Moogle

Uhh, ok then.
So, let me see if I can piece together the <outside> information you've given me on the Jals family. Zurxet - or Siavash in this case - had a family of a wife & two kids. the wife ends up in a coma, zurxet goes off to find a cure and goes on a power-hungry quest instead. does that mean that the kids were left behind to tend to their mother whose in the coma after all this time that Zurxet is gone?

Oh, she wasn't? Whoops! I don't even know what made me write that in ^^;

Thanks. And weirdly enough, this story might have a happy ending, well, maybe for some people ;)

With Xenlo. She found him more charming and Dietrich was kind of an asshole the first time they met, so she chose the madman with a bigass pocketwatch

Nah, I was just editing that around into the 4th chapter, which i think is pleasure & tears, and that part is on pg. 22 as of now..

let's just say half of the story is porn >///<
and it's ok. No, the whole thing with Dietrich & Alice getting back together was because Ditrich felt bad and apoligized to Alice. Alice got engaged to him and I don't think I mention or not if Xenlo ever knew or not...

And page 25?? Um, I'll go have a look at that.

Ah, ok then. I think I got some tiny TINY editing to do, but other than that, I think i'm almost done with the story. my god, the story is so god damn hard to write •o•

Still Requiem, there is nothing in the template that says that it gains power whenever it deals damage. Even if he is awarded with the sphere as he fights, it does not grow stronger as he deals damage because you did not say it in the template that says that it gains power. The Palm of Lashimi, as you had stated, is to be used in healing, blocking and to maintain mantra through meditation. If I had encountered this, you would've lost more points for going out of the template. As for the etc part, you need to get rid of it and give more information on it besides just "meditation, etc." That etc can be anything and no one wouldn't even know what that could be.

Hey d00d! I'm working on the AXZ thing and I don't know if I should have Zurxet tell Audri his real name or not... Which had terribly slipped my mind, for some unknown reason >.>;

Actually, it is not in my view. When you said immaterial, I was thinking that it is spiritually/mentally draining his chi since you cannot naturally touch it. Yes, he gains the energy sphere but even it if cannot be physically touched and it is spiritually made by him, to me, it can still drain him of his chi. Well, that is how I see it. Anything else? I am getting ready to start the next battle and I really need to find some new judges.

I did not see it in the template where it says that it is independent of his chi. I know about the energy sphere but nothing as to where it is independent. Even if you were to say that at the very moment when you had first made the template, I would most likely would tell you to change it as to where the attack takes some of his chi away. I am basing on exactly how you had made the template.

Even so, it was real hard for me to even figure out a winner because both of you were doing great. There was hardly anything wrong. If I actually had Nicole and Aqua help with the judging, it would have been better. I had reread the posts 3 times in order to come up with a fair result. The only major difference that changed everything was the Judge's Favor and the Powerplay. I am not upset if you are mad as to how the results had came out but even so, I was not thinking on terms as to which characters were too weak or which character was the strongest. I was basing it on exactly as how I had created the point system and I used it and the reading of the posts to make sure that everything is alright. This would even be included to my character, Inida. Sorry if it made you mad or anything but I assure you that I judged it fairly.

You would know that the Breaking out of template part would take away points. If you step out of the template, you lose points. As for the Resistance part, my bad. I know that you said that you have expended the second Resistance on offense but with your first one, I didn't see the word, Resistance, so I just went and accidentally assumed that Jaya itself was on the offense. I also had stated along with the post either that there should be two more posts or until there is a winner.

I know that Jaya had little drain on the Murugan part. It is when he was using the Palm of Lakshimi a couple of time is where he should have shown at least a little bit of tiredness. There was nothing in there that stated that he used little chi in that part. That was where you loss 4 points. With the little bit more realism with the fire, I was thinking about the Nova part was all. I just went ahead and said that your character took in some of the attack from the Nova blast in my post.

Have a problem with the judging? Tell me right now.

Yeah, let's just see how everything takes for a turn :3

I know, I feel bad in a sense as a writer for making that tragic LFG ending ;__;

lol, yeah. it made me look back and see how terribly messed it was.
but i'm sorry for the confusion since i was typing rather fast and not exactly working through all my thoughts at the time

You finally noticed? I was working on fixing it a while ago. Guess it worked. Wanna know something? When i look back to some of my old posts, they look obnoxious, and almost childish... :)

how so?????

:p there I posted let the fight continue!

working on it, I came back after four days. I have a lot of things to answer to!