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Chaos Ordeal secret story: Hikaru's past

Discussion in 'Traditional' started by LivingDeath, Feb 22, 2009.

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  1. LivingDeath

    LivingDeath Dormina'd

    Okay, now I'm going to create a story. It's about my RP Chaos Ordeal. Maybe some of readers wouldn't understand, but I will do my best to make you understand. Btw, I'm going to use Boss battle guide like Twilight Keyblade so the battle become more shorter.

    Prologue:
    25 years before Kingdom hearts happened, there was many unbirths scattered in all worlds. Master Yen Sid has to stop them at once. He appeared in the blissful land of Radiant Garden. He met many unbirths in there. Suddenly he stopped at The Dark Depth, where he found a baby in there. “God bless, how could a baby in here and no unbirths attacked him?” asked Yen Sid and confused he looked to the baby who crying and Yen Sid trying to calm him. “Maybe I should bring him to my tower.” Said Yen Sid.

    He appeared in the Tower and the three fairies looked to him. “He’s a cute one isn't it?.” Said Flora. “What name we should give to him?” asked Merryweather. Yen Sid looked at the baby and rising him up like Rafiki did to Simba. “This baby was the bless of light. I shall named him Hikaru.” Said Yen Sid.

    Another years have passed and Hikaru become a secret students of Yen Sid with his other friends. He was a quick learner although he only used a toy sword. He trained with Yen Sid in Twilight Town when suddenly many unbirths appeared and charged towards Hikaru. Yen Sid trying to help him but many unbirths stand in his way. “Out of the way!” said Yen Sid. Suddenly a flash of light appeared and all of unbirths were gone. Yen Sid shocked because he wasn’t the one who destroy them, but Hikaru did! He looked to Hikaru again, he shocked again because he saw a key shaped weapon with a keychain. “This boy has a keyblade!” thought Yen Sid in his mind. He began to gave all of his knowledge to Hikaru.

    Now another years have passed. And Hikaru had grown into 14 years old boy. He become one of Yen Sid favorite and secret student. “You have learned many things to self-defense and protect the weak Hikaru. Today is your final day in here. Because today I will have a mission to you.” Said Yen Sid. “Thank you for trusted me with your mission.” Said Hikaru as he kneel to Yen Sid like kneeling a king. “Ah, you don’t have to do that. Anyway, your friends also helped you to succeed the mission. They will come shortly. Good luck, Hikaru.” Said Yen Sid
     
  2. dualblade

    dualblade Break!

    Interesting,something to watch to see how Vildex came into being as well
     
  3. Destiny

    Destiny Guest

    Cool! It's a great story, minor grammar errors, but English isn't your first launguage, so it's pretty good.
     
  4. EtherealSummoner

    EtherealSummoner Lamentations 3:22-26

    Wow. U IS MAKING A story 2!! IS it going to be a series like mine?!! ^_^_^. I enjoyed the prologue.
     
  5. LivingDeath

    LivingDeath Dormina'd

    Chapter 1. The return of old friends

    “They have arrived.” Said Yen Sid. Hikaru saw two person that leave him in 4 years ago to increase their skills. A boy and A girl. The boy has brown hair and wearing glasses. He used similar clothes with Hikaru. And the girl, she has become more mature than 4 years ago. Green hair with blue eyes.
    “You’re… Harmony?” asked Hikaru when he gazed at the green haired girl that has grown up more than he imagine. “That’s me.” Said Harmony. He looked to the brown haired boy and said, “Looks like you guys have grown up more than I imagine.” Said Hikaru. The brown haired boy’s name is Falcon.

    “Well, that’s enough of your conversation. We must focus to our mission.” Said Yen Sid. He began to sat in a chair. “Well, unbirths are the mission of you people today. And Hikaru, there is some important work after defeating those being. A forbidden power known as Chaos is unleash it’s wrath. We need to keep an eye to that element.” Said Yen Sid. Hikaru was interested to element Chaos. He never heard that element before. But since Yen Sid said that power is forbidden, he doesn’t want to have it. “Since we don’t have a ship, we must find a good transportation to visit all worlds. Maybe Radiant Garden is good place for you to find a good ship. May the God bless you.” Said Yen Sid. He sent them into Radiant Garden immediately.

    Hikaru was looked into a giant castle that in front of them. “Beautiful place…” said Harmony. Suddenly a few unbirths appeared near to them. Hikaru summoned his Proud Abyys keyblade, while Falcon summoned a keyblade that same to Fenrir. Harmony summoned her Calm Radiance. They could beat them easily. Suddenly a scream heard inside the city of Radiant Garden. In short, they ran to the city.
    They found themselves a giant orange being with a horn. Much more like a behemoth but has many in it’s body with Unbirth emblem . “What is… that thing?” asked Hikaru as he looked to the size of the monster. The size is almost like a building. In short, they prepared to fight against that being.

    The monster is defeated and Radiant Garden is saved from that monster’s wrath. An old person with long hair and red scarf appeared in front of them. “You have proofed yourself with that amazing weapon. Tell me, could you give me your name?” asked Ansem The Wise. “I’m Falcon, that is Hikaru and this girl is Harmony. We would like to ask something.” Said Falcon. Ansem the Wise become interested to see their keyblade. “Please, come to my castle. I could answer all you want to know in there.” Said Ansem the Wise.
     
    Last edited: Feb 26, 2009
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