm

    The Storm New Member

    Very very good Moogle. Your accepted. Anxious to see that ship design. Also, if your lookin for a name, try language translators. They usually come up with things that might suprise you.
     
  13. Moogle

    Moogle Well-Known Member

    You might want to start soon. It doesn't look like too many more people are coming. And I think I'll just whip up a name in a spur of the moment. It always works that way for me TT_TT
     
  14. The Storm

    The Storm New Member

    Nah, not starting yet, we need more people.
     
  15. InugamiGod

    InugamiGod New Member

    I'll have to dig up the character I made up for this back when you tryed somewhere else & it didn't work. I should be able to post it within a couple of days.
     
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