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Well for one it's less challenging and you can make up a history to make your character instatly special. Next off you being the creator of the RP need to make a character to be like a model to the others especially your RP so people can get the mood of what type of people were pulled for the experiment.

Ok, but you've been HERE long enough to know better.

hey about your RP, you need waaaaaaaaaaaaaaay more info. I have no idea what sort of RP this is, do they have powers? Is it modern time? Is it future, past? Explain the setting and explain the characters. Who did he decide would try to stop him and how did he decide them. Plus people don't usually try to take over the world for fun, they usually have a reason for it like most common used, a sense of revenge of something. The ooc rp info should be more of a story sort of thing. Like when you open a book, it should be like an introduction of prologue sort of thing, what you have isn't even close.

Also you need to be a lot more creative! You have no creativity at all. It's plain and boring, your not going to get anyone joining that thing unless you make it interesting and have more information.

Also in character templates, there's usually a history setting so people know where this character is from and what their background is.

Also, never, ever, have things such as (OF COURSE) or whatever, it looks so unorganized and unproffessional.
You need to fix a lot and a good way to help is reading the RP guide line and rules thread that is stickied under RP. However you should know how a RP is set up, you've been here on the site for 2 months and I've seen you saying in the past saying things like you're not used to how things are set up here, well every forum site is basically set up just like this one and definately have much more organized RP and other RP'ers from other RP'ing sites RP better, so you definately need to improve and I hope you will change real soon.

Ya that would be fine I guess.

That make's sence ok.

Add detail, then.

If that scream Sheila heard was Sahara, its impossible. Sahara is on the World that never was, not on hollow bastion

Found it, thanks for telling me.

Zoren's evil brother has caught up to Sahara after her finnaly escaping from Kingdom Soul and has turned her into a powerful Searcher just as Zorex is.
that is a direct copy from the discription.

Sahara is a searcher not Sheila. Sahara has turned bad. If you are confused look at the KHSODII Overwiew in the OCC thread.

Ok so r u having any trouble.

You got it! Thats so cool! Well what I did was went on youtube and looked up RPG Maker VX Tutorials. They helped alot.

Alright, you have struck out. You once again violated the rules by posting a two-liner, regardless of my warnings and infractions. You have been reported for the most recent problem. Futher breakage will result in your access to the RP area being revoked.

Sheila is back in her body and Zorex is in venitus's body. Zoren is in KS in with Sahara.

read... he's fading into kingdom soul where the searcher's base is...

Please read rules for the forums and especially the RP section. You have posted an OOC thread in the wrong area in an IC area. Please read the RP Rules and Guide. By from what I see this is strike 4.

I'll watch it when I don't have school days. Like on saturdays. Then, I'l let you know how I like it, k? ;)

Just let Will fade into the kingdom after one of your characters goes to talk to him.

well thank you very much! i made it like forever ago.