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my anime works

Discussion in 'Audio and Visual' started by Vor, Apr 14, 2011.

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  1. Vor

    Vor Princess Eater

    this is for input on my anime works, i've done so far this first one i call "miss sexy cat".in the orginal image, only the bakini(i really don't think like all men so i ignored it and used it to make this sig to entertain you all)

    p.s: she has a cat tail and the background of the image was already black

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    please rate this image and any other i put here​
     
  2. Plasmos

    Plasmos Plasmos

    Yea this is so horrible I don't even know where to begin.

    It's too much going at once.

    • Remove the borders from the tag, that's a start
    • Choose a better stock to use with, so your tag can flow. (Not only that, it should be HQ)
    • Text ; your text needs to be appealing and purple nor yellow is working. Try white maybe?
    • Too much clipping mask, and your bg needs to be on a focus point, it just looks like you cropped a picture and paste it on the tag with using PAINT.
    • Also too much texture effects are ruining the tag overall, erase some of those orange sparkles, and not so much saturation either.
    • If your using Photoshop try Gradient Map to give it a nice shade flow ; color perhaps.
     
    Last edited: Apr 14, 2011
  3. Vor

    Vor Princess Eater

    trying out effects, made this on photoshop and fotoflexer, it's 480x200, just trying out effects, (the two below)

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  4. Kitty

    Kitty I Survived The BG Massacre Staff Member Administrator

    Sig #1: As Demaian said, way too much going on. It's chaotic. The colors are very uncomplimentary and oversaturated, besides. The placement of the stock image is wonky, too. The general rule, as I've seen, is to mentally divide your sig into three equal parts, and the focal should fall on one of the two lines that separate the parts. Which, looking back, you may have almost done that, but the way you divided the sig into essentially two very different parts makes it look all wrong. Text is pretty terrible. Take a look at Demaian's current signature, or Malibu's, for an example.

    Sig #2: Again with the chaos. And again with the random colors. Text is better than on the last sig, though where it is placed leaves a lot of "blank" space on the right. (Blank because there's no depth- my eyes just glide right over it). The render looks weird, jutting out above the rest of the sig.

    Sig #3: The focus is washed out and very hard to see. There's again not really any depth to the background, and the stripes take away any flow the black dotted effect may have had. This has the opposite problem of the first one in being way undersaturated. The white brushing obscures the text in an unappealing way, too.

    I notice you said you're using photoshop and fotoflexer. Why are you switching between two programs? Photoshop should be able to do anything any other program can, and then some.

    Way to be supportive. XD
     
  5. Vor

    Vor Princess Eater

    well i made another based off of a game and i've read tuts for my photoshop, GIMP. anyways here it is(needs to install more brushes so i can make them cooler)

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  6. Kitty

    Kitty I Survived The BG Massacre Staff Member Administrator

    Very low quality render, which takes away from the rest of the sig. You can see that it wasn't cut out well at all -there is still lots of jagged white around the image. Same problems I've mentioned before concerning the text. The double use of the render doesn't work too well for me. The yellow brushing is the start of something that could work, but it's surrounded by too much of that same black and gray background. There's also a purple brush or something that's a little out of place.
     
  7. Remedy

    Remedy Remnant

    Renderz! Aghhh! They are so unatracive!
    Anyways, to many sparks... all of them which use sparks need WAY less sparks or none at all.
    As you saw me mention first! YOU NEED GOOD RENDERSSSSSSSS!!!!!
    Horrible borders, (on the ones you do use borders) when you make a border, make it ONE color and make it THIN like 2 px or something...
    also brushes don't make a tag awesome, you do, if you know how to do the right effects
     
  8. FatewithFury

    FatewithFury New Member

    its like what Zol told me before its not the brushes that make the sig its the art itself.
     
  9. Vor

    Vor Princess Eater

    well something i made (the line idea is somewhat goldfish's since i'm trying something to see if this makes it better)

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    Damn had to edit to do this in it(my newest new org character) Kally
     
  10. Plasmos

    Plasmos Plasmos

    Yea, do not try to copy another artist's style. Find your own style is the key to a successful tag. I think you're cutting the render out too close to the edges. It just looks so messy, what did you do to the stock?
     
  11. Vor

    Vor Princess Eater

    well redid that and now here it is got bored and did this effect in the background

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    Might be a little suckish or too much going on but redone
     
  12. Kitty

    Kitty I Survived The BG Massacre Staff Member Administrator

    I don't have time for a very in-depth critique, but I will say quickly here that your renders are terrible. Very jagged edges with a lot of white. I don't even need to critique the rest of the sig- this kills it.
     
  13. FatewithFury

    FatewithFury New Member

    .....ummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm i thought my sigs sucked....
    ok u need to cut the renderz out better or find a alredy made render....and have u tryed making sigs other than anime girls.....
    and like zol said get some good renderz...
    the renders are way to jagged
    and personally this spark thing your doing just is wierd...i mean sparks are ok some times but in every sig it can agitate....
    ummm and best thing u should do is come up to one gfx player and show them in a PM u messin around with effects i mean they are cool but dont go and try showing the whole forums ur 'messing around' try to mess around and once u Get it then maybe start showing those and evantually u may get better may not but i dont know the future so i cant say u wont get better cuase u most likely will and try to find the one thing that YOU enjoy not the other members but what pleases YOU....thats what i have to say...
     
  14. Kitty

    Kitty I Survived The BG Massacre Staff Member Administrator

    I wouldn't talk too loudly about other people's suckage. You're about on the same level here.

    Planet Renders

    You have to join the site (but it's free), but it is well worth it- there are tons of renders for just about everything you could be looking for, ranging from the pretty good to the great quality. All are better than the ones you are currently using. Join and start using some high quality stock. It will improve your sigs just by doing that.

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    This is really just a mess. Besides the poor quality render, there's no flow at all. The red brushing in particular is just every which way, and with that particular render, I think it's actually pretty easy to see how the flow should go. There's awkward render placement here, too, with the render so far to the bottom of the sig. The colors chosen from the background both have nothing to do with the colors in the render, nor are they complimentary colors.

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    Pretty much the same comments here. No flow. Text is really distracting. The shadowy effect doesn't work for me, particularly when the render is so poorly cut.

    So yeah.
     
  15. Plasmos

    Plasmos Plasmos

    Lmfao! Pretty much what Toph said.

    Honestly, the only thing left for me to say is : do not use drop shadow for your stock, do not, because it looks like your stock is floating in space. And please work on the text, it's not looking so well.
     
  16. FatewithFury

    FatewithFury New Member

    yeahhh.....and check Dafonts and search.... Kingdom Hearts.....Trust me they are awsome...
     
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