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the new wielder

Discussion in 'Traditional' started by demon of darkness, Jun 25, 2008.

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  1. demon of darkness

    demon of darkness New Member

    Prolouge:

    Earth, 2005-

    "virgil we have to get out of here, the whole place is on fire." the dovewing mansion was burning to the ground and the only survivors of the inccedent were virgil dovewing and his younger adopted brother jesse rakaksu, were barely alive at the edge of the forest near the mansion. "jesse.....jesse are you still alive?" "huh virgil who did this?" virgil clenched his fist, "someone did this, it was no accident......" suddenly a strange gas filled the area and the two passed out, the last word they heard was an old man saying, "these two will make fine subject's."
     
  2. What's this anyway/ I like it is it like the Roleplays.
     
  3. demon of darkness

    demon of darkness New Member

    no it's a fan fiction.
     
  4. What do I do in fan fiction?
     
  5. demon of darkness

    demon of darkness New Member

    well you just read what other people post or you can write your own story. and don't forget to comment about stories.
     
  6. Oh okay ummm
    "This world has changed, my friends family are gone we have nothing. The food supply is almost out. No more rations can be given, soon we have to fend for oir selfs. The virus....I-It's spreading and there's nothing...nothing we can do about it."
     
  7. demon of darkness

    demon of darkness New Member

    i mean your supposed to start your own thread and begin your fan fiction in your own thread, not this one.
     
  8. Oh crap. I am so sorry. I have never done fan fiction before. Forgive me.
     
  9. demon of darkness

    demon of darkness New Member

    it's no problem, you don't have to apologize.:) i'll be posting chapter 1 soon.
     
  10. Okay. I hope it goes well.
     
  11. demon of darkness

    demon of darkness New Member

    chapter 1, escape:

    earth,2008

    jesse: what.....the......voices i hear voices.

    voices: the subject is opening his eyes.......do something you fool. sir look the container is opened.

    jesse fell out of a container and stood up to see that he was surrounded by scientest.

    jesse: what the hell is going on?.........virgil......where's virgil?.......why am i here?

    scientest:you are experiment 3, dr. zakari found you outside of the dovewing mansion and put you in that tube in order to study your heart.

    jesse: my heart..........why?

    scientest: becuase you have an extremly strong heart, your emotions are amazing, now be a good pet and go back in your tube.

    jesse: like hell!!!

    the scientest pulled out their guns, all of them were pointed at jesse. suddenly a light surrended jesse and a weapon shaped like a key appeared in his hand. a voice went off in his head saying keyblade.

    jesse: key....blade, your all going down.

    jesse charged the scientest and beat everyone of them.

    jesse: now i got to find virgil and get out of here.
     
  12. Cool, I know this will be good.
     
  13. demon of darkness

    demon of darkness New Member

    chapter 2, experiment 1

    jesse was running in the hallway of some strange building, just then a team of security gaurds came running down the hallway. jesse hid in the nearest room, when he turned around he saw a tube with a boy that looked like a 15 year old. he looked down too see writing on the tube.

    jesse: experiment 1,........i wonder if virgil was experiment 2?

    jesse broke the glass and the boy fell out, the boy struggled to stand but jesse helped him up.

    boy: where am i........what year is it?

    jesse:well i don't know where we are and this is the year........wait what year is it.

    the boy looked around and replied.

    boy: i remember....i was chasing after xehanort and suddenly all these people started chasing me, they caught me......and brought me here.

    jesse: o'k just lay down and rest you look tired, hey do you remember yur name.

    boy: my name is...........riku.
     
    Last edited: Jun 26, 2008
  14. demon of darkness

    demon of darkness New Member

    chapter 3, ariana:

    riku summoned the way to dawn.

    riku: we need to move.

    riku and jesse ran a fought their way through the building until they saw a girl being dragged off. jesse stop the guards and freed the girl.

    jesse: hey.....hey girl you o'k?

    the girl opened her eyes.

    girl: yes.......but who are you and where am i?

    jesse: my name is jesse and i'm not sure where we are.

    girl: my father they killed my father.

    jesse put his hand on her shoulder.

    jesse: i'm sorry. whats' your name?

    girl: ariana...........

    jesse: that is a pretty name.

    riku ran past the two and told them to run. jesse picked ariana up like a bride and began running. they ran into a computer room. jesse walked over to a computer and found information on him. when jesse was finished looking at the info he jumped up in shock.

    jesse: i don't believe it..........it's the year 2008!!!!!!!???????
     
    Last edited: Jun 26, 2008
  15. demon of darkness

    demon of darkness New Member

    chapter 4, virgil!?

    riku looked at jesse with shock.

    riku: your kidding.......

    suddenly an alarm went off and the computer said self destruct seqeunce activated. jesse picked ariana and they headed toward the window.

    jesse: we'll have to jump

    riku: but it's to high.

    jesse: if we don't jump we'll die here.

    jesse and riku both jumped and landed on a helicopter launch pad. as they headed for the edge jesse looked up at the corner of the building and saw a man in red with a demon wing fly off. jesse and riku jumped off into the canyon below as the building blew up behind them. they landed safely in the canyon. jesse continued to look at the sky.

    riku: well that was close.........jesse is something wrong?

    jesse: i thought i saw my freind. virgil.........is that you?
     
  16. Oooooooh this is good.
     
  17. demon of darkness

    demon of darkness New Member

    chapter 5, samus company:

    riku: your friend.......

    jesse: yeah virgil, he was my brother......well his family adopted me. after my family was mudered virgil's family.....the dovewing family took me in.

    jesse looked over to ariana who looked kinda sick.

    jesse: hey ariana are you o'k?

    ariana nodded yes before passing out. jesse picked her up and walked over to riku.

    jesse: so what do we do now?

    riku: well we need to find shelter.

    suddenly a dark portal opened in front of them.

    jesse: virgil must of made this.........thanks......brother.

    as they stepped through the portal they were transported to another town. riku walked up to a sighn and it said.

    riku: mako town........

    jesse: how did we get here so fast.......

    riku: you mean you've never used a dark portal?

    jesse: no.......

    riku: well never mind now we need to find some place to spend the night.

    jesse: i don't have any money.

    riku: likewise.

    jesse stuck his hand in ariana's pocket and pulled out a huge load of cash.

    jesse: woah.....princess here has been holding out on us.

    riku: are you sure you should use that?

    jesse: well do you have a better idea?

    riku: no guess not.

    jesse and riku walked up to a hotel and checked in. jesse laid ariana on the bed gently and turned to riku.

    jesse: so riku, where are you from?


    riku: an island very far away from here.

    jesse: you mean like in the pacific or something?

    riku: not exactly...........

    jesse: i wonder who those guys were that was using us as experiments?

    riku: well what did the computer say?

    jesse: oh......i think there called the samus company.

    >i promise the rest of the chapters will be longer.<
     
    Last edited: Jun 29, 2008
  18. Alright I love this one so much.
     
  19. demon of darkness

    demon of darkness New Member

    chapter 6, the plot:

    meanwhile at samus co. head quaeters-

    sceintest 1: president sir......we

    president: NO EXCUSES.............i want those experiments captured and put back in a tube.

    scientest 2: but sir they........... two of them have keyblades.......

    president: WHHHHHAAAAAATTTTTTT!!!!!!!!!!.................are you sure it's just two?

    scientest 1: well that we know.....of.

    president: YOU PATHETIC FOOLS!!!!!! IF THEY ALL HAVE KEYBLADES THEN WE ARE DOOMED.

    scientest 1: but sir, surely four teenagers who can't even controll their hormones let alone keyblades can't be that hard to catch.

    scientest 4: no the president is right, if he was willing to destroy the east desert facility to stop these experiments then they must be extremely dangerous.

    scientest 1: sir you destroyed the east desert facility!?

    president: if i could destroy them inside the facility then they would not be able to harm society.

    scientest 3: but there was people in that facility, HOW COULD YOU JUST MURDER ALL THOSE INNOCENT PEOPLE!!!!!!!

    president: it was a neccesary loss, there deaths were caused in the pursuit of the extenction of every keyblade weilder. i do not regret destroying the facility and all those with it.

    scientest 3: why sir, HOW CAN YOU SAY THAT?

    president: if it will help destroy the keyblade weilders, i would do it again. now shut up before i have you killed.

    suddenly a staff member walked into the president's office.

    staff member: sir sir, two boys and a girl that matched the description of the experiments were recentlly seen in mako town.

    president: finally, send a legion of troops to mako town.
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    about 2 hours later in jesse's hotel room,

    jesse: hey riku, what are we going to do tommorow?

    riku: well......................

    suddenly a loud boom shook the room and ariana woke up.

    ariana: what the hell is going on?

    riku: no time to explain, the town is under attack!!!

    the trio headed to the top of the hotel and saw a legion of samus company warriors heading straight for the town and dark energy tanks already firing upon it.

    jesse: why are they doing this?

    a soilder on top of tank grabbed a mega phone and said,

    soilder: come out keyblade weilding scum and face us.

    jesse: keyblade wielding scum....................that's it i'm sick of this samus company, let's go.

    jesse, ariana, and riku summoned their keyblades.

    jesse: wow, ariana i did'nt know you had a keyblade.

    ariana: there's alot you don't know about me.

    she smiled and winked at jesse, jesse started to blush.

    riku: hey romeo and juliet, you can flirt later now come on and let's get these guys.

    jesse: hey what do ya mean romeo and juliet? we were'nt flirting...........at least i don't think we were.

    riku and ariana were already heading for the town gate.

    jesse: hey wait for me............

    the three young warriors charged at the gate.

    >more to come.<
     
    Last edited: Jun 30, 2008
  20. ..............AWESOME!!!
     
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