Marvel Mistakes(copy rights)

This is about seven or so kids that find out that there parents work for an evil group that want to take over the world. But the twist is that the parents never wanted the kids, they had them on accident. So instead of killing them as baby's they thought(because there parents are super smart but crazy, like joker crazy) they would let them grow up till they knew more of he world and what they wanted to do. so then they could kill them slow and painfully.(sounds loco.) So some of the Kids are mutants(this is the Marvel Universe.) or aliens or just human but have some kind of weapon. this is the first few pages, not as exciting as it goes on. So hope you like these few pages than I'll put the rest of it on here. hope it's not confusing to read.

MARVEL MISTAKES
EXT. MIAMI FLORIDA STUARTS HOUSE-

RHONDA
Zrary where are you?

ZRARY
Right here mom.

Zrary a Black fifteen year old with dread locks came down from the basement before going all the way down. His parents all way said not to go down there.

RHONDA
What have we told about going down there.

ZRARY
That it’s unsafe to go down there.

MARSHALL
Well get ready for your friends to come over.

ZRARY
Dad why do we all was do this every year. I mean we live in Florida. Miami Florida! We should be going out to the island or something.

MARSHALL
Well we don't. We live here and we group here.

RHONDA
Anyway we have a giant house like this, we should always do stuff here.

ZRARY
All of your friends are rich. Anyway all you guys do is talk in the basement on how to stay rich.

MARSHALL
We do that so you can have a good life right now. Would you prefer the streets?

ZRARY (SARCASTICALLY)
No sir.

MARSHALL
Well clean up.

EXT.DALNENOS HOUSE-

A young Mexican girl of fourteen with long brownish and black hair was in the living room with her parents.

MARIA
Mom! Why can’t I go to this party?

MALINA
Because you have to come with us to the Stuarts house.

CHRIS
Anyway you get to see your friends.

MARIA
Well I would like to go to a party. Everybody well be there!

MALINA
Well think of this as a party.

MARIA
While you guys talk about how to stay rich?

CHRIS
Yes.

MARIA
Well could we stop for some Subway?

CHRIS
No. Now lets pack up. We have to get there before eight.

MARIA
We are only fifteen minutes away from them.

CHRIS
Well lets get there early.

EXT.RODGERS HOUSE-

CASSIE
Dad, can I join the national math test.

Cassie a young Caucasian of fifteenth with short brown hair was talking to her parents. Marvin how was a strong looking man with a bread only and a little orange hair was sitting next to his wife Tina. Tina a women with brown hair and a little round was sitting next to him.

MARVIN
Why?

CASSIE
Because it well test me against kids from all over the world.

TINA
Sure why not.

MARVIN
How much is it?

CASSIE
It’s free.

MARVIN
Well see when we get back for the Stuarts.

TINA
You will most likely win anyway.

MARVIN
I still don’t see why it’s so important.

CASSIE
If I win I get a scholarship from Harvard and 30,000 dollars.

MARVIN
Well then you better win that.

TINA
When is it?

CASSIE
Next year.

The parents gave each other a small simile then turned to Cassie.

MARVIN
Did you take your pills?

CASSIE (LYING)
Yes. But don't see why I have to take them now everyday.

TINA
You will take them everyday, now get packed up to go.

EXT.LEES HOUSE-

Atena, a African an Asian mixed girl of eleven was in her room practicing the martial arts. Her parents don’t know but she found out she has powers. Super powers. She can already control her powers. She knew that if she told her parents they would put her out the house. If they found out she could fight, it would be even worse.

FANG
Atena time to go.

ATENA
Coming.

FANG
Make sure your bag is packed.

ATENA
Yes sir.

Her father she thought was crazy. But her mother was okay. But she was always in the house, she had no friends because being African and Asian is hard in a nearly all white school. The only other person she knew well in that school was Maria. She was Mexican, she was happy she was going to see her. Even thought she was only ten and Maria is fourteen they were friends.

FANG
HURRY UP!

ATENA
OK.

TAMINA
Make sure you listen when we get there.

ATENA
OK.

FANG
And what is that banging.

Fang came up to her room and looked at her. When he opened the door and saw her in martial arts suit.

TAMINA
What are you doing?

ATENA
Just acting like daddy.

TAMINA
Well take it off.

FANG
Never put it on again.

ATENA
Then why did you but it?

FANG
I SAID TAKE IT OFF!

TAMINA
Don’t yell at her, she is only eleven.

FANG
You know she is tougher than she looks. That sweet act wont fool me.

EXT.SHANS HOUSE-

SUSAN
Hey mom can I talk to you?

KELLY
What is it?

SUSAN
Remember when Dave my dog died.

KELLY
Yes.

SUSAN
Well I had a dream that he came back and I brought him back. Then I looked at the grave in the back yard the dirt was moved.

KELLY
We can talk about this later.

SUSAN
But.

KELLY
Later! Now go to the car.

Susan went out to the car while Kelly called her husband.

JACOB
Yes sweetie.

KELLY
We might have a problem with Susan.

JACOB
What?

KELLY
She is developing her power.

JACOB
How do you know.

KELLY
Her dog, it’s species was dead. But he came back to Susan. She might learn to bring back any extinct animal.

JACOB
We can deal with it later. We should tell the others.

KELLY
Good idea.



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