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Light Up The Night

Discussion in 'Audio and Visual' started by NeRo, Jun 10, 2012.

  1. Jun 10, 2012 #1
    NeRo

    NeRo Your Supreme Lord And Savior Staff Member Administrator

    I'll be uploaded some of my best images and some of my not so good images. I would appreciate if you guys gave me Correct Critique on these, good or bad.

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  2. Jun 10, 2012 #2
    Destiny

    Destiny Guest

    I like them all, but here's just minor critique I can offer.

    1.) this one I'm not impressed by knowing a lot of your work. In my eyes there's two major things wrong. It's too busy and this may be my phone but it's bright on her face that details such as the nose and mouth are too dificult to see. Perhaps take away some of the extra effects and brushes around her left shoulder will help, that red spot is just awkward, then sharpen the lower half of her face just a little so that the lines are equal to top half. The smexy of the text smexy love on my phone I had to zoom into see.

    2.) this one is actually one of my favorites. The only thing is maybe try to blend in "Tira" to assure attention wont be drawn away from her.

    3.) I like this one and then I don't like this one. It's simple and I like it however the heartbeats or stereo level or the random lines at the bottom seems a little awkward to me. If youre going to put anything there I would put anything there I would just make it seem like there's a light source at the bottom out of the shot. Also your signature sticks out more than the others

    4.) So I'm running out of time so I'm going to be quick about it. For this one the major issue is it's far too busy for me and the signature again sticks out.

    5.) This one is my favorite. To be honest though compared to me saying about how busy it was, but I think in the foreground Id spread the chemical effects.

    6.) this one I do not like. Knowing all your work, this looks like beginner for you like something you did on your first day. I really don't even know what to suggest about this one.


    Like I said I've run out of time, I can continue if youd like but my favorite is 5 worst is 6
     
  3. Jun 20, 2012 #3
    Kitty

    Kitty I Survived The BG Massacre Staff Member Administrator

    I pretty much like all of these.

    1: The effects are pretty and I think the text looks nice. Colors are good, too.

    2: I don't like this one so much. The render and the background just don't look good together, I'm not really sure why. If anyone else had made it, I'd probably say it was a good job, but there are so many pieces of yours that I like so much better that this one kind of falls short.

    3: It's simple and I like that, but it's also maybe a little too simple? I have a similar feeling about this as I do about #2; it's not as if it's a bad signature, but I like others better.

    4: I really love this. The colors and the effects just look really nice together. I like that "busy" sort of style. And I also think the text is done well.

    5: Simple, but nice. The text is a little bit boring- this must be a really old tag if it's got Xelhes on it. XD

    6: The background looks good, but I've never been a fan of sprite sigs. So I think it's well done, but I don't like it.
     

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