Kingdom Hearts Souls of Darkness II (OPEN INVITE) OCC SU

Ok so I felt that since the RP was at a good spot I would make a 2nd one and open it up for sign ups!

KHSOD I Overwiew:
Zoren and Sahara were madly in love when the searchers came. The Searchers were causing great distruction across there home The World That Never Was. They fought hard. They finnaly found the light at the end of the tunnle and were suddenly transported to traverse town. There they helped the town folk take back the city. In the procces Zoren lost Sahara to a Searcher and Sahara became part of Kingdom Soul. Zoren fought alone for a while. Sahara watched over him though, knowing he needed help, she opened a portal taking him to hallow bastion. There he met Will and Shiela. Will was a man on a mission to regain his throne, and Sheila was a strong fighter who wanted to end the Searchers reign. Zoren fell in love with Sheila, forgetting about Sahara. Zorex then came into the picture after Will regained his throne. Zorex is a evil man who in the end became the most powerful Searcher. Zoren freed Sahara from KS and Saharas soul went back to her body in The World That Never Was. Zorex took this as his chance to gain a allie. He took Sahara under his wing, turning her into a Searcher.


Overview of the Big Picture of KHSOD"
100 years after Soras epidemic there rose a new problem. Searchers. Searchers are a evil race with the only intent on becoming whole. They are evil beings who reign between light and darkness. There have been many keyblade barrers after Sora but have died out to only few because of the Searchers. Those few hero's are known as Zoren, Shiela and Will. They are all very different people. They have fought hard and strong.And in there fight against the searchers they have found the light inside themselves and brought back there counter parts. Zoren has brought back Sora Shiela Kairi and Will Riku. King Micky has even joined the battle to. Will is now proving himself by fighting in Kingdom Soul as his ansesters have done before him. Now they are all stationed in Hollow Bastion. They have worked together to take back the throne of Will's castle. Zoren and Shiela though have a secret love. One that Sahara, another keyblade wielder, didn't know about. While Sahara was stuck in Kingdom Souls (The place were souls go when they are soul sucked by Searchers) Zoren fell in love with Shiela after he loved Sahara. Now Zorex, Zoren's evil brother has caught up to Sahara after her finnaly escaping from Kingdom Soul and has turned her into a powerful Searcher just as Zorex is.
Now with Zorex and Sahara together there is no telling how powerful they can be. They both have power over the Searchers.

Ok basic story line: Zoren, Will, Sheila, Sora, Kairi, Riku, and Mickey are all in Hollow Bastion after a major battle against Zorex.
Zorex has caught up with Sahara and turned her into a searcher and against the heros.

Important things you need to know:
Searchers-Came from the void between light and darkness. Searchers can souls suck people and send them to Kingdom Soul. Once KS is completed the Searchers will become whole. Searchers are also looking to destroy Keybladers.
Ruled by Zorex and Sahara

Keybladers: People with Keyblades who are fighting the Searchers. They are looking to set things right. The Keybladers are Will, Sheila, Zoren, Sora, Kairi, Riku, and Mickey.

Similarities: Zoren=Sora Sheila=Kairi Will=Riku
Zoren is kind and is looking for change. He has a strong heart like Sora.
Sheila is like Kairi because she is kind and kind of timid. She loves Zoren just like Kairi loves Sora.
Will is a dark man with dark secrets like Riku.
Sora Riku and Kairi were all brought back through the light in each of Will, Zoren and Sheila's hearts.


Template:
Name:
Age:
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Charecters
Zoren-Axel545
Sahara-Axel545
Zorex-Axel545
Sora-Axel545
Sheila-GC4
Kairi-GC4
Will-Curtis
Riku-Curtis
Zane-Kiarigrl888(Has not posted yet)
ALL THE CHARECTERS PEOPLE POSTED IN NUMBER ONE WILL CARRY OVER TO NUMBER TWO!!!

BASIC RP RULES APPLY

ANYONE CAN JOIN EVEN IF YOU WERE NOT INVOLVED IN THE LAST ONE

 

For one, I think we should have kept the firast going but ok. And second, Will is in Kingdom Soul

 

Could you add a detailed summary of what happened in the first RP so people know whats going on who weren't in the first one?

 

Well thats what the overview is for silly. But I guess I can add a backstory.

Edit:Its posted.

 

Well it's kind of poor. You just go right into it. There's no, how did this happen, or anything to lead up to it and explain what happened in the other RP. Then for this RP explain the goal a little better for RP'ers to achieve, sort of a hint of this RP's plot. Then what are people going to making in this RP. Keybladers, these searchers, what? This all needs to be explained into a detail report in a way. It also should be a lot more organized and broken up into paragraphs then rambling on about the samething then skipping to something totally different.

The OOC for sequals should almost be a combination of the new RP, the other RP's, and the OOC from the other RP(s).

 

Ok, I fixed it I think.

 

Well then that's a lot better thank you, just remeber to set up that way in the future too

Name: Yumi
Age: 17
Appearence: black converse on though

Weapon:

Personality: Yumi is a cool sort of girl. She is very smart and clever. She also a street smart kind of person able to come up with plans and everything.
Bio: Yumi has lived in Traverse Town not to long ago, but something came up where her family and her moved to Hollow Bastion(Radiant Garden?). Yumi's father's soul was taken by the searchers and ever since then her mother worries about Yumi possibly being taken. They moved to Hollow Bastian only to see the searchers were there too. Due to this Yumi isn't allowed to do much or even allowed to leave the house. Yumi though has been having weird dreams of late and knows she needs to face the searchers, she doesn't know why though, until one day.

It was actually at night though, Yumi couldn't take it anymore and sat out on the roof of her house. The night was quite but then there was piercing scream through the night air. Yumi stod up and saw as a man was running from something and Yumi saw it, searchers. Before she knew the man's soul was sucked away and Yumi lost her footing and was surrounded by the searchers. She believed there was no hope when she closed her eyes though a voice said in her mind she would never forget "You're the choosen one, it's up to you..." When she opened her eyes a magical weapon appareared in her hands she learned that it was called a keyblade. She has been keeping it to herself and undercover at night though she goes out and fights the searchers with the keyblade.

Slowly though the searchers have been hunting her down at one point so bad that they surrounded her house as her mother was petrified. Yumi couldn't go out to fight them though because of her mother.

 

You are accepted


(yes thousandth post)

 

As I just posted on axel's template, I have read the first RP, and what the?! Seriously what kind of RP is that?! It's not a RP it's spam! And this RP is starting out the same way. There's no organization, no creativity, no effort, nothing. I'm surprised you all thought this was a famous RP because this is far from that. The first RP isn't even done yet, and 3 pages, really?! Like really?! This shouldn't have been made yet, I could see perhaps a chapter two started, but started in the same RP! Like come on people! I know you can be better RP's than what your acting like it. Really the RP that was started should be merged with the old one, and quite honestly the old one should just be delete along with thisone and completely started over. No effort, no organization, no back story, no nothing! Plus in this RP, there's not a single intro RP post! It may be a continue from the first one, but it's a new one, there should always be an intro post, plus that other RP didn't have any intro post neither. It just hopped into the RP there's Axel's character fighting curtis's character, like really, come on!

This is so frustrating, and curtis I'm really surprised by you, I'm mean come on, I've seen you RP so much better than this before!

I want all of you to read the RP rules and guide line and study up. My suggestion, both the first part and this one be deleted and you start all over completely fresh and new with a lot better organization and I don't know a tad bit more of an effort. If needed, Axel I can help you set it up better if to restart it. I'm very disappointed in all of you for being such poor RP'ers in this RP, it deserves to be done a lot better and far more professional

 

Ok, im sorry but if your just going thrash at this RP then I don't think I want you to be in it. You are unaccepted. Im sorry.