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[One].::Still Doll::.[Other]

Discussion in 'Archive' started by Nova, May 25, 2009.

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  1. Nova

    Nova A Ghost Staff Member Administrator

    RP Based on this song: YouTube - Still Doll Karaoke

    //Plot//
    A Repunzil story like none before.

    The little girl stands on a lonely dark street under the cover of the pale moonlight. The open window of her father's home is behind her. THe rain is falling, drenching her hair and making it stick to her face but she doesn't mind. The rain hides her tears so well. In her arms lies the only posession that is truly hers anymore, a glass doll named Alice.
    She hears her mother and father arguing through the open window. Her mother is crying... but her argument is already lost.
    Her father has sold his only daughter to pay off his gambling obsession.
    THe girl screams and struggles as she is dragged to a sleek black car but nobody hears her protests and even if they do, nobody seems to care.
    The little girl was taken to the home of her new master and after that night... she was no longer an innocent little girl.
    Now eleven years later, that girl is still trapped by that man who purchaced her from her own blood. The only reminder of that rainy night when her life was changed is Alice, standing on the bedside table of a room that alice can never leave. Her only company by day is Alice. She dreams that Alice is alive... that she can hear her and that she cares.
    "Hi Miss Alice
    With your glass eyes
    What kind of dream
    Can you see?
    Are you fascinated with?"
    The girl dreams too... she dreams of freedom. She longs to feel the rain again. But she cannot. Her master comes to her every night... the girl knows what he wants and she gives it to him every night. It is her only way of paying back her father's debt. "Alice... can you hear me? Alice Do you dream of freedom too?"
    Alice never answers.
    The girl has given up hope... but one one day, as she is looking out the window she sees a boy on the streets looking up at her. Day by day after that she can see that same boy on the streets trying to communicate with her.
    At night when she is with her master, she finds herself thinking about that boy on the streets. SHe starts wishing that she was with him instead of her master. is she falling in love with that strange boy on the streets?
    ~~
    One boy remembers seeing a girl taken away in a black car when he was a child. He remembers her screams of protest. That memory haunts him that he never did anything to save her. One day, he saw a girl in a house he thought nobody lived in. He saw her face through the window, she looked so sad and so scared. For some reason, she looked so oddly familiar but she left his vision before he could remember. Day after day he came back to that house and tried to get a better look at her but as time passed on it became more than just trying to spark a memory. He finds himself genuinely eager to see her. Is he falling in love with the girl in the window?

    //Characters needed//

    Girl- Me
    Boy-

    //Rules//

    -Well duh this is going to be kind of a graphic RP but we're going to skip the graphic details.
    -Try to be active
    -No spammish posts. At least four sentences each post.

    //Template//

    Name:
    Age:
    Bio:
    Appearence:
    Other:

    lol this RP is based on a song and I had a little bit of OathkeeperXIII's help writing it. ​
     
  2. Desert Warrior

    Desert Warrior Well-Known Member

    I'll try out for the boy. Although I do feel a little bad posting here the moment I saw it, not giving anybody else a chance to post.

    Name: James
    Age: 19
    Bio: James grew up in the same town all his life. Almost every night, he is haunted by a strange dream. It is always the same one. It is a rainy night. He was walking home. In his path, there was a little girl being dragged away into a car. He had stood there, petrified. He questions why he did nothing, always telling himself there was nothing he could do. One day, as he was walking to a friend's house, James just happened to look up at a house he passed by. He saw somebody looking back at him. He felt as though he knew her, but before he could think of why, she was gone. So every day James would pass that house to see that girl in the window.
    Appearence: [​IMG]
    Other: I have a feeling that the age should be younger, but I'm not sure.
     
    Last edited: May 26, 2009
  3. Nova

    Nova A Ghost Staff Member Administrator

    lol dont feel guilty thats how it goes in bigger forums. Also, you might have made him just a couple years too old. I dont think I'm going to make this one a try out actually... ​

    anyway here's my character.
    Name: Annette Cutler

    Age: 18

    Bio: Ann was the only child of a rich couple in England. Her father had a sick gambling addiction and her mother was, very self concious about social standing, always attending tea parties and other frivilous events that would leave Ann home alone except for of course the houses servants. She was never enrolled in school because her parents had hired tutors for her so she never got much chance to interact with other children either. Ann recieved a doll named Alice from the cook of the house just a week before the old lady passed away. Annette really didn't have many friends except for that old cook so after she passed away, Alice was really the only one Ann considered a friend.
    When she was seven, her father got into some serious trouble with his gambling and was about to be arrested for not being able to pay but the man did something dispicable to save his own skin, he sold his only daughter Annette.
    Eleven years later Annette has been captive as a slave for lustful reasons in a home she is not allowed to set foot outside of. The only posession she has that she can truly call hers is the doll, Alice. The other servants of the house hardly ever speak to her and when Annette tries to talk to them she is punished. Over her years of confinement he has grown, as people would say, insane because of the fact that she speaks of and to Alice as if she was listening to her, like she actually cared. But the truth is, Ann has never known a true kind face except for the never moving porceline face of Alice.

    Appearence: [​IMG]
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    Alice: [​IMG]
     
  4. Desert Warrior

    Desert Warrior Well-Known Member

    I fixed the age. Although from what you put in the first post and in Ann's bio, I think the age is higher. 7 + 16 = 23, not 18. Just pointing that out.
     
  5. Nova

    Nova A Ghost Staff Member Administrator

    lol wow I feel like a blonde now. I didn't pay attention to numbers. I'll go back and fix that.
     
  6. Desert Warrior

    Desert Warrior Well-Known Member

    Don't stess yourself over it. I sometime pay too much attention to detail.
     
  7. Nova

    Nova A Ghost Staff Member Administrator

    lol it's no problem. I fixed the problem anyway cause it was bugging me.

    Ok I'm adding more characters to this story:

    The following two are also servants in the house of the evil master but they were both born into it. They are Annette's best friends though they have to keep their friendship secet to they dont get in trouble.
    Other servant: (Female)
    Other Servant: (Male)

    I'm not sure if anyone wants to play this role but I'll throw it out there anyway.
    The Master: (Male- Bad guy)

    Friends of James
    (Can only have two at most.)
     
  8. Destiny

    Destiny Guest

    I'll take the female servant character.

    Name: Jessica
    Age: 19
    Bio: Jessica is the evil man's niece. She is not treated anymore fairly then Annette, but she's treated some what better. she's a slave in the house, constately doing everything, dusting, yard work, shopping, and all the other hard work. She feels bad for Annette more then she does herself. She's her secret best friend.

    Jessica came to her uncle's house hold when both of her parents died in a huge fire at their house. She had no where else to go, her grandparents were already dead, the only person who could take her in was her father's evil (twin if ok) brother. She always despised her uncle.
    Appearence:

    [​IMG]
    Other: servant- female
     
  9. Oath

    Oath King Bitch™

    Name: Jen
    Age: 11
    Bio: Jen is a little girl that lives near James. She has been investigating what she calls the 'haunted' house for a while because she sees the girl in the window that never comes out of the house.
    Appearence: [​IMG]
    Other: She pretends to act a little older than she actually is. She honestly does believe that the house that Ann lives in is haunted though because she sees the girl in the window every day but Jen has never actually seen her try to communicate with anyone outside and she's never seen her leave the house.
     
  10. Nova

    Nova A Ghost Staff Member Administrator

    Both Profiles accepted. I dont mind starting this RP up now if you guys are.
     
  11. Oath

    Oath King Bitch™

    We coo wit dat cuz! Start the main thread when you get back online.
     
  12. Desert Warrior

    Desert Warrior Well-Known Member

    Umm yeah... We can start this now. I'm officially out of school.
     
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