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Discussion in 'Archive' started by sora-x, May 31, 2009.

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  1. sora-x

    sora-x New Member

    Demons Awakening​

    Yes another RP started by me.
    This rp is actually a re-run of an already made rp that is long forgotten and where all my ideas came from.

    Now for the actual storyline:

    Husky Kibaru: a Fourteen year old boy with golden spikey brown hair, was raised in a house by the lake, he was adopted...given up by his parents at birth. For his Fourteenth birthday Husky was given a strange necklace. It had a crystal fang on it. His adopted father told him a mysterious story of how his father, a legendary half-wolven hero had slain a demonic wolf known as Fenrir and imprisoned it's soul inside that fang. Husky did not beleive it to be true.

    That same night a strange woman visited his log-cabin home. The air was chilly and the moon a beautiful blue crescent. The woman had sleek black hair that reached only down to her neck. Her cold violet eyes showed no emotion. She had been arguing with huskys adopted father when he creeked open the door to his bedroom. In a flash she had drawn her Black blade and slashed his father in two. Husky's blood boiled with rage. he confronted the women who began beating him to death using only her fists. after being knocked against the northern wall a trail of blood smeared down from where husky's head had crashed.

    Beaten to a pulp husky's corpse showed his unconciousness. Suddenly his Blue eyes darted to this woman they turned a violent blood red. His face grinning his nails lengthened turning into claws. It appeared as if he was possessed. Rampaging with nothing but a half-cocky smile on his face. The woman was forced to retreat,but husky was still on a rampage he broke out of his lakeside cabin and began running through the woods off to west...

    That was 2 years ago. This is the story that follows.

    Alright your characters are deeply involved in the storyline they are the many people inhabiting this planet. some heroes others villans with a set motive for wreaking havoc. The one thing i likeabout rp's is the amount of creativity going into it, the last thing i want to do is take that away. so in every way the more people that join the more complex the storyline gets.


    Your character should use this template but please feel free to add as much detail as possible:

    Name:
    Age:
    Physical Description:
    Species:
    A Breif History:
    Any Extra details that could explain them.
     
    Last edited: Jun 1, 2009
  2. Destiny

    Destiny Guest

    That's pretty good, you're missing one detail, just add another paragraph on who our characters will be and our Role in the RP. I'd love to join this, it seems pretty cool.
     
  3. Zerieth

    Zerieth Head Game Reviewer

    I saw some spelling errors and grammar issues. Try reading it out loud to your self, and you'll spot em. Don't worry, we all make mistakes. Looking forward to seeing Husky in action once again, cause its been a while since i've seen him. *Wonders which guy he will use for this rp, if its a guy =)*
     
  4. sora-x

    sora-x New Member

    Definetly, thanks for the tip! Just a little spoiler for ya, this idea has been a long time in the making it's actually a small peace of a four-part series that i'm trying to make into a video game. I just wanted to posta continuence of what happens after that part takes its course.
     
    Last edited: Jun 1, 2009
  5. Zerieth

    Zerieth Head Game Reviewer

    Brings tears to my eyes that. Again, missing comas. Here's the corrected version of that, sorry.
    When all is lost, through the darkness you have lost yourself, you have lost* the person you have become. Start searching...for somebody, anybody, who can help you, and when you find them, embrace them. Hold them tight and never let go, because you never know you love somebody until they are gone.

    * Possibly. I couldn't figure out how to correct that.

    Lots of run ons, but i didn't know if that was planned.
     
  6. sora-x

    sora-x New Member

    Thats my sig, lol. but yours is soo much better =D i love the useof kite personally he's my fav character.
    Also zerith, if the story is about my old character husky and this is a continuence...i must be using him.

    So here he is my favorite of my four characters:

    Name:Husky Kibaru
    Age:16
    Physical Description:
    He looks alot like sora from kingdom hearts and isoften mistaken for him because the front of their hair is the same.
    the back of husky's hair is different though. it has spikes facing the right almost inacombover and the back of his hair is downward spikes it is golden brown as is sora's and he has blue eyes just like sora.
    Husky does not wear a shirt, he has a black vest thatis zipped open, It has the tan fur of a wolf showing on the top and the hood is the wolfs head. Around his neck is a small red crystal fang attached to a silver chain. He wear black shorts with deep pockets, one on each side. the right shortleg is cut to right below the knee and the left shortleg is cut to half of husky's shin.
    Husky's shoes look like soras from kingdom hearts II but they are all black.

    Species:Half-Wolf Half-Xzaryan(a purebred race of humans similar to elves yet advanced in technology they are the prime species of the planet and look down on half breeds.)

    Breif History: 2 years ago Husky betrayed everybody he loved in order to destroy the person he had been after for so long. those friendsare now long gone, and husky is useless to protect the one personable to quell his inner demon fenrir. on top of this Husky's Corruption illness is worsening...

    (the corruption illness was something i made up in the long-lost rp the keyblade illness. back then i used husky so the new and old husky are just having their profiles melded together for a better storyline.
    This illness is slowly weakening husky everytime this Demon takes over it has gotten to the point where after fenrir takes over the illness renders him unconcious, husky combated this problem once but was ultimatley transformed into an animal, a young black wolf i.e my profile pic. He has the ability to do this if the illness gets worse, and in times of stealth.)

    He now stands on a small cliff overlooking the battlefeild he had once clashed with the one person he was protecting.

    Personality: Husky is a boy of few words he doesn't talk he acts. he isn't very trusting but he is overprotective. His volatile nature makes him hasty incombat and his pugnaciousness makes him love it all the more.
     
    Last edited: Jun 1, 2009
  7. Zerieth

    Zerieth Head Game Reviewer

    Well, i wish i could use Jake. Unfourtanetly I no longer needed him so he kind of faded away. Heres Leo instead.

    Name: Leo

    Age: 22

    Ranking: Traveler

    Appearence: [​IMG]

    Weapon: [​IMG]
    Home World~Radiant Garden

    Personality: A nice guy to have around, though rather quiet. When he fights how ever, he changes into a cold hearted soldier.

    History: Not much is known about him, least of all why he never takes of the black ribbon he wears. He wanders from town to town, helping those he can in this dark world. He has never lost a fight.

    Other facts: He was blinded by a dark spell, but has honed his aura perception, thanks to his mentor, to the point were he doesn't need eye sight. His blade can move at eye blinding speeds, and thats only with one hand!
     
    Last edited: Jun 1, 2009
  8. sora-x

    sora-x New Member

    Very nice indeed zerieth. he won't have any trouble seeing my guy, hes the most perceptive being that he has two auras at the same time.
     
  9. Destiny

    Destiny Guest

    I'm still confused what are the character's connection with your story and Husky?
     
  10. sora-x

    sora-x New Member

    I should have explained that more, sorry...

    Husky is half-wolf who was sent off to be raised by the lake with a complete stranger.
    He is haunted by a demonspirit from norst mythology known as fenrir and plauged by an illness that is slowly killing him.

    Your characters are mere inhabitants who happen to reside in this world they engage in many a great battles, each character has a set goal of some sort, something draws their attention someone provokes them into fighting they have no connection to husky but...it has been two years since he embarked on his last journey, anything could happen the story has more to do with each characters indivdual goals than it does with a set end goal. perhaps if i made up an ultimate goal it could set things in motion?.
     
    Last edited: Jun 3, 2009
  11. Destiny

    Destiny Guest

    Yeah that would help, if not our characters may never interact.
     
  12. Zerieth

    Zerieth Head Game Reviewer

    Ok sora, i hate to ask but please change the font color. I'm sorry but its just to bright, it hurts my eyes to look at it. I beg your forgiveness.
     
  13. sora-x

    sora-x New Member

    It's ok. i'll just darken the blue a little.
     
  14. draco009

    draco009 Dungeon Master

    Name: Draco Kirusan
    Age: 14+ (draco is over 400 years old)
    Physical Description: Draco wears A Black Hoodie with Black shirt and black baggy pants. he has White hair Deep Dark Blue Eyes With A Green Tint.
    Species: Xzaryan
    A Breif History: Draco Has Had Many Adventures And a Long Past That is Too Clomplicated To Explain.
    He Weilds Twin Katana and has one Goal: Peace.
     
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