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The Hunt for God's Gem (Private Desert Warrior & PurpleDiamond) OOC

Discussion in 'Archive' started by Desert Warrior, May 27, 2011.

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  1. Desert Warrior

    Desert Warrior Well-Known Member

    If one's actions are great enough in life, their names are recorded into history. Eventually people forget about this history, and then it becomes myth and legend. One such legend is that of the hero Leonardo. Leonardo had with him a gem of immense magical power. Legends state that this gem has the power to make somebody a god, hence the name God's Gem.

    Centuries of the legend's creation, few believe it anymore. Those who do believe in it travel the world, looking for God's Gem and the power it grants. Naturally, nobody has ever found it. This does not discourage those who search for it. Everything becomes secondary to the people who search for God's Gem. They ignore the events of the world, even when they pass through nations that are currently enveloped in war.

    The people who search for God's Gem are from all different walks of life. Good, evil, it doesn't matter.

    Anyways, that's the general plot. Characters searching for this mystical gem.

    Here's the basic character sheet for you PurpleDiamond.

    Name:
    Age:
    Appearance: (Image or description)
    Personality:
    Weapons:
    Magic Ability:
    Bio:
     
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  2. Napoléon

    Napoléon Kuroko Fangirl

    Thanks. Nice introduction, by the way, DW :)

    Here's my character that shall be embarking on the quest for God's Gem.

    Name: Ayries Copper

    Age: 18 years old

    Appearance:
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    Personality: Ayries is a strict, diciplined young lady that always takes matters too seriously. She uses dry humour quite often and is being sarcastic most of the time. She's not the type to show her emotions to others and instead keeps them all bottled up inside. This is both her way to cope with the hardships she has faced and for her younger sister's sake.

    Weapons: A slim black katana that she's able to carry around her waist.
    [​IMG]

    Magic Ability: Ayries is able to use white magic to heal others. (Only can cast basics like Shell, Protect, Blindna, Cure and Dispel)

    Bio: Ayries lived a fairly ordinary life. When she was young (around 7) her father enrolled her in many different martial arts classses in order to learn self defence. He always believed that everyone should be able to protect themselves, especially his own daughter. Her parents later passed away to an unknown disease when she was 16, therefore, she was in charge of her younger sister Alyss' well being. Since they needed money and some food to survive Ayries had to get a job at the local market, stocking the stores inventory and making sure that all of the food orders were coming in when required. Now that she's 18, her little sister is also employed at the same place and Ayries is sort of like her superior because she has to be sure that Alyss is always on task.

    Do you find Ayries magic is a little too 'fantasy' or do you think it's all right? I'll change it if necessary :)

    I'm going to sketch up Alyss some other time, I have big plans for her that I'll tell you about via visitor messages.
     
  3. Desert Warrior

    Desert Warrior Well-Known Member

    The magic she uses is perfectly fine.

    Name: Gerik Gale

    Age: 19

    Appearance: Gerik stands at 5'10" and has a fairly regular sized body. He has blue eyes, but they're not exceptional or anything. They're a simple common shade. He has dirty blond hair and it tends to stay the same style (His magic keeps it that way). He hates wearing shorts and is always wearing pants. His sword is strapped across his back.

    Personality: Gerik is fairly easygoing. He prefers it when things aren't sad and depressing, and as such he tries his best to keep people from being upset.

    Weapons: [​IMG]

    Magic Ability: Magic Aura. This magic is a bit different than most kinds. He naturally has his magical energy surrounding him. This is always active, giving him some protection from things that would kill him (Such as falling from a very long drop) and giving him a bit of a strength boost. He is able to condense the magic around him to do things like repulsion and attraction. The magic around him is invisible.

    Bio: Gerik grew up in a small village located on the southern peninsula of the continent. His life has been fairly simple, nothing bad or eventful happening. He was raised on the ancient legends of the world. The one legend he believes more than any of them is the legend of God's Gem. In fact, Gerik claims to be a descendant of Leonardo. Once he was old enough (19), Gerik left his village in a journy to find God's Gem. He doesn't search for it out of some personal reason like most people. Instead he searches for it because he believes he's decended from the hero who used it in the past. Before he left, the town's blacksmith forged him his sword.
     
  4. Napoléon

    Napoléon Kuroko Fangirl

    Here comes Alyss; I'm debating if, when the time comes, to edit this post to show how different she becomes.

    Name: Alyss Copper

    Age: 16 years old

    Appearance:
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    Personality: Alyss is a sweet, jubilant girl who tries to live in a 'carefree' world or atleast that's what she portrays. She's not very responsible and often needs help from Ayries when she makes a mess. Deep down rooted far within her heart is a hate for her older sister who seems to be so perfect.

    Weapons: Why would a sweet girl, on the outside, need a weapon ?

    Magic Ability: Alyss can only perform simple white magic spells that her older sister was able to teach her when she wasn't working. She can cast Cure, Blindna and Shell.

    Bio: Alyss lived a fairly ordinary childhood with her parents and her older sister Ayries in a town named Catara. When she was 14 years old, both of her parents passed away from an unknown illness and ever since Ayries has been taking care of her. Often times Alyss felt alone because her sister had to get a job in order to support them and she didn't have many friends around. Now that she's 16, she finally got herself a job at the same local market as her older sister.

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    I'm just going to mention that the man who runs the market names Bert. Nothing all that special, he just needed a name because he's not all that important but he's both Ayries and Alyss' superior.
     
  5. Roxas

    Roxas New Member

    Character

    Name: Scytzu Huradame
    Age: 17
    Appearance:
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    Personality: Dark, eager for power, careless, fearless.
    Weapons:
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    Magic Ability: The ability to tell when someone is at least a mile radius of him.
    Bio: Raised an orphan, Scytzu watched as his parents were brutally murdered by a group of maniacs that searched for the God's Gem. They believed that the gem lived beneath his house. Scytzu realized that the gem must have been pretty valuable to draw them to murder people, so he wants to find it. He teams up with others to find it.
     
    Last edited: May 29, 2011
  6. Desert Warrior

    Desert Warrior Well-Known Member

    No. The title of this thread says this is a private RP.
     
  7. Roxas

    Roxas New Member

    *reads the title*

    I see.

    Huh. Well, now you're a shoe. *zap*
     
  8. Napoléon

    Napoléon Kuroko Fangirl

    All right, here I shall post the link to part I of our map.

    Link: Zelta.jpg picture by MonsterDreams - Photobucket

    Frankly, I can't directly post it onto this site because it will end up stretching the page massively. I'll put the link up after because I'll have to make a photobucket account in order for you to see it. I can't right now though because I have to run my dog to the vet soon >_<

    I'm going to write down the names of everything on this map here because I have small hand writing so it's just in case you have a hard time reading a few of them.

    Azera Village, Black Forest, Cameron, Carmina, Catara, Cherry Wood, Dell, Everon's Castle, Fela Mountains, Felatulla, Fenery Village, Fountain of Eternity, Gazin Hall, Gazin River, Jorta, Kierstein, Lake of Styx, Lekiki Village, Mento, Mesmera, Montagne de Vie, Nona Village, Ol' Man Halflyn, Preston, River of Souls, River of Styx, Riverview, Ryaza, Sawyor Harbor, Tanalia, Uneley Ocean and Yuki Village.
    (I think that's all of them)

    So (you can't see it now but you will soon) Sawyor Harbor is on the far west coast of the region and I was thinking that because your blacksmith was writing to his brother who's wealthy, his brother should live in Sawyor. If he's wealthy he should own a boat and our characters will need a boat in order to get into the continent where God's Gem will be found. {I'm going to start up that continent as soon as possible.} He could either be apart of our journey or just aid us in getting across the Uneley Ocean, it's your choice.

    Also, because empires are at war Carmina will be a huge empire who's currently battling another one on the other continent where God's Gem is. This will make it a dangerous thing for crossing the ocean because those two nations will mostly be battling on the waterfronts. Also I'm going to make a lot of the villages and towns on the other continent at war just because it would be a lot more fun that way. Where our characters live, Zelta, every town is mainly peaceful except for Carmina but that's found in the North West region. (Out of sight for the time being.)

    Also (I know this is a lot) but Everon's Castle will be a huge thing in our story, however, I'll go into further detail about it later. We needed some big tough bad guys after all (;

    Tell me what you think about all of this (The story part since you can't give me feedback on the map yet) and let me know if you want to change things or add something else. I think I'm getting a little too into this and I want you to have as much say into this as possible.

    (The names of the towns and cities from the other continent will be posted as soon as I make a map, from there I'll give you a bit more info about each place.)

    Thought I should add this but Ayries will only know the geography up to Lekiki Village or Ryaza (depending on which way we decide to venture in; you'll know what I mean when you see my picture.) After that it's asking the villagers in the places we visit, I guess.
     
    Last edited: Jun 21, 2011
  9. Desert Warrior

    Desert Warrior Well-Known Member

    Wow... I'm amazed. You've put in much more thought into this than I have.
     
  10. Napoléon

    Napoléon Kuroko Fangirl

    I edited my previous post and put the link up. If you want me to make a better map I honestly can. I spent maybe a half hour on that; Oh and you have to bear with my hand writing, I can't change it >_<

    A storyline keeps rushing through my head and I'm having a hard time containing myself. I also feel like I'm not giving you much say in this which makes me feel sort of bad. Like a control freak. If you have any ideas let me know, I really would like for you to have as much say as I do in this. So how does the Sawyor Harbor idea sound ?

    Also, the way I set it up is that after out characters arrive in Mesmera, we have a choice between which path we would like to take because we'll arrive in the same place no matter what. We can either take a long travel and venture to Ryaza and then later ford the Gazin River in order to get to Gazin Hall and take a break there, then from there we could get to Sawyor Harbor. (Remember that Ryaza is one of the large metropolis' in Zelta, along with Mesmera and Carmina.) Or we can hit a string of villages and go from Lekiki Village, to Mento to Cameron, to Tanalia and finally to Sawyor Harbor. Which way would you prefer ?

    Ohh and in my next post I'm going to introduce one of the bad guys, (I'll go in more depth in it once I get some feedback from you.) She's going to live in Everon's Castle and I've got to share some of my ideas on what I plan on doing with that.

    Also Ol' Man Halflyn is going to be a crazy old hermit that I plan on giving an important role to in which I'll share with you after (;
     
  11. Desert Warrior

    Desert Warrior Well-Known Member

    Impressive map. And don't worry about the writing. It is easy to read.

    As for where they're gonna go, we could have it be random. Like have the characters toss a stick in the air and see where it lands. To actually decide I'll flip a coin or something.
     
  12. Napoléon

    Napoléon Kuroko Fangirl

    Do you really think so ? :3
    My teachers always complain and tell me it's too small.

    Sounds cool with me. I feel like I'm getting out of hand with this story, tell me if I'm going too overboard or anything. This is just as much my RP as it is yours. I feel like I'm hogging everything though.

    As for Everon's Castle, the woman in my last post comes from there. I'll have to make a character sketch of her sometime, but I imagine her kind of like Lust from FMA (Full Metal Alchemist in case you didn't know.) Now, I was hoping that an evil lord {That you would most likely play, unless you want me to be a man in this} also lives in the castle. He can either be Everon, or he could be a descendant from a man named Everon. If you decide to control him, you can make him any way you like and create a whole backstory as to why he's after God's Gem. (Since that's ultimately what the two are after) They can have henchmen if needed and nobody knows about them because they live in the middle of the Black Forest, in which nobody travels through for fear of something will happen to them. There's many stories about how people have entered into this forest and have never returned. Both the male and female bad guy can either be friends or something else, it personally doesn't bother me. Let me know what you think about this up to this point.

    I also want to run by an idea with Ol' Man Halflyn later, but I've got to go. I'll be back in two hours or so I swear :)

    I'm going to start up the second map sometime tomorrow which will be the continent where God's Gem will be found.
     
  13. Desert Warrior

    Desert Warrior Well-Known Member

    Okay, so it's been a while. But I'm gonna go cast my mystical Smod revive for this RP. Oh, and get around to commenting on what you've talked about.

    Admittedly, I was planning on them meeting the brother in the next town they reached. They'd arrive at his summer home or something. And I was planning on there being more than just two brothers. I suppose another could have a boat.

    So what would happen? As they're traveling across the ocean they're suddenly attacked by a navy from the other side?

    A big tough bad guy can wait a bit. I was planning for the first few 'bad' people to be other people who are searching for God's Gem.

    It wouldn't be an adventure if they were familiar with everything.

    The idea is fine.

    Originally I was thinking they should go through the string of villages. But since you say Ryaza is a big metropolis, I'm considering there. But if Mesmera is also a big metropolis, it seems kinda redundant. I suppose we should just flip a coin in real life, heads Ryaza tails string of villages.

    Yay for crazy hermits.

    I haven't quite thought out anything for a big villain. Like I said, I was thinking first we just introduce some other people searching for God's Gem. A bit later we can have a big villain appear.
     
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