A Walk to Never Remember (True Story)

~AWTNR~
I was walking threw the crowd, everybody going there own way talking about whatever was going on in there life. There was Music playing loud from different stages, Jazz to be exact. The crowd was loving all the different instruments and talented singers. It was all great for everyone, everyone except me. There i was waiting at the cross walk, there were cross walk police, or whatever you call them directing traffic with there whistles, finally a whistle blew and i found a waving hand signaling my side to cross. As i crossed the street i looked down thinking about how fast can i get home and what kinda of ice cream i wanted.
When i got to the other side i looked up and the entire universe stopped, the people around me seemed to disappear. The lights got brighter, the music seemed to slow down an eventually was gone. My eyes were stuck on one thing..1 thing but 2 people. My own heart stopped beating, breathing became non existent, i felt as if i was falling down while still on my feet. My blood went cold as my brain started shutting down, i knew what i was seeing but nothing, Nothing was accepting what i had learned to accept all those months ago. I wanted to cry out, wave, shout, something, anything to get her attention, but i knew i couldnt. I never could again, my eyes started burning, as if lava was spilling from the inside of my head, my chest felt the burn as well as i slowly came to accept the life i had while staring at the life i always wanted, the life i almost had..the life that spilled so quickly between my finger. Something inside of me shatter, i even heard a sound of glass smashing against the pavement..i felt my legs giving out as the concert seemed to fly forward. I could feel my own soul giving up on life trying to escape from my mortal prison. I heard the Devil himself laugh at my pitiful state as tears stung my eyes taking the little bit of willpower i had left to hold them back. I didnt care about anything except the darkness that seemed to creep upon me. This sudden attack of pain had killed me and I was leaving this world......
Then a whistle blew and everything snapped back to normal. I was still on my feet when the music came blaring back. I looked over to her again as she was walking across the street.......with him right beside her.
~The End~

 

thank you! I dont know why i always forget to capitalize my I's. I shall revise it more thanks for the tips

 

yeah i had re:read it but i guess i didnt see all the mistakes!