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Kingdom hearts Fan Fic

Discussion in 'Traditional' started by Rhodis=Jynx, Jun 20, 2008.

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  1. Rhodis=Jynx

    Rhodis=Jynx New Member

    Ok this is a work in progress I am writing and I think it would be cool to get some feed back as I go.


    Branch II is almost complete.........The masks they wear are fading..........What power, there is no way they can be killed.....................No use, Sora is dead.

    “There isn’t much time left.”
    “The keyblades strength is failing.”
    “I and Jynx have been fighting for days”
    “Rhodis can’t stand this much longer”
    “I must rewrite time, and set right the war.”
    “Rhodis!?!”
    “TIME TURN!”


    Prologue

    Toxnes raised his hand and the hall fell into silence. The large nobody now held control over the room. His dark grey hair and eyes glanced over them. All thirteen were now present and in full power. Toxnes regarded the group and noted each ones distinct story. Each had a reason for fighting and each wanted their hearts back. Slowly and with a great demur of power Toxnes stood from his white marble throne.
    “This room now holds a group of men and women who have paid the price for being strong, wise,” he faced the throne behind him. “Or kind. We are those who were chosen by heartless to become the tortured souls known as Nobodies. But now it is time to rise up out of the ashes of the last and failed organization. It is time for us, the true and elite.” He turns and nods to each member in turn. “To take our place as rulers over the lands we knew.” The hall was instantly filled with claps and a few random cheers. All save three people. Jynx, Xenroc and Toxnes. The three walked out of the room into a separate hall.
    “Simple speech. They each have potential.” Xenroc said staring at the door of the hall as he closed it behind them. His black hair flowed over his broad shoulders.
    “Only enough to fight and die. As is the existence of a Nobody.” Toxnes said grimly looking down at his hands.
    “Perhaps we can cheer you up, I believe we have some good news for you.” Jynx piped in as he walked past the other two and went straight up a wall. He wore his usual purple and white face paint to give him the appearance of a jester. His purple hair also added to the affect that he seemed to enjoy.
    “News? What is it Xenroc?” Toxnes said slowly facing the greatest nobody alive.
    “You said that we only fight and die. I have found that because we lack the other two parts of ourselves. Heart and soul. We may exist up to three times.”
    “Xehanort did this didn’t he?” Toxnes questioned.
    “Only just.” Jynx said now on the ceiling. “But we are all at least double his power and we are not as alone as you think.”
    “Where Is Roxas!” Yells a fiery voice in the void.
    “Is that...” Toxnes began.
    “Axel.” Jynx and Xenroc said together.
    “Ahh,” Toxnes said a slight grin on his face. “The old orginazation still exists.”
    “Yes, but I was refering to the other project of Mine.” Xenroc said walking in a small circle around their leader.
    “How many do you have now?” Toxnes said looking straight ahead. Xenroc didn’t speak but held his and out and ten masks floated in the air infront of them. Each mask was ornatly decorated and designed.
    “Branch two will be unstopable with the next three.”
     
  2. 1-up salesman

    1-up salesman New Member

    Sweet! I can't wait for the next chapter.
     
  3. Rhodis=Jynx

    Rhodis=Jynx New Member

    Chapter 1

    The world shook beneath him and large black walls sprouted around him separating him from the rest of the Keyblade wielders. Reaching out his hand to try and reach them but a sharp pain seared through his outstretched arm. Blood spilled from the cut and his key blade appeared to protect him. Shadow and Neoshadow swarmed out of the wall and rushed towards him. Three hundred charge and die at his feet for another six hundred to take their place. Cuts and wounds appeared but they didn’t slow their assault.

    “Rise and shine lovebirds.”

    Sora awoke with a start. His face was covered in sweat and his breathing was rapid and harsh. The nightmares were coming more and more often and Kairi was starting to notice. He looked in bed beside him where she lie, still asleep and smiling. Sora calmed down and kissed her cheek softly.
    “Sora! Kairi! Wake up or you’ll miss lunch.” Sora turned to face the door on the gummy ship. Riku had mellowed out a lot after meeting Erah. He seemed to forget about the darkness inside him though he too was having nightmares. Sora leaned over and shook Kairi a little and she started to moan. Sora reached over their bed and grabed his pants and shirt. He had always liked how his old black suit had fit him but now it was too small. Leon had let him have a suit much like his own but without the gloves or vest. Kairi took his old suit and made one for him and he thought it looked nice. Riku teased her about it though. It was her wedding present to him and he had gotten her crystal crown. He put the outfit on as she started to rise.
    “What time is it?” She asked in a groggy and dazed voice. Sora looked around the ship but the clocks were all missing. Then he recalled what Riku had said. “ Wake up or you’ll miss lunch.”
    “Kairi, Riku stole our clocks and let us sleep in! We may land at any moment or we landed already.” Kairi’s eyes tripled in size. They had planed to land today and see what information had been gathered by Aroth and the others. And it was always good to see some friends. Recently heartless have been oddly aggressive. The three new keyblades seemed connected to this outbreak. Aroth the darkest of them all with his long black hair and cruel attitude. Rhodis with his past a blur to himself and others. Then there was Erah who had never shown skill in fighting. Though only the weak have stepped up it has made life far more tiring for them all. Sora put on his coat and, checking to see if Kairi was covered, left the room. Riku and king Mickey were both awake and at the wheel of the ship. Sora looked at the clock on the ship. 6:30am. Sora looked at Riku who merely smiled and went back to driving. Mickey couldn’t hold back a chuckle.
    “Are we there yet!?!” Kairi asked stepping into the main room of the ship. She glanced around then noted the clock and gave Riku a look that would kill Cloud. This made the smile on his face turn to full out laughing. Mickey couldn’t stop laughing to save his life. Sora was about to threaten them when he saw Radiant Gardens. He sighed lightly. They may have been woken early but it was well worth it to see the sunrise from the top of the castle.
    “When do we land?” Sora said, interrupting the laughter.
    “Not long now” Riku said looking over his shoulder to smile at them. Riku patted his pocket for a moment then opened his mouth to say something when a red light began flashing. Riku’s happy demure quickly departed and he turned to see the problem. On the planets surface there was a black spot that began to grow.
    “HEARTLESS!” They all yelled in unison.
     
  4. 1-up salesman

    1-up salesman New Member

    Good job. Are we going to see the new Organization again in the next chapter?
     
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  5. Rhodis=Jynx

    Rhodis=Jynx New Member

    Sadly in the next chapter I wont but later I will. More than that! I have a theory about nobodies. Powerful nobodies are allowed to have three life times. After each they get more powerful. So the old orginazation is still alive except Xehanort who already died three times. I also introduce a new orginazation with two actual branches.
     
  6. Rhodis=Jynx

    Rhodis=Jynx New Member

    Chapter 2

    Sora jumped to his station beside Riku. Donald and Goofy’s ship flew up beside them and began to make the charge into a battle landing. Soon after Sora’s ship began the same decent.
    “From here they look like Shadow and Neo Shadow!” Donald yelled over the radio as the came within the atmosphere. Sora’s eyed Riku and the King and they each gave him the same worried glance. Sora looked at Kairi who had strapped herself into a seat by the rear cannon. Not very helpful in a charge. She didn’t care much about that. To her she was happy just to be near Sora. He was broken from his thoughts when they roughly entered the atmosphere. It was bumpy and thicker than he remembered but that’s how it was with every landing. Sora watched closely making sure that no one innocent was near the heatless when he began to fire.
    “SORA WAIT! CLOUD AND THE OTHERS ARE DOWN THERE!” Goofy yelled into the radio. Sure enough right in the center of the black smudge was a small group of people fighting the oncoming horde. Leon, Cloud, Tifa, Yufi and the keyblade wielders. Sora stopped his firing and began preparing to land in the heat of combat. The darkness began to grow as they got closer and closer. Sora braced himself for the landing as the ground zoomed in on them. Thousands of heartless’s eyes looked up at their impending doom.
    The ship hit with a loud crash and it crushed a large number of heartless and raised a cloud of smoke. Donald and Goofy’s ship had landed moments earlier a few meters over. Sora summoned his keyblade and smiled. Kingdom key was his first key, his only key now that his last quest was over. The door for the ship opened and he charged out as heartless tried to charge in. Sora swung left and right destroying all heartless who attacked. Mostly shadow but a few neoshadow. Sora looked over his shoulder for a second to check on Kairi who was doing fine for herself between Riku and the king. Sora smiled then turned around to a horror. Rising out of the shadow heartless was a giant shadow of himself.
    “Sora! Look out.!” Kairi yelled as the shadow Sora opened his eyes. All the shadows and neoshadows merged together to create his giant shadow kingdom key. Riku and Mickey ran up to join Sora at the front of the field of battle. The giant heartless turned to Sora then began the fight with a huge slice from it’s giant keyblade. Sora and the others rolled out of the way before it hit then they began their attack. Sora ran up to its feet and began slicing into them. King Mickey was hitting the other foot with his golden keyblade while Riku began running up the giant shade keyblade. The giant beast kicked Sora sending him through the air to land on some rubble. Mickey soon followed also being kicked. Riku was at the handle of the shadow keyblade when the giant heartless swatted him off. Sora rubbed his back gingerly feeling for breaks while he looked at the giant. It seemed weaker from a distance but right up on it they had done no damage at all.
    The shadow looked at Sora and smiled a crooked and evil smile. It then sunk down into the ground before anyone could call out and then just as fast it rose up again right in front of Sora. Mickey cast thunder aiming for the beasts face but hitting its shoulder and doing nothing. The shadow smiled again then raised its keyblade and a giant bolt of lightning fell from the sky towards Mickey. Riku jumped in the way casting dark shied to protect them both. Sora raised his keyblade and cast Curaga on them all repairing the wounds cased by the monstrous punts. The lightning stopped and the shadow brought his key straight down in an attempt to crush the heroes quickly.
    Kairi watched the heartless use Thundaga on the group cracking and sizzling the air around them. She ran inside the gummy ship and turned the rear cannon, the only one she could control, towards the shadows face. She aimed carefully as it brought its monstrous key downwards then she fired stopping its attack and possibly causing some damage. The smoke from the rounds explosion lingered for a moment on its face then without warning it sunk again. Kair swiveled the gun as far as it would turn in any direction without any sign of the giant. She looked all around but the beast was no where and it seemed she had done some good damage. She smiled than gave Sora a thumbs up.
    He looked at her and smiled back, she had hit her target and it looked as if she had done some good damage. He began to give her a thumbs up when a giant shadow hand reached out of the ground and grabed the gummy ship. Sora gasped in horror as the giant rose again and lifted the ship above its head. Sora watched in fright as the monster through the ship high into the air then swatted it down towards the ground and destruction.
     
  7. 1-up salesman

    1-up salesman New Member

    KAIIRIIII!!!!!!! Good Chapter.
     
  8. Rhodis=Jynx

    Rhodis=Jynx New Member

    Chapter 3

    “Noooooo!” Sora yelled as he ran to get as near as possible. the ship was coming down fast and he was too far to do anything but watch.
    “Gravaga!” Donald yelled stepping out of his ship and the black spot of pulling magic appeared right above Kairi and the ship slowing it to a mildly soft landing. Donald than turned to the heartless casting multiple blizzagas and thundagas towards the head and face to no avail. Goofy rushed out and began bashing and hammering the legs of the giant with his shield also doing no damage.
    The giant looked down at them both in slight amusement then with a slight jerk of his hand he swung the keyblade hitting Donald launching him into the remnants of a house.
    “Donald!” Goofy yelled then he two was hit and launched into the same building. The shadow smiled at his own skill then turned to Sora.
    “Two hits, two targets, one result. Not bad for my first try huh?” The shadow asked in a voice slightly younger than Sora’s. Sora didn’t know what to say, or do. He had never fought a heartless that spoke so well or so simply.
    “Who are you!” Riku yelled running up to Sora to stand beside his friend.
    “I am nothing more than the heatless of a world left and abandoned by all who could protect it. Even worlds have hearts young fools.” The shade stated then it looked down at the keyblade. “Now it’s time to make yet another.” He grinned evilly then sunk his keyblade into the ground.
    “Not yet.” came a voice from behind the shadow. The shadow turned around revealing Aroth, Erah and Rhodis standing tall despite cuts and bruises.
    “Now!” King Mickey yelled as he charged for the giant again now leaning over to sink his Keyblade deep into the ground. Sora and the others all charged in after him while Kairi ran off to heal Donald and Goofy. Sora jumped high into the air and came down sinking his keyblade deeply in the shades hand. Riku jumped up beside Sora and began cutting away at the beasts massive hand. The shades face turned into a slight grimace of pain then it raised its free hand to swat the pests when it was pulled down by a gravaga spell. Shadow Sora looked down and there below his other hand was King Mickey using magic to hold his hand to the ground. Riku turned his keyblade upside down and plunged it deep into the hand then Sora pulled his out and followed suit.
    Shade Sora lifted the hand with the young men on it and began to shake it violently when a sharp pain in his back brought him down to the ground. Aroth Rhodis and Erah had silently and without being noticed crawling up the shade till they reached his back. Once there they stuck their keys in and each cast a spell. Aroth with his giant keyblade cast Thundaga, Erah with her flashy ocean themed keyblade cast Blizzaga and Rhodis with his twisted clock keyblade cast Firaga.
    Sora smiled, the battle had turned giving them the upper edge. Sora pointed his keyblade at the base of the shadows neck and began to slowly walk towards it. The shade twisted in pain and agony but it was far from dead. It looked into Sora’s eyes then with a great heave the shade vanished into darkness and shrunk away. His giant keyblade remained locked into the ground. It shook softly but remained in its place. Donald, Goofy and Kairi all ran back to the scene and stared with all the others at the giant shadow keyblade. It was too large to be lifted but it seemed to be doing no damage.
     
  9. 1-up salesman

    1-up salesman New Member

    Great chapter! Can't wait for the next.
     
  10. Rhodis=Jynx

    Rhodis=Jynx New Member

    Chapter 4

    “What should we do with this?” Sora asked looking at king Mickey.
    “Gee Sora,” the king replied, “I don’t know. It is made of darkness and not to be trusted. I think we should destroy it.”
    “Right” said Riku who promptly ran up to it and sliced straight through it. The large key rose and began to shake violently than it began to melt back into hundreds of shadow and neoshadow. Sora sighed and put his keyblade back into battle position.
    “Sora, hold your ground, this is our world. We can defend it on our own don’t worry.” Yelled Leon as he ran into the field of battle. Tifa and Yufi followed behind him smiling. “Cloud needs your help though. He found his old home on a different planet. You may want to help him”
    Sora looked at the battle field with concern. That was a lot of heatless
    “It’s just shadow heartless Sora. Nothing we cant handle. But if you all don’t leave here the keyblades will call more heartless to us.”
    Sora smiled than ran to their slightly damaged gummy ship. Donald and Goofy ran to theirs as well but as they grabed the door it took off leaving them on the planet. Sora stared into the ship and laughed. Inside was Rhodis Erah and Aroth. Mickey looked at his friends.
    “Sora, I will stay here with Donald and Goofy. You guys go help cloud and try to destroy that Giant heartless.”
    Riku took his controls than put the ship on a direct course with the nearest world.
    “Sora, this small world may know something about the giant breed of heartless. I think we should try here.”
    “What world is it?” Sora asked stepping up beside him. Riku only shrugged, on the screen it showed only a small planet that looked quite beautiful. It was made of Ice and snow and it looked peaceful.
    Sora smiled at Riku who was staring at the gummy ship in front of them that held Erah. His hand again went to over his right pocket were he patted a small case.
    “Hey Sora, Riku, Mickey and Mrs. Sora.” came a voice over the radio.
    “Hello” Riku said “This is Riku at the controls of Excalibur, Who is this?”
    “Rhodis at the controls of... this ship I am in.”
    Sora and Riku laughed, Rhodis though a bit dark was always ready to bring some laughter into everyone’s hearts.
    “Your in the ship...”
    “I don’t care.” Rhodis voice interrupted. “I shall call this ship, Shining Hyper Intelligent Transport! S.H.I.T. for short.”
     
  11. 1-up salesman

    1-up salesman New Member

    ............Lol!
     
  12. Rhodis=Jynx

    Rhodis=Jynx New Member

    Chapter 5

    “Very funny Rhodis is Erah there.... Holy!” Riku was cut off by a sudden jerk in the ship. They all looked ahead at the tiny planet and the scene they saw haunts them for the rest of their life. The planet screamed in pain as it died and violently shook apart.
    “Oh my God! What happened!?” Kiari yelled.
    “I don’t know. I just don’t know.” Aroths voice calmly stated over the intercom.

    Sora turned towards Riku slowly.
    “I didn’t see any ships jettison. If anyone was alive there, I fear they aren’t now.” Riku said sadly looking at the ships computer. Sora could only stand there in shock. Once second a world was their the next it wasn’t.
    “What is that powerful, it was way too fast to be heartless.”
    “Search me.” Came a hauntingly familiar voice.
    The keyblade wielders all turned to the source. Standing behind them was a very unhappy looking Xigbar.
    “You were killed!” Sora yelled drawing his keyblade.
    “Yeah, and it did wonders for my temper!” Xigbar yelled than he drew his guns and fired at Sora who dodged and blocked as many as possible sending them all over the ship hitting the computer and walls. The ones he didn’t block exploded just before impact only slightly burning him.
    “Come on!” Riku yelled jumping up and charging towards Xigbar.
    “Stand back Riku! Warrior of Darkness.” Xigbar called before he turned one gun toward Riku and continued to fire at an even more aggressive speed. Sora and Riku blocked the spike shaped bullets as best as they could and prevented almost all of them from hitting themselves. Kiari ran to the ships controls and did her best to steer.
    “Riku!” Sora yelled.
    “Lets go.” Riku answered than they began to work together and swipe the spikes with a powerful double team combo. Sora and Riku swung their keyblades and large energy swords swung as well hitting twice as many bullets than ever.
    “Fine than. Lets turn up the heat!” Xigbar yelled, his hair shot straight up as if blown by an unseen wind. The two small guns he was holding shook and cracked than changed in shape and size. The new guns were shaped like the nobody symbol and fired larger spikes at a more rapid pace.
    “What! This shouldn’t be happening! SORA SAVE ME!” Xigbar yelled as his own body began to shake and change. His veins rushed towards the surface and his eye white out. None the less his guns continued to fire.
    “HEEELLLLLLLLP!” He screamed as the pain forced him to stop shooting.
    “Riku what’s happening?!” Sora yelled not putting his keyblade down.
    “I don’t know.” Riku answered when a small voice sounded through the ship.
    “Xigbar, you poor fool. You didn’t ask to use that power yet. If you want the pain to stop, let them kill you.” the small voice sounded.
    “Whose there!” Sora yelled but the ship was silent.
    “Sora!” Riku said facing the spot where Xigbar was. Now their was a heavily armored monster in front of them with Xigbars guns strapped to its arms.
    “Very well. But if I have to die to you guys. I will at least cause as much damage as possible.” Xigbars voice called from within the monster.
    “Xigbar?” Sora asked but as an answer the monster Xigbar shot the large spikes straight at him. Sora’s body was launched back through the door into his bedroom. Riku ran forward towards the beast but it teleported and shot him in the back multiple times pinning him to a wall than it continued to shoot.
    “AHHHHHH!” Riku yelled as the spikes hit his skin and exploded on his back.
    “Yes, this is ultimate power!” Xigbar yelled. Then he returned to face Sora. The young man was just sitting up when another barrage of spikes swarmed towards him.
    “Sora!” The injured Riku yelled and a dark shield formed around Sora just in time to catch and stop the spikes. Even though Riku stopped the bullets he couldn’t protect himself from the beasts onslaught himself.
    “Curaga!” Kiari yelled from the control panel and the whole group healed. Xigbars eyes focused on the girl, she looked a lot like Namine. Another one worthy of death. The beast yelled as it shot one of its guns at Kairi and the other at the still pined down Riku. The bullets flew at a high pace strait towards their target when a small wall of fire appeared in front of all the keyblade wielders.
    “Axel!” The monster Xigbar yelled.
    “Nice to see you again too Xigbar.” Came the familiar voice of Axel. Stepping through a small portal of darkness was the cloaked and familiar nobody Axel himself.
    “How did you get out?” The monster yelled as it shot at him. Axel vanished in a flash of fire and appeared behind the monster avoiding the shots.
    “Simple, I’m Axel. Got it memorized?” He said grinning and with a very calm demur he launched the monster into a portal of darkness. The walls of fire went down instantly and Axel fell to his knees.
    “He guys.” he said smiling. “Couldn’t survive without me could you Roxas.” Axel said looking at Sora.
    “Axel,” Kiari whispered. “What was that?” Axels eyes shone for a moment with tears and his smile fell away.
    “The Organization is back. All but Xehanort. The only thing is we all are given the gift of a partial heart. It makes us more powerful, but it tortures us and it will eventually drive us insane.” He looked down and a portal appeared in front of him. He stood up and slowly walked towards it.
    “Where are you going?” Riku asked the nobody.
    “I need to learn more about this and try to stop the others.” Axel said than he stepped into the darkness and the portal disappeared.
    “Roxas, next time you see me. If I can’t recall this moment, kill me.”
     
  13. 1-up salesman

    1-up salesman New Member

    Cool twist. Though, don't resurrect like almost every member.
     
  14. I love this fan fic.
     
  15. Rhodis=Jynx

    Rhodis=Jynx New Member

    Thanks for the comments, so far I am enjoying writing this......... I just hate working with a person like Kairi.....

    Chapter 6


    Xigbar stepped through the portal and sat down on a stair. The monstrous skin shrunk off and turned into his normal attire.
    “An excellent acting job by our man Xigbar!” Xenroc said walking up the tired nobody.
    “Hey you forget about me?” Axel said stepping in through the portal.
    “Of course not Jynx. You were amazing.” Xenroc said a small smile shone on his eyes. Axel shrugged than faded into Jynx.
    “What’s sad is they actually bought it.” All three of them laughed a little than their faces all turned stolid and cold again.
    “Well, now its their move.” Xenroc stated looking into a small screen where Rhodis, Aroth and Erah all sat in their ship.
    “I’m telling you, I saw a dark shape leaving the planet it must have been Jynx!”
    “You’ve got bigger problems.” A frightfully hollow voice said.
    “Siax!” Aroth and Rhodis said turning around summoning their keyblades.
    “Good, you recall my name. Tell me, do I haunt your dreams Aroth?” Siax said as his large paddle like weapon appeared.
    “Humph, not after I gave you those scars.” Aroth said staring right between Siax’s eyes where an X had been cut into his face.
    “You know, I never paid you back for that.” Siax didn’t waste any time attacking. He jumped into the air and slammed his paddle down hitting the ground between the two men sending them flying apart. Aroth turned and ran toward the wall using Siax’s attack to boost himself up it. He climbed to the roof than jumped over and swung his giant black keyblade at Siax who simply dodged it. His dodge though didn’t help him avoid the attack by Rhodis. Siax raised his paddle and swatted Rhodis in the air and sent him towards Erah.
    “Sinsoah Mebristeh Haruskan!” She called holding her ocean themed keyblade. Rhodis instantly vanished as well as Aroth. The appeared back to back standing in front of Erah with their side towards Siax.
    “What?” Was all Siax had time to say when both men disappeared and reappeared directly in front of him. his eyes widened and he tried to raise his paddle but it was too late both keyblades had been sunk deep into his stomached.
    “Naksurah Hetsirbem Haosnis!” Erah said and both men fell to their knees and she fell down to hers.
    “Ungh, uh......ahhhhh....uhn.” Siax fell to his knees and the keyblades vanished into the hands of Rhodis and Aroth.
    “Siax, If you want to become stronger fight and die.” a small voice called from every corner of the room at once.
    “Die, I may be hurt but that doesn’t mean they can kill me!” Siax yelled standing up. His paddle shook in his hands.
    “I will not die to you.” Siax yelled his face starting to become paler and two large fangs grew in his mouth. His paddle also changed into a large bladed great axe shaped similar to what his paddle had been like.
    “Aroth! What is this.....ARHHHHH” Rhodis fell onto the floor holding his head screaming in pain being tortured by visions of the future.
    “Looks like it’s one on one.” Aroth said standing up. “Lets try this then.” Aroth switched his keyblade from overhand to underhand style. Siax new form vanished and appeared in front of Aroth who was ready. His large keyblade sliced straight through Siax, or at least where siax should have been.
    “Missed.” Siax whispered in his ear from behind. Instantly Aroth slashed behind him but yet again hit nothing.
    “How on earth did you ever manage to scar me?” Siax taunted standing a few feet from Aroth.
    “I won’t miss this time.” Aroth said than he slashed forward and instantly stabbed behind him. The keyblade hit the axe but it wasn’t enough to stop the axe from broad siding him in the back. Aroth flew through the air and hit his head on the ceiling. A loud and sick thud followed by a splattering noise came from Aroths head as he fell from the ceiling and hit the ground.
    “Now, for my repentance.” Siax said licking his lips as he walked towards the unconscious Aroth.
    “Cuaraga!” Rhodis yelled and a small healing mark appeared above Siax. Siax screamed in pain and through himself into the safety of a portal.
    “Good call Rhodis. How did you know that would hurt him?” Erah gasped in shock.
    “I didn’t. I was aiming to heal Aroth. I simply missed.” Rhodis choked. Tears were rolling down his cheeks.
    “What did you see.”
    “I saw death and pain, the monsters of the first organization killing and destroying whole worlds just for fun. Damn it Erah! They were killing children, tossing them in the air and seeing who could kill them the fastest. They were only CHILDREN.”
    “Curaga!” Erah said and Aroth groaned slightly.
    “We need to tell Sora what happened.” Rhodis said moving to the controls when Soras voice called over to them.
     
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  16. 1-up salesman

    1-up salesman New Member

    whoa, clever. Shape-shifting into Axel, and telling sora that if he doesn't remeber telling him, to kill him. I hope the real Axel doesn't die. Great job, I love this! Here's a rep point.
     
  17. Rhodis=Jynx

    Rhodis=Jynx New Member

    I haven't decieded if I'm going to kill of the real axel yet. He is kind of my hero, but it would make an interesting fight.......
     
  18. Very nice dude or dude ad. You have nice story telling skills.
     
  19. Rhodis=Jynx

    Rhodis=Jynx New Member

    I'll be posting the next chapter in a few hours........ i have around fifteen more chapters then whats here so I'm set for a while....
     
  20. 1-up salesman

    1-up salesman New Member

    By the way, it's Saix, not Siax.
     
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