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Sorabrawl's Random Stories.

Discussion in 'Traditional' started by Ventus, Sep 30, 2009.

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  1. Sep 30, 2009 #1
    Ventus

    Ventus Kickass Keyblader!

    This is a thread for my random story writing. I put these on here so I can get ideas from you guys on how to continue it or get critiques for my story. Give me some good and constructive criticisms. Also if you'd like these as rps and help me get a good plot line that would be excellent but some of these, I might want to keep independent. Please enjoy.

    Mirrors

    Mirrors show your reflection. Mirrors show freckles on the face, the whiskers on the chin and the rosey cheeks. Mirrors can show the emotion on someone's face.

    (I'll continue this later)
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  2. Sep 30, 2009 #2
    Blade

    Blade Heroes Have One or Two

    hmm... maybe you could add 'mirrors can show someone's fate' or something like that. honestly, that's just my first thought.
     
  3. Oct 10, 2009 #3
    EtherealSummoner

    EtherealSummoner Lamentations 3:22-26

    ^_^ I've got a great one in mind!

    Mirrors


    Mirrors... the world of your reflection. The world where it opposes everything. You look into it & only see yourself, but it shows a deep, stronger meaning then that. Mirrors can show the inner, spiritual you. It is the guideway to the otherside of your world. Yes, Mirrors can show the pimples & the beauty on the outside, but don't you know that it can show the inner you. It can repeat what you do. It's more like a copycat. What you do in your world can affect the other side & what your alternate do affects your side....
     
  4. Oct 10, 2009 #4
    Ventus

    Ventus Kickass Keyblader!

    I like the idea. I've written about two chapters. I'll see if I can type them onto here, when I have the time.
     
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