The New Organization II: Midnight Sun (discussion and improvements)

This thread is for all those who are involved in this certain rp to discuss how we can improve it. All those who are invovled in The New Organization II, have agreed to starting over. So lets discuss away.

Hope and I were discussing a new Villian. Semnax discovers a record containing details about a failed experiment that Ansem the wise was working on. He called this experiment "Project N". Semnax and the others decide to investigate Ansem's secret lab in the basement, in order to find more information on "Project N". Instead they find a secret chamber and within the secret chamber they find a man inside a pod. This man turns out to be "Project N". They also find another small report that goes into detail about "Project N". "Project N" was a human that Ansem engulfed in darkness. He hoped to use the darkness to increase the power of the soilders in his royal army. However "Project N" did not become a heartless, he was still inactive. Thus Ansem saw him as a failed experiment and locked in a pod deep within the basement of the castle. Semnax feels sympathy for "Project N" and releases him. When "Project N" is free, he reveals that his name is "Nero" and that due to Ansem's experiment he can control darkness. When Nero discovers that Semnax is Ansem's descedant, he attempts to kill Semnax and his entire family. Though semnax defeats Nero, he cannot kill him. Nero retreats and the heros prepare for his eventual return.

So what do you think?

 

Thanks. So do you have any new ideas?

 

Well we can start at the beginning, but we can just add the new characters later. Just add them in a different maner than before. That's what I was thinking anyway. What do you think?

 

O'k, that's fine. I want to change semnax's keyblade. I'm calling it "Way to Dusk". It looks like Riku's "Way to Dawn" Except it's silver with a black demon wing at the tip instead of an angel wing.

 

Yeah, I agree with everything.

 

Good to see you, sorabrawl. Jasmine is going to be more of a fighter? I like it.

 

Sorry about posting where I'm not welcome but this seems alot like the storyline behind Metal Gear Solid portable ops.......
Eventually I may join this but I can't post everyday which is a major burden.

 

what!!! but how....

 

What do you mean?

 

Well how many post per day would be good?

 

O'k. Sounds good to me. Anyway we seriously need to go to more worlds than just Hollow Bastion.