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Discussion in 'Archive' started by Kairi831, Sep 8, 2012.

  1. Kairi831

    Kairi831 Active Member

    So, me and two of my friends made a movie trailer to a book I have been writing lately. The basic summary is about a girl named October Elizabetha (XD) who is best friends and has fallen in love with Luke Kessler. Well, when she meets Toby Dutten, she falls for him once they start spending a lot of time with each other. Brittney Murphy, which used to be friends with October, gets slightly jealous because she likes Toby. Well, when October decided to confess her feelings for Toby, he rejected her at first. Just a simple "Oh, ok. I don't like you like that" type of thing. Not a concrete answer or reason behind it. Well, October gets frusturated and keeps bugging him about it. Toby just wouldn't tell her the reasons because he was her friend and he didn't want to hurt her. Well, on the final day, he blurts out that she was jsut the ugliest person he has ever seen. This didn't help Octobers self esteem at the most either. Luke finds out about what Toby he had said and gets pissed, confronting him. A fight develops. She goes into depressed mood and goes into her bathroom and shatters her mirror. About to cut herself, Luke comes to the resuce and stops her before she cuts herself. She starts crying and falls to the ground. Luke held October in her arms and kissed her. This is when October realized that Luke really does love her. As her blood surrounds them she realizes that it's too late.

    You see, when October fell the knife she had stabbed into her theigh and punctured a vein. She was hiding her pain so she could kiss Luke just once. After October had died, Luke looked at the wall where she had written in her blood ; "Love me. . ." He teared up and wrote in his blood ; "Always. . "

    Later the police found the bodies of Luke and October. October as an accidental and Luke as a suicide.​

    Sorry, to like, ruin the story for you, but I just wanted to make a role play of this and I think it would be kind of neat. So since there are only a couple of openings, I hope I can get people to join, because this would be a really neat story. . .​

    CHARACTERS :

    Username - Kairi831
    Name - October Elizabetha
    Age - 16
    Gender - Female
    Appearance - http://data.whicdn.com/images/11350...-goth-gothic-pretty-Favim.com-54317_large.jpg
    Role - October is pretty much the main character and an important part of the RP.
    Other - October is always the odd one out, no matter where she goes. She will alwasy get stares from other students, teachers, and even parents. She plays the electric guitar and is quite well at it. She loves to draw and writes poetry. October really only talk to one person, and that is Luke. Until Toby came around.
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    Username - TheKnightofAwesome
    Name - Luke Kessler
    Age - 17
    Gender - Male
    Appearance - http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_2iSSI8Mqc...A3I/YQwxE8pUWX4/s400/matty-murder-emo-boy.jpg
    Role- Luke is also the main character and is also important for the story line.
    Other - He is very playful around October and very sweet and gentle. He never told her his feelings because he was uncertain if she felt the same way. He is afraid to lose her and will do anything to protect her. He plays Accoustic more than Electric and is a very talented artist.
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    Username - Vox
    Name - Toby Dutten
    Age - 17
    Gender - Male
    Appearance - http://quizilla.teennick.com/user_images/X/XO/XOX/XOXOSODAXOXOPOPXOXO/1248844415_2016_full.jpeg
    Role - Toby is pretty important and a BIG part of the story line.
    Other - Toby lacks a good personality and is usually thinking about himself. He loves to skateboard and knows a lot of tricks and is able to pull them off. Deep down he thinks October is a freak, but he likes her as a friend but is taken aback when she starts to fall for him. Toby has no concrete hobby but he is intrested in a few things.
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    Username - spaghettimonsterlover
    Name - Brittney Murphy
    Age - 16, but is a little bit older than October.
    Gender - Female
    Appearance - http://cdn.bleacherreport.net/image...420/577/Molsk8s_display_image.jpeg?1342557683
    Role - Brittney is pretty important, she taunts October a lot throughout the story. She flirts with Toby a few times in front of October when they hung out at the skate park and October gets frusturated when he takes notice in her more.
    Other - Britteny is really self centered and thinks she can take out her frustration on everyone else. She thinks she is the "alpha" female and usually makes others feel like crap to make her look better. She has a really b*tchy attitude and will do anything to get her way.
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    RULES :
    1. Stay to the story line. Please. Although you are allowed to go in different directions as long as the main key points -which are in bold- stay in the story.
    2. I am letting you control a few students, but don't make them all on one side. You might have to use them to help the other characters.
    3. Erm, no excessive swearing please.
    4. Minimum of 5 lines perpost and be descriptive.
    5. No fast posting. This shouldnt be done any time soon, especially on how deep we get into the story.
    6. Stay to your character templates.​

    If you have any questions then Vm or PM me. If you want to join, then post here and ask what character you would like to try out for.

    I hope this RP can take off. I took me a while to get this all together.

    If you wish your character to be more detailed then VM what you would like to add on.

    I will not change Names, ages, genders, or appearances and roles, if you would like to add anything onto the Other option then by all means VM me what you would like to add and I will edit it right away.

    Thing is, don't change a character if you don't want to take responsibilty for character.

    I hope this is good enough for people to join :3

    Again message me for any questions.
     
    Last edited: Nov 7, 2012
  2. TheKnightofAwesome

    TheKnightofAwesome /人◕ ‿‿ ◕人\

    I'm debating if I want to join in on this. If I do I want Luke. Give me like two-three days to make up my mind. hold Luke for that time please.
     
  3. Kairi831

    Kairi831 Active Member

    Alright, sure thing. . . :3
     
  4. TheKnightofAwesome

    TheKnightofAwesome /人◕ ‿‿ ◕人\

    see problem is, the plot is already written, and while that's not...bad, it poses for a problem for an rp because everyone is stuck in a rigid mold. we can't make it our own, which is the beauty of an rp, different styles and characters coming together, it's what makes the story real. everyone has their own agenda. Plus, everyone will have to worry if they accidentally deviate from the plot. It just makes for a hard-to-write-for RP.
     
  5. Kairi831

    Kairi831 Active Member

    Well, thats not really the plot, just a basic summary. As long as it flows from something like the example I have written then everything is set. There really is no way to ruin the RP, people can add any other details they want into the RP. Thats just the general idea that flows with the story.

    But I see what you are saying.
     
  6. Moogle

    Moogle Well-Known Member

    It's a different style than most people around here are used to. I saw RPs like this one all the time back on Quizilla. Though, could I ask for like. . . an MSPaint flowchart or something? Those relationships are really confusing *.*
     
  7. Kairi831

    Kairi831 Active Member

    Lol, ok.

    October and Luke love each other, but they don't know that. They are hesitant to express their feelings because they don't want their friendship to perish due to them knowing each other since kindergarten.
    October likes Toby, but Toby likes Brittney and Brittney and October just down right hate each other.
     
  8. Xeren_Ozone

    Xeren_Ozone Member

    I think that this is an interesting type of rp. If Knight doesn't take Luke, I'll be glad to take it lol
     
  9. Kairi831

    Kairi831 Active Member

    Ok, I had put bu Username that it is reserved by 2.
    If Knight doesnt notify me by day 4 then Xeren, the character is yours.
     
  10. NeRo

    NeRo Your Supreme Lord And Savior Staff Member Administrator

    This look extremly interesting actually. Like a Novel that i'd read on a summer evening. I'd like to be apart of it if things arent already taken. If toby is available i'll fill the shoes.

    I agree with Req though, can we get a little bit of clarification on the relationships? like a swift break down?
     
  11. Kairi831

    Kairi831 Active Member

    You can most definetly be Toby.

    Erm, let me try again. . . .

    October and Luke are best friends.
    They like each other but are afraid to admit it.
    October likes Toby, but Toby doesn't like her that way.
    Toby and Brittney like each other, and flirt a lot, but they won't go out.

    If any one has any other questions, just VM me lol
     
  12. NeRo

    NeRo Your Supreme Lord And Savior Staff Member Administrator

    Alright, just make sure you give me details on how im supppose to control him and things will be fine.
     
  13. TheKnightofAwesome

    TheKnightofAwesome /人◕ ‿‿ ◕人\

    Alright. After a LOT of consideration. I'll take on Luke. If nothing else, this will give me a chance to test out my writing skills as I try to become a character not really my own. Challenge Accepted with great enthusiasm.
     
  14. Kairi831

    Kairi831 Active Member

    @Vox -- There really is no way for me to tell you how to control your character. The only thing is, if you want me to add certain characteristics, or traits, to your character, I don't see a problem in that, just make sure that if it says your character is "rude", I can't change it to say it is "nice". But other than that, kind of fit to what your given/chosen Character Template is.

    @Knight -- Alright, Knight, you are officially Luke. Sorry Xeren.

    All the characters are chosen from, we just need another member (female perferabley) to take the role at Brittney, and I can get the RP up and ready to go. . .
     
  15. Kairi831

    Kairi831 Active Member

    Sorry for the double post.

    I am just going to start the RP and whoever will play Brittney will have to join in.
    We have all but one of the characters and I can't stand to wait any longer. lol
     
  16. NeRo

    NeRo Your Supreme Lord And Savior Staff Member Administrator

    Got my first post done. Tell me if i did Toby correctly to your liking if so i'll continue like that.
     
  17. Kairi831

    Kairi831 Active Member

    Your post was fine actually. I kind of laughed for a while at the first thing he "spoke."

    It was funny XD

    Im tired though, nonetheless, your post was good.

    I'm still trying to look for a Brittney. . .
     
  18. NeRo

    NeRo Your Supreme Lord And Savior Staff Member Administrator

    ask RoaringFlames
     
  19. Kairi831

    Kairi831 Active Member

    Hmm. . . .Maybe. . .
     
  20. NeRo

    NeRo Your Supreme Lord And Savior Staff Member Administrator

    hard to say, the good once aren't as active anymore due to school i suppose.
     

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