My first character (Tell me what you think :P )

Name: Void
Race: Human/Heartless
Age:14
Weapon: Darkness of The Heart (Keyblade)
Abilities: Darkness warp
Story: Void's past is a blur to him, he barley remembers anything so he has set out to find the truth. He is part human, part heartless. his keyblade, Darkness of The Heart, may not look like one but it can still unlock worlds and also peoples hearts. His mum was human and his dad was heartless. (weird i know) He is shy and isn't very social with people. On his way to finding out about his memory, he finds out that he has just gotten into a massive mess with the heartless. Along his way he meets a keyblade wielding girl named Jade, and he feels as though she took a big role in his past, so he asked her to join him and she said yes. Soon enough, he comes across Xodiv, (zo-div) his nobody. Xodiv was the 14th member of the ORG.15 (later became ORG.13) and after Void defeated him, he gave Void a brief flashback of his past. Void then found out that he was the lost 15th member of ORG.15. Later, he comes across and mere 12 year old wielding a keyblade. The boy was being attacked by loads of heartless so Void and Jade decide to help him and take the boy with them. The boy tells them about the master of the heartless and that his name is Ken. Void figures that the master of heartless might have answers to his past. When Void finally confronts and defeats the master, he regains all of his lost memories and finds out that the master of the heartless is really his dad. After that Void dedecated his life to staying in the shadows but helping people in need. Jade, Ken and Void all keep in touch but never really see each other that much. *EDIT* i completely faild at this so im probs not gonna use it