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Castlevania: Moon of Grief (a DKG Fanfic)

Discussion in 'Traditional' started by Tsukiyomi, Dec 9, 2009.

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  1. Tsukiyomi

    Tsukiyomi Shinto's Moon God

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    Main theme song of the story: YouTube - Castlevania: Order of Ecclesia Music - "Rhapsody of the Forsaken"

    Synopsis:

    A long time ago, back when Vampires ruled the night, the Lord of Vampires, built the source of his power, Castle Dracula, aka Castlevania. But that wasn't the only castle he built. There was one moe castle that he secretly built. THe only problem was that he didn't build it on the Earth, he built it on the moon! Dracula planned on not just only cursing God on the Earth but rule and live on the moon, one of the supposed "eyes" of God. That way, he can taint God's view on the world. But, the thing is, Dracula ultimately perished in 1999.
    But that didn't stop one of Dracula's greatest supporters, Arius. He plans on controlling the Moon Castle and become God of the moon, continuing Dracula's curse. Now, only one person can stop this. Faust Hewley, a man who will clear God's view.
     
    Last edited: Jun 14, 2010
  2. Soul Knight

    Soul Knight Guest

    Cool, I can't wait to read chapter 1.
     
  3. Tsukiyomi

    Tsukiyomi Shinto's Moon God

    Chapter 1: A ship to Japan part 1

    On a star filled night, there was a cruise liner heading to Japan. On that ship were many wealthy millionares who wanted to expierience Japan's great lifestyles. THough not all of them joined to expierience it. There is one young man who is trying to find a new home. His name is Faust Hewley and he just wants to be free and have no more responsibilities. As he stares into the cold dark night, he says "What a quiet night." Then all of the sudden, his boss came outside and said "Faust." "We need you to serve drinks." Faust looked at him and said "Yeah Yeah." "I'll get to it." The boss then scoffed and said "What a punk" as he left. Faust stood there and said "Hmmph." "What a jerk." He then sighed and looked up to the moon. "The moon." "Now thats a peaceful place to live on." He then turned away and went inside the kitchen to do his job.
     
    Last edited: Jul 14, 2010
  4. Soul Knight

    Soul Knight Guest

    You need to make it a bit longer. A chapter should be about 3 paragraphs atleast, other then that I like how you started the story.
     
  5. Tsukiyomi

    Tsukiyomi Shinto's Moon God

    Well, thats just a part of the chapter Soul. I don't want make the whole post one chapter. Thats too boring.
     
  6. The Heartless King

    The Heartless King The King of Shadows

    He wants to kill us with suspence. XD
     
  7. Tsukiyomi

    Tsukiyomi Shinto's Moon God

    Chapter 1 part 2

    The kitchen was full of waiters, cooks, waitresses and washers. His boss was walking over to him with a silver tray full of food. He looked at Faust and said "I need you to bring this tray to ver to table 7 andd bringg it back to refilled." Faust looked at him and said unenthustiatically "Yes sir." The boss groaned and said "Come on Faust." "Put effort into it." Faust looked away and said "Yeah yeah." He then grabbed the tray and walked out of the kitchen. He was now in the dining room. He looked around and saw that it was full of weatlhy, happy families having fun eating and talking to eachother. "THey look like they are having fun." He then smiled and walked over to his desired table. He put the food down and said in a quiet and nice tone "Heres you food." "I hope you have a nice night." He then walked back into the kitchen.
     
  8. alchemistz

    alchemistz New Member

    I finished Castlevania but on the girl version.
    Nice job DKG! =D
     
  9. Tsukiyomi

    Tsukiyomi Shinto's Moon God

    Thank you. What do you mean girl version?
     
  10. alchemistz

    alchemistz New Member

    I mean Castlevania: Aria of Sorrow
     
  11. Tsukiyomi

    Tsukiyomi Shinto's Moon God

    I love that game. I'm playing that one right now. Wait, I think you mean Julius mode.
     
  12. alchemistz

    alchemistz New Member

    My bad, I just looked in Wikipedia and Soma Cruz, the protagonist of Castlevania: AoS was a male >.> I played this like 4 years ago and thought that he was a girl >.>
     
  13. Tsukiyomi

    Tsukiyomi Shinto's Moon God

    Lo. Nice. Well thats ok dude.
     
  14. Tsukiyomi

    Tsukiyomi Shinto's Moon God

    Chapter 1 part 3

    As Faust went into the kitchen, a man in a white cloak stood there and looking at the door. "Hmm, that boy is a peculiar one." He grabbed and sat down while waitor came over and said "What would you like to order sir?" The man looked at him and said "I'll have a side of port and a steak." The waitor wrote down the order and said "Will that be all?" The man gave a quick grin and said "Well actually no." "Could you have the silver hair one serve me?" Waitor stood there with a surprised look on his face and said "Um sure." He then walked into the kitchen and said "Faust." "Somebody wants you to serve them at table 3." Faust looked at the waitor and said "Really?" The waitor then nodded and walked away. Faust stood there and said "Wow." A few minutes later he came bursting out with a silver tray with the order on it. He walked to the table and said "Heres your order sir." The man looked up to him and said "Why thank you."

    Faust looked at the man and said "You're welcome." He then placed the the order on the table and started leaving. The man then brought up his hand and said "Wait!" Faust looked back and said "What?" The man put on a smile and said "Come and sit with me." Faust stood there with a suprised look on his face. "Really?" Then man nodded and said "I want to talk to you." Faust stood there for a few seconds and then sat down. The man started cutting up his large steak and took a bite. He looked at Faust and said "Would you like a bite?" Faust looked at him and said "No, but thanks." The man chuckled and said "What a polite boy." He then put down his knife and fork while he wiped his face. He then said "Now, what is a young man like you doing a cruise like this?"
    Faust looked at him but said nothing. The man looked at him and said "I understand." "Its your own business." He then said "Hmm, are you going to be in downtown Tokyo?" Faust looked at the man and said "Yes." The man then said "Thats good." "I want you meet me at Shibuya tower." "I need to talk you there." Faust looked at him and "Ok." The man then smiled and walked away. "Wow." "What a strange old man." After he said that, the boat docked into into Kyoshu harbor. "Well, heres my new life."
     
  15. Soul Knight

    Soul Knight Guest

    It keeps getting better, I like it.
     
  16. Tsukiyomi

    Tsukiyomi Shinto's Moon God

    Thanks Jesse. I appreciate that.
     
  17. Tsukiyomi

    Tsukiyomi Shinto's Moon God

    Chapter 2: New life

    When the ship docked, all the passengers started walking out down the ladder that lead to the docks. As soon as the last wealthy passenger left, Faust walked over to his boss and looked at him. "Boss." "I know the deal was that I had to worked as a waitor to be on the cruise." "So, can I please leave?" The boss looked at Faust looked at him and said "No way Faust." "We need you on here." Faust looked at him and said "Please!" "I need to get off this boat." "I want to live here." The boss then looked at Faust deeply and said "Live here huh?" He then closed his eyes and chuckled. "Wow." "Why does that remind me of someone?" He then chuckled and said "Ok Faust." "You can leave." "Just grab your check and get off." "You knucklehead." Faust then shockingly put on a smile and said "THanks, boss." He then walked away from him and went to pick up his check. The boss stood there laughing. "That kid." "He reminds me of me." He then stopped laughing and said "I really hope Faust can make it here." "I really do."
     
    Last edited: Jul 14, 2010
  18. Tsukiyomi

    Tsukiyomi Shinto's Moon God

    Chapter 2 part 2

    Faust walked to the counter of the ship's receptionist. He looked at her and said "Hi." "I'm here to pick up my check." The receptionist looked at him and said "Oh hello young man." "What is your name and what was your occuptaion." Faust then said "Faust Hewley and I was waitor." The receptionist went on her computer and started typing. "Lets see.... Faust Hewley..." After a few seconds she said "Found it!" She then opened her drawer and brought out a check. She started writing and said "Do you want it in Yen?" Faust nodded and she said "Good." She then finished writing on it and handed it to him. "There you go." "Have a nice day Mr. Hewley." Faust nodded again and said "Thanks." He then started walking away.
    As he was walking away, Faust thought to himslef "Heh." "This is it." "My new life." He left the lobby and was now heading to his room. He walked all the way to the basement and to his room. He went to his door and opened. He grabbed all of his clothes and effects and put them into a duffel bag. He then started walking up towards the upper deck.
     
  19. Soul Knight

    Soul Knight Guest

    Faust is a great character, I think the story is going great so far.
     
  20. Tsukiyomi

    Tsukiyomi Shinto's Moon God

    Thank you. I try hard.
     
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