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My Signatures. :3

Discussion in 'Audio and Visual' started by Twilight Roxas, Nov 4, 2009.

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  1. Twilight Roxas

    Twilight Roxas New Member

    Don't go too rough on me now. I'm a Photoshop beginner. Lawls.

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    Annnnnd, my Favorite:
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    Comments? Also, ._. Don't put that I'm a noob or something, it shoots down my confidence! D:
    I'll take nice, sincere criticism though. :]​
     
  2. alchemistz

    alchemistz New Member

    Ok, first of all, never ever put the text in the corner if it's unnecessary.
    You must put the text near the focal, it must be attractive.
    You must work in blending the renders, smudge them.
    Add some c4d/effects that goes with the flow of the render.
    Depth is important too, use the sponge tool and burn tool for that.
    Put the focal in the center so it attracts attention quickly.

    Hope these helps.
     
  3. Twilight Roxas

    Twilight Roxas New Member

    Ah, alright.
    .o. I'll try all that!
    But... the only problem I have is smudging and blending... the renders never look good with my backgrounds... and when I smudge, it messes up the render or looks retarded. >_<
    As for the text, I don't really like text in the middle of the render. Well, except on some. Depends really on what it looks like. .o. What if I make the text like... bigger? Would that have a good effect?
     
  4. alchemistz

    alchemistz New Member

    Read some smudging tutorials.
    The text must be attractive, it's a pain if we must search the text just to read it.
     
  5. Kitty

    Kitty I Survived The BG Massacre Staff Member Administrator

    The Cloud on chocobo image is poor quality, and it is not rendered very well. The same goes for the stock in the third sig. On the fifth sig, the image is stretched out of proportion. Or so it looks to me. >_< The Sora and Kairi stock could use some sharpening.

    I think one of the big things you need to work on is blending. You could try finding some blending tutorials online, since there are a lot of ways to do it. I personally don't use smudging very often. I'm more likely just to just erase with a soft brush on low opacity when I need to and then brush around the image with my colors or add my effects in.

    I also think your text needs some work, but I am not one to advise well on that. I think it's better to stick to simpler texts than some of the more decorative ones, and it should look like a part of the sig, not like something added last minute.

    I'd comment more, but I'm supposed to be back at work in a few minutes. I'll try to remember to come back and comment on each individually. Just keep practicing.
     
  6. Nine-Tailed Fox

    Nine-Tailed Fox New Member

    First sig: The stock is very poor quality.

    You should make sure you use a good quality stock.
    Try going here: planetrenders .com

    Also, Cloud should be in the center; text should blend in but still be readable.
    If the text looks sloppy, it's better to just leave it of the sig completely.

    Second sig isn't too bad; but the text needs to be removed.

    Third sig is also very low quality, and the background is kind of...eh.

    I can only rate one more right now:

    Last sig: Hmm, Sora and Kairi should be sharper.
     
  7. Kitty

    Kitty I Survived The BG Massacre Staff Member Administrator

    Found a little time to comment some more...

    Sig #1: Like I mentioned before, the render of Cloud is poor quality, and that drags the whole sig down. I also find the render size and placement a little odd. I feel like it leaves too much "empty" space to the left of the sig. Meh. I have a hard time comprehending the background. Is it made with brushes? I dunno, it doesn't appeal to me, but I realize that as a newbie you'll be playing around with all the different tools and effects. I made shittier sigs when I started out. :) Text is not good. Unlike alchemistz, I don't think it's necessarily a no-no to put the text in a corner. It's the font and color that don't work for me in this case, not the placement. This might just be me, but I find the text hard to read. It makes me squint at it for a second, and I don't like doing that. The black color makes it stand out awkwardly. I would've picked a color from the background or off the render.

    Sig #2: Not bad. I think the sig lacks a little depth. A curves layer or some brushing in white to make a light source would help with that. The render doesn't blend into the background well. It looks like you spent a lot of time with the background, then picked a random image and placed it on top. Text again is not great. This is partly just my preference, since I hate those sorts of fonts in general. But like in the last sig, the black color makes it stand out unpleasantly.

    Sig #3: Basically the same comments as I made on #1 and 2.

    Sig #4: Better blending, unless that's one stock image, as opposed to a render. The colors all suit each other. The placement of the dude with the flames? (no clue) is not what I would choose. I like my focals more towards the middle.

    Sig #5: I mentioned earlier that I thought the render looked out of proportion. I think the background looks better than it did in the first sig. I don't care for the text. I'm more distracted by the "Forbidden love" than I am by the people.

    Last, but not least, #6: I find the blue swirls very distracting, and they look out of place because the stock image is very neutral toned. I like the idea of the bubble for the text. It takes up a lot of space, though. Sora/Kairi image needs sharpened a bit.

    I feel like I'm writing all negative things, even though I tried not to. >_< Keep practicing and check out some tutorials online if you'd like, and you'll outgrow the newbish-ness.
     
  8. Riku

    Riku New Member

    Okay, mostly everything has been said on the previous post, but I would like to add something.

    As you continue to check smudging, blending, brushes tutorials, be sure not to add text at the end, I think that most of us when we finish a sig, it feels like it needs text to be complete or finish. So try to mainly play more with the background. I would like to see more sigs from you.
     
  9. Twilight Roxas

    Twilight Roxas New Member

    .o. Alright! I'll look up some blending tuts later. I'm not very good at blending so I really need to work on it.
     
  10. Twilight Roxas

    Twilight Roxas New Member

    Heh... I did get that render from Planetrenders. >_<

    'Kay. .o.

    Alrighty. :3

    Yeah.. I made it in a matter of 10 minutes.

    .O. Sharper. I'll try that! :3
     
  11. Twilight Roxas

    Twilight Roxas New Member

    .O. Okay! x]]]]]
     
  12. Twilight Roxas

    Twilight Roxas New Member

    I made the background out of my brushes. .O. Off the background or render. I'll keep that in mind!

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    Alrighty.

    .o. 'Kay!


    Okay. x]

    Yeah.. I rushed on this one more too, except the text really. x.o

    Sharpen, got it. x] And, I'll try and make the Cloud smaller.

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    :3 Thanks for all your comments!
     
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