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Fanfiction Competition

Discussion in 'Archive' started by SkylerOcon, Feb 26, 2008.

  1. SkylerOcon

    SkylerOcon New Member

    I think we should try and do a fanfiction competition.

    Like. Either post a link, or post a copy of the fic here and we could get a group of people who are willing to read them and decide the best.

    Good or no?

    If it is, then the rules are that the fanfictions are allowed to be incomplete, as long as they are good. Any fanfictions that have a main character as an OC or have a mary/gary-stu OC in the fanficion will be disqualified.

    Any pairing wars on the forum will be an immediate DQ if the person is in the competition. And yaoi/yuri bashing will result in the latter and will be reported.

    They have to be at least 1,000 words. Any fandom is allowed, as long as it is somewhat well known (Like, I don't want to see any Patapon fanfics being entered, because I think I'm the only person who knows about it).

    Post the fandom, length (One-shot, Two-shot, Trilogy, Multi-chapter), if there is a couple post the pairing and whether it is straight, yaoi, or yuri.

    FanFiction.Net - Absolutes, a Super Smash Brothers fanfic

    That's my fic.

    Super Smash Brothers, Two-Shot, MarthxRoy yaoi.
     
  2. 1-up salesman

    1-up salesman New Member

    Sweet! Just the thing I was looking for.
    I'll be writing a Kingdom Hearts Fan-Fic, but it's not going to be 1,000 words until I work on it. I'll get started.
     
  3. 1-up salesman

    1-up salesman New Member

    Last edited: Jul 20, 2008
  4. emo kairi

    emo kairi New Member

    Hey, i'm wondering if the comp is still going? if it is then i could submit in my 1125 word anime i have been writting. but if its not on then i won't waste my time.
     
  5. Rhodis=Jynx

    Rhodis=Jynx New Member

    Is this comp still going on?! If so i'd enjoy submitting more of my story here and see if I stand a chance at winning.
     
  6. Locogabitron

    Locogabitron Kichi's Squall Leon

    I don't know if it is. The first post was in Feb 2008 and the next 3 are from June. I could take over the competition, but i still don't get about the 1,000 worlds. I saw his facfic and it was quite long to read.

    Rhodis, ill try to take it over and see. For now, post your fanfic here.
     
  7. worbs

    worbs New Member

    i think thats a good idea
     
  8. Rhodis=Jynx

    Rhodis=Jynx New Member

    Kingdom Hearts Fan Fiction, Multi Chapter

    Branch II is almost complete.........The masks they wear are fading..........What power, there is no way they can be killed.....................No use, Sora is dead.

    “There isn’t much time left.”
    “The keyblades strength is failing.”
    “I and Jynx have been fighting for days”
    “Rhodis can’t stand this much longer”
    “I must rewrite time, and set right the war.”
    “Rhodis!?!”
    “TIME TURN!”

    Prologue

    Toxnes raised his hand and the hall fell into silence. The large nobody now held control over the room. His dark grey hair and eyes glanced over them. All thirteen were now present and in full power. Toxnes regarded the group and noted each ones distinct story. Each had a reason for fighting and each wanted their hearts back. Slowly and with a great demur of power Toxnes stood from his white marble throne.
    “This room now holds a group of men and women who have paid the price for being strong, wise,” he faced the throne behind him. “Or kind. We are those who were chosen by heartless to become the tortured souls known as Nobodies. But now it is time to rise up out of the ashes of the last and failed organization. It is time for us, the true and elite.” He turns and nods to each member in turn. “To take our place as rulers over the lands we knew.” The hall was instantly filled with claps and a few random cheers. All save three people. Jynx, Xenroc and Toxnes. The three walked out of the room into a separate hall.
    “Simple speech. They each have potential.” Xenroc said staring at the door of the hall as he closed it behind them. His black hair flowed over his broad shoulders.
    “Only enough to fight and die. As is the existence of a Nobody.” Toxnes said grimly looking down at his hands.
    “Perhaps we can cheer you up, I believe we have some good news for you.” Jynx piped in as he walked past the other two and went straight up a wall. He wore his usual purple and white face paint to give him the appearance of a jester. His purple hair also added to the affect that he seemed to enjoy.
    “News? What is it Xenroc?” Toxnes said slowly facing the greatest nobody alive.
    “You said that we only fight and die. I have found that because we lack the other two parts of ourselves. Heart and soul. We may exist up to three times.”
    “Xehanort did this didn’t he?” Toxnes questioned.
    “Only just.” Jynx said now on the ceiling. “But we are all at least double his power and we are not as alone as you think.”
    “Where Is Roxas!” Yells a fiery voice in the void.
    “Is that...” Toxnes began.
    “Axel.” Jynx and Xenroc said together.
    “Ahh,” Toxnes said a slight grin on his face. “The old orginazation still exists.”
    “Yes, but I was refering to the other project of Mine.” Xenroc said walking in a small circle around their leader.
    “How many do you have now?” Toxnes said looking straight ahead. Xenroc didn’t speak but held his and out and ten masks floated in the air infront of them. Each mask was ornatly decorated and designed.
    “Branch two will be unstopable with the next three.”

    Chapter 1

    The world shook beneath him and large black walls sprouted around him separating him from the rest of the Keyblade wielders. Reaching out his hand to try and reach them but a sharp pain seared through his outstretched arm. Blood spilled from the cut and his key blade appeared to protect him. Shadow and Neoshadow swarmed out of the wall and rushed towards him. Three hundred charge and die at his feet for another six hundred to take their place. Cuts and wounds appeared but they didn’t slow their assault.

    “Rise and shine lovebirds.”

    Sora awoke with a start. His face was covered in sweat and his breathing was rapid and harsh. The nightmares were coming more and more often and Kairi was starting to notice. He looked in bed beside him where she lie, still asleep and smiling. Sora calmed down and kissed her cheek softly.
    “Sora! Kairi! Wake up or you’ll miss lunch.” Sora turned to face the door on the gummy ship. Riku had mellowed out a lot after meeting Erah. He seemed to forget about the darkness inside him though he too was having nightmares. Sora leaned over and shook Kairi a little and she started to moan. Sora reached over their bed and grabed his pants and shirt. He had always liked how his old black suit had fit him but now it was too small. Leon had let him have a suit much like his own but without the gloves or vest. Kairi took his old suit and made one for him and he thought it looked nice. Riku teased her about it though. It was her wedding present to him and he had gotten her crystal crown. He put the outfit on as she started to rise.
    “What time is it?” She asked in a groggy and dazed voice. Sora looked around the ship but the clocks were all missing. Then he recalled what Riku had said. “ Wake up or you’ll miss lunch.”
    “Kairi, Riku stole our clocks and let us sleep in! We may land at any moment or we landed already.” Kairi’s eyes tripled in size. They had planed to land today and see what information had been gathered by Aroth and the others. And it was always good to see some friends. Recently heartless have been oddly aggressive. The three new keyblades seemed connected to this outbreak. Aroth the darkest of them all with his long black hair and cruel attitude. Rhodis with his past a blur to himself and others. Then there was Erah who had never shown skill in fighting. Though only the weak have stepped up it has made life far more tiring for them all. Sora put on his coat and, checking to see if Kairi was covered, left the room. Riku and king Mickey were both awake and at the wheel of the ship. Sora looked at the clock on the ship. 6:30am. Sora looked at Riku who merely smiled and went back to driving. Mickey couldn’t hold back a chuckle.
    “Are we there yet!?!” Kairi asked stepping into the main room of the ship. She glanced around then noted the clock and gave Riku a look that would kill Cloud. This made the smile on his face turn to full out laughing. Mickey couldn’t stop laughing to save his life. Sora was about to threaten them when he saw Radiant Gardens. He sighed lightly. They may have been woken early but it was well worth it to see the sunrise from the top of the castle.
    “When do we land?” Sora said, interrupting the laughter.
    “Not long now” Riku said looking over his shoulder to smile at them. Riku patted his pocket for a moment then opened his mouth to say something when a red light began flashing. Riku’s happy demure quickly departed and he turned to see the problem. On the planets surface there was a black spot that began to grow.
    “HEARTLESS!” They all yelled in unison.

    Chapter 2

    Sora jumped to his station beside Riku. Donald and Goofy’s ship flew up beside them and began to make the charge into a battle landing. Soon after Sora’s ship began the same decent.
    “From here they look like Shadow and Neo Shadow!” Donald yelled over the radio as the came within the atmosphere. Sora’s eyed Riku and the King and they each gave him the same worried glance. Sora looked at Kairi who had strapped herself into a seat by the rear cannon. Not very helpful in a charge. She didn’t care much about that. To her she was happy just to be near Sora. He was broken from his thoughts when they roughly entered the atmosphere. It was bumpy and thicker than he remembered but that’s how it was with every landing. Sora watched closely making sure that no one innocent was near the heatless when he began to fire.
    “SORA WAIT! CLOUD AND THE OTHERS ARE DOWN THERE!” Goofy yelled into the radio. Sure enough right in the center of the black smudge was a small group of people fighting the oncoming horde. Leon, Cloud, Tifa, Yufi and the keyblade wielders. Sora stopped his firing and began preparing to land in the heat of combat. The darkness began to grow as they got closer and closer. Sora braced himself for the landing as the ground zoomed in on them. Thousands of heartless’s eyes looked up at their impending doom.
    The ship hit with a loud crash and it crushed a large number of heartless and raised a cloud of smoke. Donald and Goofy’s ship had landed moments earlier a few meters over. Sora summoned his keyblade and smiled. Kingdom key was his first key, his only key now that his last quest was over. The door for the ship opened and he charged out as heartless tried to charge in. Sora swung left and right destroying all heartless who attacked. Mostly shadow but a few neoshadow. Sora looked over his shoulder for a second to check on Kairi who was doing fine for herself between Riku and the king. Sora smiled then turned around to a horror. Rising out of the shadow heartless was a giant shadow of himself.
    “Sora! Look out.!” Kairi yelled as the shadow Sora opened his eyes. All the shadows and neoshadows merged together to create his giant shadow kingdom key. Riku and Mickey ran up to join Sora at the front of the field of battle. The giant heartless turned to Sora then began the fight with a huge slice from it’s giant keyblade. Sora and the others rolled out of the way before it hit then they began their attack. Sora ran up to its feet and began slicing into them. King Mickey was hitting the other foot with his golden keyblade while Riku began running up the giant shade keyblade. The giant beast kicked Sora sending him through the air to land on some rubble. Mickey soon followed also being kicked. Riku was at the handle of the shadow keyblade when the giant heartless swatted him off. Sora rubbed his back gingerly feeling for breaks while he looked at the giant. It seemed weaker from a distance but right up on it they had done no damage at all.
    The shadow looked at Sora and smiled a crooked and evil smile. It then sunk down into the ground before anyone could call out and then just as fast it rose up again right in front of Sora. Mickey cast thunder aiming for the beasts face but hitting its shoulder and doing nothing. The shadow smiled again then raised its keyblade and a giant bolt of lightning fell from the sky towards Mickey. Riku jumped in the way casting dark shied to protect them both. Sora raised his keyblade and cast Curaga on them all repairing the wounds cased by the monstrous punts. The lightning stopped and the shadow brought his key straight down in an attempt to crush the heroes quickly.
    Kairi watched the heartless use Thundaga on the group cracking and sizzling the air around them. She ran inside the gummy ship and turned the rear cannon, the only one she could control, towards the shadows face. She aimed carefully as it brought its monstrous key downwards then she fired stopping its attack and possibly causing some damage. The smoke from the rounds explosion lingered for a moment on its face then without warning it sunk again. Kair swiveled the gun as far as it would turn in any direction without any sign of the giant. She looked all around but the beast was no where and it seemed she had done some good damage. She smiled than gave Sora a thumbs up.
    He looked at her and smiled back, she had hit her target and it looked as if she had done some good damage. He began to give her a thumbs up when a giant shadow hand reached out of the ground and grabed the gummy ship. Sora gasped in horror as the giant rose again and lifted the ship above its head. Sora watched in fright as the monster through the ship high into the air then swatted it down towards the ground and destruction.

    Chapter 3

    “Noooooo!” Sora yelled as he ran to get as near as possible. the ship was coming down fast and he was too far to do anything but watch.
    “Gravaga!” Donald yelled stepping out of his ship and the black spot of pulling magic appeared right above Kairi and the ship slowing it to a mildly soft landing. Donald than turned to the heartless casting multiple blizzagas and thundagas towards the head and face to no avail. Goofy rushed out and began bashing and hammering the legs of the giant with his shield also doing no damage.
    The giant looked down at them both in slight amusement then with a slight jerk of his hand he swung the keyblade hitting Donald launching him into the remnants of a house.
    “Donald!” Goofy yelled then he two was hit and launched into the same building. The shadow smiled at his own skill then turned to Sora.
    “Two hits, two targets, one result. Not bad for my first try huh?” The shadow asked in a voice slightly younger than Sora’s. Sora didn’t know what to say, or do. He had never fought a heartless that spoke so well or so simply.
    “Who are you!” Riku yelled running up to Sora to stand beside his friend.
    “I am nothing more than the heatless of a world left and abandoned by all who could protect it. Even worlds have hearts young fools.” The shade stated then it looked down at the keyblade. “Now it’s time to make yet another.” He grinned evilly then sunk his keyblade into the ground.
    “Not yet.” came a voice from behind the shadow. The shadow turned around revealing Aroth, Erah and Rhodis standing tall despite cuts and bruises.
    “Now!” King Mickey yelled as he charged for the giant again now leaning over to sink his Keyblade deep into the ground. Sora and the others all charged in after him while Kairi ran off to heal Donald and Goofy. Sora jumped high into the air and came down sinking his keyblade deeply in the shades hand. Riku jumped up beside Sora and began cutting away at the beasts massive hand. The shades face turned into a slight grimace of pain then it raised its free hand to swat the pests when it was pulled down by a gravaga spell. Shadow Sora looked down and there below his other hand was King Mickey using magic to hold his hand to the ground. Riku turned his keyblade upside down and plunged it deep into the hand then Sora pulled his out and followed suit.
    Shade Sora lifted the hand with the young men on it and began to shake it violently when a sharp pain in his back brought him down to the ground. Aroth Rhodis and Erah had silently and without being noticed crawling up the shade till they reached his back. Once there they stuck their keys in and each cast a spell. Aroth with his giant keyblade cast Thundaga, Erah with her flashy ocean themed keyblade cast Blizzaga and Rhodis with his twisted clock keyblade cast Firaga.
    Sora smiled, the battle had turned giving them the upper edge. Sora pointed his keyblade at the base of the shadows neck and began to slowly walk towards it. The shade twisted in pain and agony but it was far from dead. It looked into Sora’s eyes then with a great heave the shade vanished into darkness and shrunk away. His giant keyblade remained locked into the ground. It shook softly but remained in its place. Donald, Goofy and Kairi all ran back to the scene and stared with all the others at the giant shadow keyblade. It was too large to be lifted but it seemed to be doing no damage.

    Chapter 4

    “What should we do with this?” Sora asked looking at king Mickey.
    “Gee Sora,” the king replied, “I don’t know. It is made of darkness and not to be trusted. I think we should destroy it.”
    “Right” said Riku who promptly ran up to it and sliced straight through it. The large key rose and began to shake violently than it began to melt back into hundreds of shadow and neoshadow. Sora sighed and put his keyblade back into battle position.
    “Sora, hold your ground, this is our world. We can defend it on our own don’t worry.” Yelled Leon as he ran into the field of battle. Tifa and Yufi followed behind him smiling. “Cloud needs your help though. He found his old home on a different planet. You may want to help him”
    Sora looked at the battle field with concern. That was a lot of heatless
    “It’s just shadow heartless Sora. Nothing we cant handle. But if you all don’t leave here the keyblades will call more heartless to us.”
    Sora smiled than ran to their slightly damaged gummy ship. Donald and Goofy ran to theirs as well but as they grabed the door it took off leaving them on the planet. Sora stared into the ship and laughed. Inside was Rhodis Erah and Aroth. Mickey looked at his friends.
    “Sora, I will stay here with Donald and Goofy. You guys go help cloud and try to destroy that Giant heartless.”
    Riku took his controls than put the ship on a direct course with the nearest world.
    “Sora, this small world may know something about the giant breed of heartless. I think we should try here.”
    “What world is it?” Sora asked stepping up beside him. Riku only shrugged, on the screen it showed only a small planet that looked quite beautiful. It was made of Ice and snow and it looked peaceful.
    Sora smiled at Riku who was staring at the gummy ship in front of them that held Erah. His hand again went to over his right pocket were he patted a small case.
    “Hey Sora, Riku, Mickey and Mrs. Sora.” came a voice over the radio.
    “Hello” Riku said “This is Riku at the controls of Excalibur, Who is this?”
    “Rhodis at the controls of... this ship I am in.”
    Sora and Riku laughed, Rhodis though a bit dark was always ready to bring some laughter into everyone’s hearts.
    “Your in the ship...”
    “I don’t care.” Rhodis voice interrupted. “I shall call this ship, Shining Hyper Intelligent Transport! S.H.I.T. for short.”

    Chapter 5

    “Very funny Rhodis is Erah there.... Holy!” Riku was cut off by a sudden jerk in the ship. They all looked ahead at the tiny planet and the scene they saw haunts them for the rest of their life. The planet screamed in pain as it died and violently shook apart.
    “Oh my God! What happened!?” Kiari yelled.
    “I don’t know. I just don’t know.” Aroths voice calmly stated over the intercom.
    Sora turned towards Riku slowly.
    “I didn’t see any ships jettison. If anyone was alive there, I fear they aren’t now.” Riku said sadly looking at the ships computer. Sora could only stand there in shock. Once second a world was their the next it wasn’t.
    “What is that powerful, it was way too fast to be heartless.”
    “Search me.” Came a hauntingly familiar voice.
    The keyblade wielders all turned to the source. Standing behind them was a very unhappy looking Xigbar.
    “You were killed!” Sora yelled drawing his keyblade.
    “Yeah, and it did wonders for my temper!” Xigbar yelled than he drew his guns and fired at Sora who dodged and blocked as many as possible sending them all over the ship hitting the computer and walls. The ones he didn’t block exploded just before impact only slightly burning him.
    “Come on!” Riku yelled jumping up and charging towards Xigbar.
    “Stand back Riku! Warrior of Darkness.” Xigbar called before he turned one gun toward Riku and continued to fire at an even more aggressive speed. Sora and Riku blocked the spike shaped bullets as best as they could and prevented almost all of them from hitting themselves. Kiari ran to the ships controls and did her best to steer.
    “Riku!” Sora yelled.
    “Lets go.” Riku answered than they began to work together and swipe the spikes with a powerful double team combo. Sora and Riku swung their keyblades and large energy swords swung as well hitting twice as many bullets than ever.
    “Fine than. Lets turn up the heat!” Xigbar yelled, his hair shot straight up as if blown by an unseen wind. The two small guns he was holding shook and cracked than changed in shape and size. The new guns were shaped like the nobody symbol and fired larger spikes at a more rapid pace.
    “What! This shouldn’t be happening! SORA SAVE ME!” Xigbar yelled as his own body began to shake and change. His veins rushed towards the surface and his eye white out. None the less his guns continued to fire.
    “HEEELLLLLLLLP!” He screamed as the pain forced him to stop shooting.
    “Riku what’s happening?!” Sora yelled not putting his keyblade down.
    “I don’t know.” Riku answered when a small voice sounded through the ship.
    “Xigbar, you poor fool. You didn’t ask to use that power yet. If you want the pain to stop, let them kill you.” the small voice sounded.
    “Whose there!” Sora yelled but the ship was silent.
    “Sora!” Riku said facing the spot where Xigbar was. Now their was a heavily armored monster in front of them with Xigbars guns strapped to its arms.
    “Very well. But if I have to die to you guys. I will at least cause as much damage as possible.” Xigbars voice called from within the monster.
    “Xigbar?” Sora asked but as an answer the monster Xigbar shot the large spikes straight at him. Sora’s body was launched back through the door into his bedroom. Riku ran forward towards the beast but it teleported and shot him in the back multiple times pinning him to a wall than it continued to shoot.
    “AHHHHHH!” Riku yelled as the spikes hit his skin and exploded on his back.
    “Yes, this is ultimate power!” Xigbar yelled. Then he returned to face Sora. The young man was just sitting up when another barrage of spikes swarmed towards him.
    “Sora!” The injured Riku yelled and a dark shield formed around Sora just in time to catch and stop the spikes. Even though Riku stopped the bullets he couldn’t protect himself from the beasts onslaught himself.
    “Curaga!” Kiari yelled from the control panel and the whole group healed. Xigbars eyes focused on the girl, she looked a lot like Namine. Another one worthy of death. The beast yelled as it shot one of its guns at Kairi and the other at the still pined down Riku. The bullets flew at a high pace strait towards their target when a small wall of fire appeared in front of all the keyblade wielders.
    “Axel!” The monster Xigbar yelled.
    “Nice to see you again too Xigbar.” Came the familiar voice of Axel. Stepping through a small portal of darkness was the cloaked and familiar nobody Axel himself.
    “How did you get out?” The monster yelled as it shot at him. Axel vanished in a flash of fire and appeared behind the monster avoiding the shots.
    “Simple, I’m Axel. Got it memorized?” He said grinning and with a very calm demur he launched the monster into a portal of darkness. The walls of fire went down instantly and Axel fell to his knees.
    “He guys.” he said smiling. “Couldn’t survive without me could you Roxas.” Axel said looking at Sora.
    “Axel,” Kiari whispered. “What was that?” Axels eyes shone for a moment with tears and his smile fell away.
    “The Organization is back. All but Xehanort. The only thing is we all are given the gift of a partial heart. It makes us more powerful, but it tortures us and it will eventually drive us insane.” He looked down and a portal appeared in front of him. He stood up and slowly walked towards it.
    “Where are you going?” Riku asked the nobody.
    “I need to learn more about this and try to stop the others.” Axel said than he stepped into the darkness and the portal disappeared.
    “Roxas, next time you see me. If I can’t recall this moment, kill me.”


    Chapter 6


    Xigbar stepped through the portal and sat down on a stair. The monstrous skin shrunk off and turned into his normal attire.
    “An excellent acting job by our man Xigbar!” Xenroc said walking up the tired nobody.
    “Hey you forget about me?” Axel said stepping in through the portal.
    “Of course not Jynx. You were amazing.” Xenroc said a small smile shone on his eyes. Axel shrugged than faded into Jynx.
    “What’s sad is they actually bought it.” All three of them laughed a little than their faces all turned stolid and cold again.
    “Well, now its their move.” Xenroc stated looking into a small screen where Rhodis, Aroth and Erah all sat in their ship.
    “I’m telling you, I saw a dark shape leaving the planet it must have been Jynx!”
    “You’ve got bigger problems.” A frightfully hollow voice said.
    “Siax!” Aroth and Rhodis said turning around summoning their keyblades.
    “Good, you recall my name. Tell me, do I haunt your dreams Aroth?” Siax said as his large paddle like weapon appeared.
    “Humph, not after I gave you those scars.” Aroth said staring right between Siax’s eyes where an X had been cut into his face.
    “You know, I never paid you back for that.” Siax didn’t waste any time attacking. He jumped into the air and slammed his paddle down hitting the ground between the two men sending them flying apart. Aroth turned and ran toward the wall using Siax’s attack to boost himself up it. He climbed to the roof than jumped over and swung his giant black keyblade at Siax who simply dodged it. His dodge though didn’t help him avoid the attack by Rhodis. Siax raised his paddle and swatted Rhodis in the air and sent him towards Erah.
    “Sinsoah Mebristeh Haruskan!” She called holding her ocean themed keyblade. Rhodis instantly vanished as well as Aroth. The appeared back to back standing in front of Erah with their side towards Siax.
    “What?” Was all Siax had time to say when both men disappeared and reappeared directly in front of him. his eyes widened and he tried to raise his paddle but it was too late both keyblades had been sunk deep into his stomached.
    “Naksurah Hetsirbem Haosnis!” Erah said and both men fell to their knees and she fell down to hers.
    “Ungh, uh......ahhhhh....uhn.” Siax fell to his knees and the keyblades vanished into the hands of Rhodis and Aroth.
    “Siax, If you want to become stronger fight and die.” a small voice called from every corner of the room at once.
    “Die, I may be hurt but that doesn’t mean they can kill me!” Siax yelled standing up. His paddle shook in his hands.
    “I will not die to you.” Siax yelled his face starting to become paler and two large fangs grew in his mouth. His paddle also changed into a large bladed great axe shaped similar to what his paddle had been like.
    “Aroth! What is this.....ARHHHHH” Rhodis fell onto the floor holding his head screaming in pain being tortured by visions of the future.
    “Looks like it’s one on one.” Aroth said standing up. “Lets try this then.” Aroth switched his keyblade from overhand to underhand style. Siax new form vanished and appeared in front of Aroth who was ready. His large keyblade sliced straight through Siax, or at least where siax should have been.
    “Missed.” Siax whispered in his ear from behind. Instantly Aroth slashed behind him but yet again hit nothing.
    “How on earth did you ever manage to scar me?” Siax taunted standing a few feet from Aroth.
    “I won’t miss this time.” Aroth said than he slashed forward and instantly stabbed behind him. The keyblade hit the axe but it wasn’t enough to stop the axe from broad siding him in the back. Aroth flew through the air and hit his head on the ceiling. A loud and sick thud followed by a splattering noise came from Aroths head as he fell from the ceiling and hit the ground.
    “Now, for my repentance.” Siax said licking his lips as he walked towards the unconscious Aroth.
    “Cuaraga!” Rhodis yelled and a small healing mark appeared above Siax. Siax screamed in pain and through himself into the safety of a portal.
    “Good call Rhodis. How did you know that would hurt him?” Erah gasped in shock.
    “I didn’t. I was aiming to heal Aroth. I simply missed.” Rhodis choked. Tears were rolling down his cheeks.
    “What did you see.”
    “I saw death and pain, the monsters of the first organization killing and destroying whole worlds just for fun. Damn it Erah! They were killing children, tossing them in the air and seeing who could kill them the fastest. They were only CHILDREN.”
    “Curaga!” Erah said and Aroth groaned slightly.
    “We need to tell Sora what happened.” Rhodis said moving to the controls when Soras voice called over to them.


    Chapter 7

    “Well done Saix.” Xenroc said sitting besides Jynx and Xigbar.
    “I wish you would have let me kill them.” Saix said looking at Xenroc.
    “If you do, we will return you to the way you were. A lowly dusk. Do you want that?” Xenroc said his metal claw glowed ominously.
    “Rhodis, Aroth, Erah. Are you there!” Sora’s shaken voice said over the speakers.
    “Yes, we are all here Sora. What is it.” Rhodis said, his voice still a little choked.
    “We were just attacked.”
    “The Organization?”
    Sora stayed quite for a long time.

    “We need to land and talk.”
    The ride was very quite on both ships with not so much as a whisper between any of them. Rhodis’s visions were coming true. A war was brewing and there was nothing they could do about it.

    “Sora, This is Rhodis. There is a simple planet up ahead. We will land there.” The darkness of space hugged the ships tightly as they flew towards another unknown planet with an unknown future. The planet slowly grew into being ahead of them, mostly green the planet seemed very healthy.
    “Warning, enemy gummy ships approaching Warning, Warning.” The computer said in a faint woman’s voice.
    “Perfect. Battle stations! Aroth, you take front guns, Erah you take rear.” Rhodis ordered holding the controls firmly in his hand.
    “Rhodis!” Soras voice yelled. “Look out! Another one of them is........” Sora’s voice cracked and sizzled into static but Rhodis had a bad feeling that he knew what he meant.
    “Erah, you take front guns Aroth get up and draw your keyblade.” Rhodis demanded pushing the ships throttle into full.
    Sora drew his Keyblade again and ordered Riku to charge forward.
    “What is it now?” Riku asked a bit tired and agitated.
    “Marluxia’s right beside us.” Sora said not hiding the grating hatred in his voice.
    “Marluxia went alone?” Toxnes asked Xenroc sitting in the white throne room.
    “No sir, he took Luxard with him.” Jynx said sitting sideways in his white throne. Toxnes nodded slightly and faced a stone door.
    “Who destroyed Glacial?” Toxnes asked staring at the door.
    “That would be Hexar my liege.” Came a strong voice.
    “Paxin? When did you get in here?” Xenroc said standing up quickly and clicking his claw.
    “I never left, I was told to stay here till told otherwise, I would never disobey.” The tall nobody fell to one knee before his leader.
    “Hmmm, Very good. I have a test for you. Luxard and Marluxia are about to fight Aroth and the others. See to it only one of them returns alive.” Jynx said his eyes brightly shining.
    “As you command.” Paxin stood back up and started into a portal.
    “Not yet! First we need to disguise you as a normal person for the world they are headed to.” Jynx slid off his throne and floated to the ground. A small wisp of purple light shone on his fingers.
    “What were you before you died?”
    “I don’t remember.”
    “Good, but remember not to use your organization name.”

    Chapter 8

    “Fire!” Rhodis yelled as the gummy ships swarmed towards their ship.
    “I am firing!” Erah yelled pulling the trigger and praying that she hit something. Rhodis eyed the darkness around the ship looking for a sign of their new attacker.
    “Rhodis.” Erah said.
    “Not now.”
    “Rhodis!”
    “I said not now!”
    “RHODIS”
    “What!”
    “We are going to crash.” Erah said pointing to the planet zooming in on them.
    “Holy........”
    “Duck you two.” Aroth yelled jumping over them pushing them down just as they hit the atmosphere. The ship around them shook and fell apart. The screen flashed and shattered sending glass all over the ship. Rhodis and Aroth covered their necks and all of Erah below them.
    “Reflectaga!” Erah cried and a small mirror like shield formed around them just in time as they smashed into the ground.
    “Good...” Rhodis said but at that moment the lights went out. “......Night.” Sparks sprayed every now and then lighting the remains of the ship little by little.
    “You alive in their.” Called a strong voice
    “We can’t find where we are.” Rhodis called to the voice.
    “I’ll go get help. Raist! Brother! There is something strange here they need help.” The voice said to an unseen brother. Sparks flew again eliminating a way to the door.
    “Aroth, Erah, you guys ok?” Rhodis said slowly standing up.
    “yeah I’m fine.” Erah said staggering up.
    “I’m ok.” Aroth said slowly making his way up.
    “Are you guys still ok in there!” Came the strong voice.
    “Yes!” Erah yelled.
    “Stand back, Raist can you get them out?” The voice said to its brother. They all listened for an answer but instead heard a strange language like the speaking of a spider. The voice grew and raised musically chanting and repeating itself.
    “Stand Back!” The strong voice yelled. Soon after this a large bolt of lightning tore through the ship cutting a hole large enough for them to fit through opened in the ship. Light poured in through the hole, but it was soon blocked out by the head of an enormous man.
    “Hello. You guys ok?” The large head called.
    “yeah. I think so, we are coming out now.” Aroth said walking slowly and deliberately toward the hole. Erah and Rhodis followed close behind him moving through the rubble towards the light.
    “Raist! I don’t think their from Krynn!” The large head said moving out of the light.
    “No brother, they are not.” Came a cold and raspy voice. All three keyblade wielders stopped in their tracks.
    “Before we come out. Who are you?” Aroth said maybe ten feet from the hole.
    “I am Caramon and this is my brother Raistlin. Who are you?” The large voice said.
    “Brother. Their names are tired, hungry and weary. I would advise you not pester them.” Raistlin snapped coldly at his brother. The three keyblade wielders exchanged glances then Aroth continued to climb out of the ruined ship. The sun blinded him temporarily but when his eyes adjusted he knew something was wrong.
    “Why isn’t there a crowd here?” Aroth said looking for the two people.
    “Tanis and Sturm are keeping them back.” Called Caramon from beside him. Aroth turned and faced a man as tall as him but at least twice as muscular. The man Caramon had dark brown hair and strong facial features. He dressed in very dirty cloths that would fit in years ago. He wore plate mail armor that was dented in many places and a sword with dried green blood on it.
    “Aroth, what dose he look li......ke oh my god!” Rhodis said looking at the masculine Caramon. Rhodis is exactly six foot three and he stands only three inches taller than Caramon but three of Rhodis side by side would equal the mans broad shoulders.
    “AHHHHHHH!” Erah screamed behind them.

    Chapter 9

    All three men turned around with weapons drawn. Erah stared at a man wearing blood red robes holding a plain wooden staff with a disembodied claw holding a crystal ball.
    “Who are you!?” Aroth shouted pointing his giant black keyblade at the man.
    “Stop please stop.” Caramon pleaded. “This is my brother Raistlin.” The large man said sheathing his sword and stepping between them. Aroth and Rhodis looked at the red robed man a few minutes more than vanished their keyblades.
    “Aww, Magic! Just like yours Raistlin.” Caramon said staring at the men’s hands.
    “No! Just Keyblades.” Called a sinister voice from behind them. Everyone turned and faced the voice and standing on the wreckage of the ship was Luxard.
    “You!” Rhodis yelled.
    “Me!” Luxard returned jumping down from the wreckage drawing a handful of cards and hurling them at Aroth.
    “Not so fast.” Aroth grinned while slicing the cards in half. Luxard landed softly than flipped a card out of the deck and threw it to the ground.
    “Ace of hearts!” He cried than from the card a giant snake like heartless grew from the card.
    “Selthium Balluritso Hebrisum Kaskara!” Erah chanted over and over. Beside her the red robed man began a chant of his own. Both sets of spidery words grew and shrank sounding like a choir of spiders.
    “Firarga!” yelled Rhodis and a fireball shot out of his keyblade hitting the heartless but doing little damage. It reared back a moment than lurched forward and struck at Rhodis. Aroth took the moment to cut for the beasts head bring his giant blade down towards its skull. The giant heartless turned quickly and avoided the blow but also stopped its own strike at Rhodis.
    “Come on Keyblade wielders’ kill the heartless.” Luxard taunted. He smiled slyly and watched his beast strike again and again each time narrowly missing its mark.
    “NOW!” Erah yelled and a bright green flash filled the sky around them. When the light dimmed Aroth and Rhodis each had a green glow on them. The men jumped at the beast and stabbed forward. It quickly slithered out of the way finding itself being stabbed in the back. The giant heartless looked down and Caramon had sunk his sword in the giant beast.
    “That one you can kill.” Luxard said coolly. The heartless hissed than launched forward towards the man. In that split second Raistlin stopped chanting and from his hand darts of flame launched towards the snake and Luxard. The giant beast stuck his own body in the way to block the shots to Luxard. The flame hit it and burned deep into its dark core. The heartless roared and screamed.
    “Farewell!” Both Rhodis and Aroth said from behind the snakes burning body. Both men still were glowing green when they preformed a double sonic and sliced straight through the snake. It Roared in agony than vanished releasing a heart into the sky.
    “Your turn Luxard.” All three keyblade wielders’ said in unison.

    Chapter 10

    Sora and Riku watched helplessly as the other ship crashed on the planet. Sora pulled up slightly and set them down maybe a mile away from the wreckage.
    “We gotta go help them.” Riku said jumping out of his seat and running to the gummy ships door. When he opened it Marluxia walked in.
    “Hello Sora.” Marluxia said brandishing his scythe.
    “We don’t have time for this.” Sora yelled running at Marluxia.
    “Fine, but I’ll see you later.” Marluxia said than without a word he stepped back and vanished.
    “Why did he just leave without fighting?” Kiari asked running up to Sora.
    “He knows he doesn’t need to fight, he is just toying with us.” Sora said angrily as he and Kiari continued to walk out of the ship and head towards the wreck.
    “Riku.” Called a voice inside his head. “You know she doesn’t love you. You gave into the darkness. Remember?” Riku smiled.
    “Yeah, but if you don’t remember, I defeated the darkness both within me and within Sora.” Riku smiled than ran to catch up with Sora.
    “She won’t take your ring. I have peered inside her and I know you two will never marry.” The voice taunted.
    “Shut up Xehanort.”
    Marluxia smiled from a distance. Luxard was going to die and he didn’t even need to dirty his hands. Paxin was on his way and with him comes death.
    “Hexar, ‘The Screaming Silence’. “ Exaro said looking down at the little girl in the organization attire. “We must teach you some self control. you can’t just destroy planets because you just want to.” She didn’t speak, she just looked at her red ball.
    “No, I am not angry. Why would you think that?” He asked and yet again she said nothing.
    “Ah! You really think I care about what Jynx says. He only thinks about this Rhodis. I am more concerned with getting us our hearts back.” He sat down beside her and put his arm on her shoulder.
    “Of course I will help you find your family.” He said grinning. “And I’ll help you kill Sora just like you wanted.”
    Luxard fought with all his might but he was nothing compared to the strength of the five heroes. No matter how he tried to win they stopped him. He was running low on cards and Ideas.
    “Luxard, save us the trouble. Just transform like Siax did.” Rhodis said striking Luxard on the knees breaking them.
    “You don’t want that.” Luxard said refusing to fall.
    “Blizaga!” Erah yelled smacking him in the chest with an ice missile.
    “I think we do.” Aroth said pointing his keyblade to Luxords thought.
    “Fine.” Luxard whispered than the cards he had left sprang out of the deck and surrounded him. He didn’t make a noise other than harsh breathing underneath his cocoon of cards.

    Chapter 11

    “Caramon, get Tanis and the others. We are going to need them.” Raistlin said his voice had a tint of urgency in it. His brother didn’t wait to ask any questions but ran as fast as his legs would carry him.
    “What’s wrong wizard?” Erah asked him.
    “I feel like I did when Solace was attacked by a red.” Raistlin said his voice distant and detached.
    “A red what?” She asked.
    “Dragon.” The cocoon broke apart and a large white and grey mass flew out of the spot where it had been. Flying before them was a monster half man and half dragon.
    “By the gods!” Came Caramons voice. “A flying Draconan!”
    “I warned you! I told you that if transformed you wouldn’t want it.” Luxord screamed in obvious pain. His body continued to shift and shake violently but it never made a lasting change.
    “Caramon! Get the others now!” Raistlin yelled to his brother and he began to chant again.
    “You three protect him till I get back o.k.?” The large man asked before he started to run.
    “Fine.” Erah said rolling in front of the red robed man. Luxord heard his chanting a swooped low for the attack. His left hand had changed into a claw which he attempted to use as a weapon but the swipe was blocked by Aroths Great keyblade. Instinct kicked in and Luxords claw grabed the blade and lifted the key and Aroth into the air.
    Aroth held the handle tightly till they were nearly twenty feet up. Aroth swung himself up and kicked Luxord in the chin. Luxord didn’t flinch but instead hurled both Aroth and his key to the ground.
    “Gravaga!” ‘Aroth yelled as he fell pulling the transformed Luxord with him.
    “Pheather Fall!” Raistlin said and the orb on his staff glowed brightly for a moment. Aroths decent slowed to a slow glide. Luxord, though, didn’t slow down. He swooped straight through the Gravaga and struck the mage in the arm. Blood splattered onto the ground.
    “I am too tired to cast another spell. The next one will kill me.” The bleeding mage said.
    “Good, one less cynical monster on Krynn.” Grunted a thick accented man in full armor. His armor had a rose etched into the front of it.
    “Raistlin!” Caramon yelled running up to his brother who shunned him off and pointed to Luxord.
    “Kill him brother, before he kills us all.” The mage hissed than he began to cough roughly.
    “I can help, let me cure him.” Erah offered moving up to the two.
    “No!” The mage gasped. “My curse is my own. I chose it for my power. Let me be!” His brother gave him a worried look that was smacked off his face as Luxord dived again slashing the big mans face.
    “Tanis! I have never seen a draconan like this before. How about you Flint. Flint! Stop staring like that he may think it is rude.” A small pointed eared man said jumping up in down in front of the man in armor, a dwarf and a man with pointed ears and a red beard.
    Luxord flew up higher than before and smiled a sharp tooth grin. He yelled out and a large surge of power flowed to his body.
    “Keyblade wielders! I was holding back. Witness my true form!” He yelled hysterically.
    “Luxord don’t! It will kill you to transform!” Yelled a familiar voice. Sora ran up to the scene bringing Kiari and Riku with him. Luxord ignored Soras cries to him and continued to summon his power.
    A bright surge of white light filled the air and when it dimmed flying high above them was a white dragon with the nobodies symbol on it’s chest.

    Chapter 12

    “By Rorex!” The dwarf gasped. The heroes around him could only stare.
    “Firaga!” Erah yelled,
    “Blizaga” Sora said,
    “Thundaga” Riku followed suit,
    “Magnaga” Kairi said, all four of them aiming for the dragons head. The keyblades shone for a moment than the light went out.
    “Sorry to disappoint you. But magic doesn’t work on a dragon!” The Dragon roared.
    “Perhaps this will!” Rhodis yelled. He put one foot on Aroths shoulder and his other foot on Aroths back.
    “Ready!” Aroth yelled than he jumped as hard as he could going maybe ten feet in the air. Rhodis roared and Jumped off Aroths body at the peak of their jump. Even with the combo they were no where near high enough.
    “Rave!” Aroth yelled still falling, he threw his keyblade up and it landed under Rhodis. Rhodis rode the blade up another ten feet than Jumped again. Now he was very close. he swung his keyblade and it bounced off the thick scales on the dragon.
    The dragon roared in laughter and swatted Rhodis to the ground with one of it’s large claws. It sent the young man falling fast with horrid speed. He hit the ground before anyone could help him. His legs hit first and that is what saved his life. His legs were very broken.
    The Dragon smiled and launched large spikes from it’s tail towards them. Erah was about to cast Reflectaga when the large man with a shield and armor stepped in front of her and blocked the spikes with his shield. The armored man yelled out a battle cry in a different language than that of Caramon. the man ran under the dragon and yelled a challenge in the common language.
    “Worm, think you can slay a dragon?” Luxard hissed spilling saliva onto the ground. The spit burned and sizzled the ground. The dragon laughed at the small knight. It would have kept laughing but an arrow glided beside the dragons fragile thin wings.
    The man named Tanis reloaded his bow and shot again very fast but this time Luxard was ready. A shower of light stormed from it’s throat. Inside the light crawled an army of Gambler nobodies.
    “Tanis what are these?” The small man with pointed ears asked the red headed archer.
    “They are nobodies.” Riku said jumping besides the short man and the dwarf.
    “Don’t bother with the small ones.” Raistlin said standing besides his brother. “Me and Caramon can handle them, Tanis, Flint, Tas and Sturm will stall the dragon. The rest of you go get help. The nights are near here. I’m sure they can be convinced to come.”
    “Alright, we’ll go.” Sora said turning to run but he found a breastplate in his face. Heavily plated armor with the symbol of a crown on it.


    Chapter XIII


    “No need. They sent me.” A tall masculine man said. He looked at the surroundings and shrugged. There were large trees with buildings in them.
    “Perfect.” The knight grinned. Sora chopped trough some of the nobodies near the knight.
    “Clear a way to that tree!” The night ordered the man Sturm who was in armor protecting Erah.
    “Sir, she needs help.” Sturm protested.
    “That is an order young Knight.” The tall man yelled. Sturm ran up and chopped straight through the nobodies at an alarming rate. The large knight ran behind him holding only a gold trimmed knife. When they reached the tree another barrage of needles swarmed down towards the group. Riku used his dark shield and blocked them all. Tanis fired an arrow again slicing straight through the thin membrane of the dragons left wing.
    “I’ll Kill you Worm!” The dragon yelled.
    “Not before I slay you!” Yelled the tall knight. The whole group turned and watched in slow motion as the Knight ran up the side of the tree till it was around twenty feet below the dragon. He flipped backwards off the tree and landed on the dragons snout.
    “Paxin! Please don’t...” The dragon begged but before he could finish the knight drove his knife into the eye of the dragon. It roared in pain. Another one of Tanis’s arrows shot through the same wing of the dragon. Blinded by pain the dragon fell from the sky. The armored night stabbed again and again into the eye the dragon. When they hit the ground a large cloud of dust filled the air. The whole group ran up to the scene. Raistlin had to be helped by his brother.
    The dust cleared and the armored man was standing on the dragons bleeding head. It’s giant lungs still breathed slowly and his throat gurgled on the blood clogging his throat.
    “Young knight! What is your name?!” The tall man said.
    “I am Sturm Brightblade sir.” The knight said standing rigged and firm frozen in fear of being reprimanded by a higher ranking man.
    “I know you wanted to protect the lady but,” Sturm prepared for the verbal blow that never came. “She didn’t need it. She is a very good fighter. I honor your attempt to protect her though at the risk of your life. This beast’s life is yours. Take it and become a dragon slayer.” The tall knight said.
    Sturm stood speechless and white. The giant best had twitched when it heard it’s fate decided. Sturm looked long and hard at the beast.
    “I can’t cut it’s head off with this sword. The scales are too hard.” Sturm said eyeing the thick scales on the dragons body.
    “I don’t think it will need to be. This beast is a man. No dragon would call a mere man by it’s name. Red robed magi, can you force him to change?”
    “No” Raistlin coughed from under his hood. All men present looked at the dragon.
    “Perhaps the big keys can unlock the man inside it?” Piped a small voice. The knight sharply turned towards to the small man.
     
    Last edited: Nov 7, 2008
  9. Locogabitron

    Locogabitron Kichi's Squall Leon

    woah.. that's a very long fafic you got there ;). Ill read it carefully.. ill read it soon don't worry.
     
  10. OverLord Abaross

    OverLord Abaross Prince of sayians

    dude that fan fic has my Char Xenroc in there I created him he is a BAMF so I hope you win ZP
    GO NC
     
  11. Rhodis=Jynx

    Rhodis=Jynx New Member


    Lol, i'll post another chapter later tonight, but that's the last chapter i'm going to release for a long long time
     

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