ADogX

sweet twist ending! looking forward even more now.

I can't wait. looking forward to Antonio kicking Dark Blood's ass.

Hey, I finally got through your story! It's really good! If you'll allow editorial comments though, I noticed you have the main characters (usually Jessica) cry... a lot. I don't know if that's just part of her character, or some symbolism your rolling with because they have hearts they feel more strongly about stuff. All I know is that the actual KH characters never cried this much, granted they never had to watch their own family murdered by their evil father/ uncle. Also I felt that the gun that Dark Blood used to kill Adam kinda came out of nowhere. and after the fact he didn't recognize the irony of what he just did, which only added to the randomness of the gun. just a few things I noticed, but other than that it was a REALLY compelling story. keep it up.

Alright, though that may be a while, I started reading it and it's good ( I got to the first part of the fight with Dark Blood.) I'll read wwhenever I get the chance but there's no promise that it will be tonight. maybe tomorrow or later today(?) in this case.

Naturally! I'll check it out!

No I haven't yet, where can I find it?

okay so what do I need to know about the Multi-psoting?

Thanks for the info on KH1,I beat it thx to you

Seems like it. Come back and talk if you decide to give up on taking my score.

I was gonna do that anyways.

I dunno. I figured I'd let Destiny and Wayward do that for me.

I think I had already read your post.

Bust-A-Move is one of the greatest arcade games ever made. It is similar to the Gem Shooter game you're trying to make a high score on. Same basic premise, except there are a limited number of orbs, and each time you clear them all you move to the next level. I think we have an arcade game on the site that is closer to Bust-A-Move than the Gem Shooter games are. You should find them and try them.

Do you know what Bust-A-Move is? It is nothing like one of those crappy dance games like DDR.

Work to improve and resend a new application in about December and you could be added because the minute I get the two I chosen added by TD, I might open up for more people.

You didn't get it. A few reason...

1.) your grammar was terrible
2.) your spelling was bad
3.) the sample article wasn't written to the greatest possible way.

For the main site? No, I chose who already just trying to get them actually added

I know. It's like Bust-A-Move.

Why don't you try beating the scores of Goldfish and the others who are at the top? I don't have nearly as many high scores as they do.