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KeyofHope777s Poems + Lyrics

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics' started by Nova, Aug 28, 2008.

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  1. Nova

    Nova A Ghost Staff Member Administrator

    MY RED ANGEL OF DEATH
    Here am I
    Sitting by standing nigh
    watching, wating
    the hours fly
    Imagination runs with me
    again
    and imagination
    is not
    my friend
    the candles dance,
    They beckon me here
    (I see their faces)
    the call my name
    yes, I can hear
    the destract me from
    my task at hand
    making me forget,
    Takieng my hand
    memories die,
    fall through like sand
    but this I havent forgoten
    no not at all
    you stare at me
    but why do you frown
    are you angry with me
    you are my angel of death,
    dont you see
    our purpouses are one in the same
    I know your eyes
    full of cunning little lies
    am I to believe your deception
    I know your face
    and i'll never deny
    im glad your here
    yes, I'm ready to die
    with a cross on my door
    I ask you implore,
    how, you say did my angel
    open the door
    yes, I can answer the question
    you ask
    then ill complete my task
    ending my life
    and I'll show you
    my eyes flash off the knife
    and the Angel is me!
    Now im dead and now i'm free!​
     
    Last edited: Aug 29, 2008
  2. LDC1121

    LDC1121 New Member

    This is really good work Hope! All you need is the right kind of music to go along with this and you've got a great song on your hands! But it's also great as a poem too! : )
     
  3. Nova

    Nova A Ghost Staff Member Administrator

    Thanks. I realize its a little morbid. I wrote it a few years ago in my EMO days. I'm glad you like it though :D
     
  4. Xelus

    Xelus New Member

    Ooh. Poetry. How creative, Hope!
    I wish I could write that good.
     
  5. :O Nice poem. I don't think it's too EMO-ey. Only thing is some of the spelling but it doesnt change the way the words would be said so it still all fits.

    Im just gonna correct them (not to be mean just to be helpful =D)

    Imaganation - Imagination

    Becon - Beckon

    Takieng - Taking - Im gussing that was just a typo though :)

    Purpouses - Purposes - Maybe another typo?

    Ummmm thats it lol. hope it helped (Im not sure whether that was kind :S)



    I'm terrible at poetry ^_^ So you're doing brilliant poetry at any standard but I think this is particularly good. Wait lemme try some... *Clears throat*

    Roses are red, Violets are blue, Your face looks like, dried chicken poo.
    :\ I need to work on it.
     
  6. Kyuu

    Kyuu your worst nightmare.

    Oh, it's lovely! I like it soooo much! x3
     
  7. Oath

    Oath King Bitch™

    Wow, You're really good Hope. How much have you written before?
     
  8. Beloved

    Beloved Azure's Beloved

    :eek:.......:eek:.......:eek:
    That is so cool Hope. Seriously, that's some amazing writing.

    .....wow
     
  9. Nova

    Nova A Ghost Staff Member Administrator

    Deception

    Those haunting eyes
    Your sly smile
    They are your disguise
    In your sight annother life to defile

    Choris:
    Was I really so naive to believe
    That what we had was more
    Than just a trick up your sleeve?
    In the end, it doesn't matter
    After all I was only your whore

    Promises, oaths, tears, and pain
    All of which you said to me
    I was your everything.
    How silly of me to play your game
    And it made me nothing

    Choris

    After all the lies,
    after we find our love is nothing more
    Will you now, my everything close the door?
    I will not be subject to your game
    In the end it is you I dispise

    Choris
     
    Last edited: Jan 20, 2009
  10. Nova

    Nova A Ghost Staff Member Administrator

    A Sister's Prayer


    Father see her eyes
    So innocent, crystal clear
    let her know who loves her
    Let her know you are near

    Father protect her
    From all the strife
    this world has to offer
    show her happieness in life

    Father guide this child
    through the good times and the bad
    through this wicked world
    to where she will find life to be kind

    Father help me to love her
    Help me to protect her
    Teach me to guide her
    Show me how to be a good big sister

    Baby sister
    I wasn't sure what to pray for you
    But remember this will always be true
    You have a big sister that will always
    be there for you​


    *I wrote this one when my little sister was born. I was only six at the time but I found it and I re-wrote it a little and decided to post it. Don't be too harsh :eek:
     
    Last edited: Jan 20, 2009
  11. Desert Warrior

    Desert Warrior Well-Known Member

    That's good for a six year old person. It's way better than any poem I could write.
     
  12. Oath

    Oath King Bitch™

    Awesome Hope :D I love the sisters prayer one.
     
  13. Kyuu

    Kyuu your worst nightmare.

    Awesome! I cannot say anything else. :D
     
  14. Overdose

    Overdose Ninja.V

    wow those are awesome!
    you play guitar ... i think? You should add some music to go with it :D
     
  15. Kichigai

    Kichigai New Member

    I have to agree with the others :D You're very good writer, I like those! ;3
     
  16. Destiny

    Destiny Guest

    Not my type of thing, but it's cool. I like it.
     
  17. Nova

    Nova A Ghost Staff Member Administrator

    Aw thanks guys :D
    I actually do have a tune to the Deception lyric but I cant exactly show it
     
  18. Destiny

    Destiny Guest

    Well did you right down the music on a music sheet scan it on and just post it, if possible I be intersted in a flute part or piccolo, :p.
     
  19. Aqua Fresh

    Aqua Fresh Anita ✿◠‿◠

    Thst is very facinating Hope!!!!! I love poetry!!!

    Kairi Star, I think that is a great idea!!

    But Hope, did you made a part for trumpet also??
     
  20. Nova

    Nova A Ghost Staff Member Administrator

    lol theres a piano, guitar, and keyboard virsion but I didn't add brass instraments.
     
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