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Dream~

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics' started by Master Sora, Aug 23, 2009.

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  1. Master Sora

    Master Sora Kingdom Key

    Dream


    I was thinking of you last night. In the darkest night, I was resting in my bed, dreaming of us

    together and talking about our personal thoughts. Having fun in the twilight, settling at the

    beach, playing through a grassy field, and adventuring through a Mystical Forest. Staring at

    the sun that starts to disappear as the shining stars beamed from the dark universe. We hold

    on to each other and press our lips together hard, with such love and passion. We hold on to

    each other like the sun holds our world. Our Hearts. Never letting go~
     
    Last edited: Sep 7, 2009
  2. WayToTheDawn

    WayToTheDawn New Member

    This is very good

    I like how it's short and sweet but still very profound. Great use of imagery
     
  3. Master Sora

    Master Sora Kingdom Key

    The Light~

    The Light

    My hear has been rusted. No longer gold, since it has been infected by fear and loneliness.

    Walking into nothingness, I cry, I beg, I beat myself up, but 1 thing I will never do is give up.

    There's only 1 thing that will help me from the darkness, the sparking light that would polish

    my heart. In the darkness, I found an angel from the heavens. The one that would guide me

    to happiness, faith, hope, and love. Your my guiding angel~
     
    Last edited: Sep 7, 2009
  4. Master Sora

    Master Sora Kingdom Key

    Thanks a lot :D. I'm kind of a beginner at poetry lol
     
  5. Master Sora

    Master Sora Kingdom Key

    Heart Within~

    Heart Within

    Every time I think about you, my heart keeps skipping a beat. I can't live without you. I'm in

    love with you so much as deep as the Atlantic ocean can dive through. Your face, your eyes.

    Your body, your mind. But what I love most is your heart, because every time it beats. It''s

    calling my name~
     
    Last edited: Sep 7, 2009
  6. WayToTheDawn

    WayToTheDawn New Member

    really? it's really good you shud write more or post more
     
  7. Master Sora

    Master Sora Kingdom Key

    Saving it For you~

    Saving It For You

    I know. Sometimes we fight, sometimes we doubt each other. But what we can't disagree is

    how our hearts beat for one another. We fear that we might walk away from each other as we

    turn away and think. We know we can't resist, my body needs to touch yours...feel..grasp the

    pressure of our love. You may think that I don't care about you at all, but have you still

    realized that I'm still here? By your side to protect you. No matter what the odds of things

    trying to break us apart. I won't allow it. My heart is burning in pain, sacrificing itself for your

    heart, your love bringing it back to life to last forever with you. There's no one else that can

    save it. I'm saving all my love for you~
     
    Last edited: Sep 7, 2009
  8. Master Sora

    Master Sora Kingdom Key

    I am lolz xD
     
  9. Master Sora

    Master Sora Kingdom Key

    Come on guys..You can leave some comments if you want..Bad or good..It's ok, or any help to make me improve??
     
  10. Plasmos

    Plasmos Plasmos

    Don't Multi Double Post.

    I'm deleting the middle post. And your poem is okay, work on your spelling and sentence structure.
     
  11. Master Sora

    Master Sora Kingdom Key

    I didn't multi double post. I had these all separated, but a mod put them all together in 1 thread....and..all my spelling is right..I'm pretty sure o.o
     
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