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Fleshless (OOC\SU)

Discussion in 'Archive' started by The Heartless King, Sep 22, 2010.

  1. The Heartless King

    The Heartless King The King of Shadows

    The Paladin Chronicles
    Part I
    Fleshless


    Main Theme: YouTube - Epic Music Mix IV - Two Steps From Hell

    Plot:

    Freymore was a peaceful kingdom, the people had not seen war for almost 10 years. Though the king was still concerned about the safety of his land and always had a large group of Holy Soldiers, Paladins, called the Imperial White Dragons ready to fight if the time came for another war. And that time had finally come.





    Winter descended upon Freymore. One evening, The king was in his throne room as someone burst through the doors and ran up to him, gasping for air, he appeared as if he had been running for miles. As he looked up at the king, who had a very confused look on his face, he muttered something "They're coming for you.." The man said. He collapsed onto the floor without another word. The King sprung up from his throne and called for the Leader of the Imperial White Dragons into the room. He was known as the Great Paladin, his deeds were great, no one had never heard of him and his accomplishments. He saw the body of the man. "What is this?" He asked. The King replied saying he didn't know. He told the Paladin about what the man had said. After that, his words made sense. The windows of the throne room shattered, too many things happened at once. Strange creatures flew through the windows, the Paladin drew his sword to try and fend them off when the door to the throne room was thrown right of the hinges, hitting the Paladin and knocking him over. He couldn't move, his vision was blurred. He could only see a dark figure approaching the king. He heard it talking to the king. But could only make out the words "Time", "Dark" And "Reckoning". Then he blacked out. When the Paladin awoke, he pushed the door off of his back and looked around, the dark figure and the strange creatures were gone, And the king dead. There was a note attached to his body, "Come to the island south of Freymore if you want to avenge your king." The Paladin was confused. What Island? There was no Island to the south of Freymore. He gathered 9 other of the Imperial White Dragons including his brother, who was second in command and they traveled to the south.

    After days, they finally got to a port in the furthest south location of Freymore. In the distance there was indeed an island. But it had never been there before..They got in a boat and sailed to the island. Only to find it was getting warmer and warmer, which was strange. It was The middle of Winter. When they arrived to the island, it was anything but cold. No snow anywhere, just dead trees and dried up land.

    It was a small island, they walked around this small island, they found a large building in the center. Near a volcano. On closer inspection, it looked like the castle. The Paladins knew it was where they needed to be.

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    It was dark, thick was fog descending. They walked to the entrance of the castle, and the main gate opened, as if they were being invited in. When they entered, standing in front of them, was a large and evil looking figure, It was a Lich "I've been waiting for you." It said. "I'm the one that killed your beloved king. But it was for a good reason. He was in the way, of our plans. You may think these are evil plans, ones that will bring darkness upon your kingdom. Maybe so, but in the end it will be worth it.." The Paladins did not believe him. Battle took place in that large room, 8 of the 9 paladins that came along were killed, only the Leader of the Imperial White Dragons and his brother were left. The Evil Creature took pity on them "I may be an undead...But i can show mercy." He cast on curse onto the Great Paladin, suddenly his armor and his weapon turned black, morphing into dark armor, the paladin's flesh suddenly started decaying, all that was left was bones. "Now you are doomed to walk this earth eternally, as an Undead...." The Lich began to cast the curse on the Paladin's brother but he quickly used a spell to teleport them out of the castle.

    When they arrived back in Freymore, failing their mission to avenge the king. They had realised almost a month had passed. But it wasn't possible, The trip to the south only took 10 days. And the trip to the island only 30 minutes. They heard that the King's brother was crowned the new King. Getting back to the Capital city of Freymore, everyone shunned the great paladin just because of how he looked. He was undead, But he still had control over his thoughts and actions, unlike most lesser undead. A Generation passed, people started forgetting the great paladin's name. Even the Paladin himself. And his brother. He decided to call himself Ravix, which was Fleshless in the undead language. When Ravix tried to ask the king for help, the guards threw him out. Not believing he was the Leader of the Imperial White Dragons. He had to break in. He burst into the throne room and pleaded for the king to listen to him. The King allowed him to speak. Ravix told him of his story and unlike anyone else, the King believed him. He told Ravix to see the royal Alchemist about the curse. The alchemist studied the curse and told Ravix that the only way to break it was to find and ancient rune that could cure any curse. But it's location was unknown. The King gathered 4 of the best he could find, A Ranger, an Assassin, a Thief, a Mage and a Warrior, and told them to go with Ravix and his brother to find the Rune. So he could kill the Lich and no longer be Fleshless



    Races:

    Etherim: The Etherim are natural Hunters, and have high skill with ranged weapons. They also have innate magical ability that helps them harness magical forces.

    Rasvim: Also known as the Undead. The Rasvim are capable of becoming fierce warriors or dark mages. They have high resistances to poison and infection, but are vulnerable to spell based damage.

    Seiry: This race has long been regarded as the best and most naturally talented thieves and assassins of all the races on Freymore. They are intelligent, perceptive, have cat-like grace and excellent stealth skills

    Derth: The Derth are gifted scholars, and teachers. And are the most powerful mages of the races. While being stronger mentally they are also physically weaker, and so lack melee skills.

    Nogur: The Nogur are the natural warriors of the races and are trained to fight from birth. They are physically stronger, extremely healthy and have high resistance to infection, but are vulnerable to magical attacks.


    Templates:

    Name:

    Age:

    Gender:

    Race:

    Weapon(s) :

    Appearance:

    Bio:

    Theme: (Optional)


    Rules: No Godmodding. no killing other people's characters without their permission. Anyone can control NPCs. Standard RP rules apply.

    Characters needed:

    Ravix: The Heartless King

    Ravix's Brother: GrandShadow

    The Ranger: (Preferably Etherim) Open

    The Mage: Destiny

    The Thief: (Preferably Seiry) Open

    The Warrior: Curtis8494

    The Lich: The Heartless King





    Name: Ravix

    Age: 26 (But since he's undead he can live eternally now.)

    Gender: Male

    Race: Was Etherim but is how Rasvim

    Weapon: In picture below

    Appearance: Death Knight by *Elder-Of-The-Earth on deviantART

    Bio: Explained in the plot

    Theme: YouTube - Epic Music Mix III - Immediate Music (You don't have to listen the whole thing XD)



    Name: The Lich (Name Unknown)

    Age: ???

    Race: Rasvim

    Weapon: Mostly uses magic, but sometimes conjures up a magical spear to use.

    Appearance: http://www.examiner.com/images/blog/replicate/EXID21272/images/phylactery_lich_art.jpg

    Bio: Nothing is known about him, the only thing known is that he killed the king of Freymore and is living on an island in the south that mysteriously appeared out of thin air.

    Theme: YouTube - The Legend of Zelda Twilight Princess Music - Dark Lord Ganondorf - Final Battle - Swordfight -
     
    Last edited: Sep 27, 2010
  2. GrandShadow

    GrandShadow I accept your challange.

    i call the brother.
     
  3. W.J. Solomon

    W.J. Solomon Solomon's Reprieve

    dibs on the warrior, will post later
     
  4. GrandShadow

    GrandShadow I accept your challange.

    here's your brother THK

    Name: Gideon

    Age: 25

    Gender: Male

    Race: Etherim

    Weapon(s) : A triple bladed whip called a surai. Gideon is skilled in it's use, able to use it as a normal whip and more.

    Appearance: http://www.wizards.com/mtg/images/daily/wallpapers/WP_GideonJura_1024x768.jpg

    Bio: Gideon has always been living in his brothers shadow; he was always secind best, second to be noticed or considered, inferior to his brother. At least thats how others treated him, his brother though was always kind and loving to him. Gideon knew he could never surpass his brother, so rather than try he took up things his brother wouldn't. Because of this, Gideon shines where his brother didn't. Gideon became more intellectual than his brother as well as more skilled in the exotic weapons. Gideon also learned a few spells; particularly barrier magic and healing magic. When the king was slain, Gideon didn't even bother to ask; he told his brother he was coming with. Gideon fought bravely and was dismayed at how easily their comrades were slain. When his brother was cursed, Gideon attempted to kill the lich but before he could his brother warped the two of them away for safety. Gideon did his best but couldn't heal his brother.

    When the two returned, Gideon was welcomed unlike his cursed brother. Gideon stayed, hoping to change people's opinions about his brother from the inside of the kingdom. He eventually rose to the position that his brother formally(and technically still) held. Gideon tried pleading with the king but failed as his majesty found no evidence for his ludicrus claims; that was until his brother stole his way into the kings chambers. Gideon was overjoyed to see his brother and glad to know that the king now believed him. He rejoiced at how they discovered a way to cure his brother and once more Gideon told his brother he was coming along.

    Theme: YouTube - Dark PHOENiX - ????????
     
  5. The Heartless King

    The Heartless King The King of Shadows

    Good signup. Accepted.
     
  6. GrandShadow

    GrandShadow I accept your challange.

    cool.

    oh yeah, here's a lich picture that puts the one up there to shame.
    [​IMG]
     
  7. The Heartless King

    The Heartless King The King of Shadows

    Well i couldn't find anything good. all i could find was stupid liches from MMORPGs that looked like a 7 year old drew up. So what can you do? I like yours WAY better XD
     
  8. GrandShadow

    GrandShadow I accept your challange.

    one reason i love playing Magic the Gathering. such great artwork. that one's from a recent card called Phylactory Lich. freaking powerful card too.
     
  9. The Heartless King

    The Heartless King The King of Shadows

    it'd better be powerful if he looks that badass. :p anyway, enough spam.
     
  10. Moogle

    Moogle Well-Known Member

    I could direct you to Deviantart, because you know. . . the good stuff is there.


    By the way, what do all the races look like? I see them lacking in description.
     
  11. The Heartless King

    The Heartless King The King of Shadows

    Well this takes place in a world from a game. The game doesn't exactly describe them all too well. But Rasvim look pretty much like skeletons and wraiths and are usually male. Sometimes they look like men with grey skin and black hair. The Etherim and Seiry look like human beings. The Derth usually look like humans that usually have shaved heads and ritual markings all over their body. Nogur look like humans but more barbaric and muscular. That's really all i know about their appearances.
     
    Last edited: Sep 23, 2010
  12. Destiny

    Destiny Guest

    I'd love to join, but I wonder like requem about the difference races, I'll take the mage though.
     
  13. GrandShadow

    GrandShadow I accept your challange.

    he just explained that in them in the post above yours. other than the Ravism, they all look like humans with few subtle differences between them.
     
  14. The Heartless King

    The Heartless King The King of Shadows

    Yeah, pretty much. Sometimes Rasvim though do look like humans.
     
  15. Destiny

    Destiny Guest

    Missed the post. As this is designed after a game, do we need to know the game real well to join?
     
  16. The Heartless King

    The Heartless King The King of Shadows

    Not at all. The game has a story but no lore. So no you don't need to know anything about it but the races
     
  17. Destiny

    Destiny Guest

    Name: Darien

    Age: 17

    Gender: female

    Race: rasvism

    Weapon(s) : none, her main weapon is magic. She does have a dagger

    Appearance:
    [​IMG]

    Bio: Darien didn't ask for the life she was forced to live.

    Darien was raised without knowing her past. She was raised by elite dark mages. She knew her mother was a human, her father a rasvism. It was believed she was human as well until she developed some changes. She became a rasvism, an undead. Her body began to loose it's color. Except for her face. Her left hand was bone, it was a bone skellaton hand.

    Darien hated it. She lived a sort of happy life before all of that. The dark mages fought creature in which she was. One mage stepped forward before killing her and instead they locked Darien up until a decision could be made.

    A decision was made soon that Darien could help fight creatures of the dark (rasvism) and be strongest against them with her being one. They believed maybe she could create a fresh start of rasvism, a race of good undead creatures.

    From that decision, Darien was put under intense training from that day. She grew strong in the art of dark magic. She has just recently began studying other magics, but already she's one of the most elite dark mages.

    Theme: trying to think of one.
     
  18. The Heartless King

    The Heartless King The King of Shadows

    Accepted, one thing i forgot to note, Rasvim are a sort of greater undead. They are all able to think freely and control their actions. While lesser undead are like zombies and ghosts and stuff like that
     
  19. W.J. Solomon

    W.J. Solomon Solomon's Reprieve

    Name: William

    Age: 19

    Gender: Male

    Race:Nogur

    Weapon(s) : [​IMG]
    2 of these

    Appearance: [​IMG]

    Bio: Grew up in the woods around the main village. He never really went in for anything other than to drink and sleep since he never knew his parents. He lived at the inn with the innkeeper as an orphan until he was 8, going off to the woods to learn to fight and survive. He became a skilled fighter and could climb and sneak very well but his best skill was dual weilding his swords. He is an excellent fighter which is why the king hired him for this. The king has known of Will for a long time because of an old friendship with the innkeeper. Yet for some reason he took a special interest in Will and gave him special training at age 15. He now joins this mission to get farther away from the town and see more of the outer world.
     
  20. The Heartless King

    The Heartless King The King of Shadows

    accepted, Curtis. We just need an Assassin, a thief and a Ranger.
     

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