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The Avatar Tales

Discussion in 'Archive' started by Unbirth, Oct 27, 2008.

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  1. Oct 30, 2008 #21
    W.J. Solomon

    W.J. Solomon Solomon's Reprieve

    >Is this good?<
    Name:Will
    Origin: South Water Tribe
    Age:16
    Skill: Waterbender
    Background: Was odd when he was younger, never fit in with other kids. Water bending appeared at age 6. Ever since he has been wandering the nations trying to stop the fire nation.
    Appearance: [​IMG] Only wears water tunic instead of the shorts.
     
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  2. Oct 31, 2008 #22
    OverLord Abaross

    OverLord Abaross Prince of sayians

    umm there are some things that should be fixed such as you cant be water bender and earthbender and using sora a little over done but character info is good
     
  3. Nov 1, 2008 #23
    Rakdos

    Rakdos New Member

    >>Just tell em what to change if this doesn't work or fit into the story line because I will tweak some things.<<

    Name: Jackson
    Origin: Sun warrior ruins
    Age:19
    Skill: Firebender
    Background: Jackson grew up in seclusion because his mother was a fire bender but his father was a sun warrior. He grew up with the two dragons Sha and Ran as friends. At the age of 6 his ability as a fire bender began and he started his training with his mother,his father, and the two dragons. His father made him promise to use these new found abilities to bring peace to the nations. He learned many new skills thanks to them and by the age of 16 he mastered them and set out to start his own mission. He went to Ba Seng Se to start his quest.
    Appearance: [​IMG]
     
  4. Nov 1, 2008 #24
    W.J. Solomon

    W.J. Solomon Solomon's Reprieve

    >K, I was just thinking he could ba an odd child and have 2 bendings<
     
  5. Nov 2, 2008 #25
    OverLord Abaross

    OverLord Abaross Prince of sayians

    >ehh a little over powered but you can ask Unbirth
     
  6. Nov 2, 2008 #26
    Unbirth

    Unbirth LET ME SPRITE YOU

    Awsome character Rakados, Also Curtis having two element powers wont work cause it would be like the avatar. I mean the whole purpose of being avatar is being able to use the power of more than one element.


    <Also do any of you two need a catch up on the story?>
     
  7. Nov 2, 2008 #27
    W.J. Solomon

    W.J. Solomon Solomon's Reprieve

    >nah, I'm good on story<
     
  8. Nov 2, 2008 #28
    Unbirth

    Unbirth LET ME SPRITE YOU

    Man:Good lets get you two over here

    Kantaro and Abaross walked over to where the man wanted them, Avenile was confused. "why are there people tied up" Man:Because were the fire nation you fool, we purposly let people here what we were saying to draw in people who we thought could be a problem for us. and now we have 2 more.
     
  9. Nov 2, 2008 #29
    W.J. Solomon

    W.J. Solomon Solomon's Reprieve

    >Where am I?<
     
  10. Nov 2, 2008 #30
    Unbirth

    Unbirth LET ME SPRITE YOU

    Idk you could be somebody that see whats happening from your house or something?
     
  11. Nov 2, 2008 #31
    W.J. Solomon

    W.J. Solomon Solomon's Reprieve

    >Ooh ooh can I be tied up???<
     
  12. Nov 3, 2008 #32
    Rakdos

    Rakdos New Member

    >>He he he he...clueless moments brought to you by Jackson.<<
    Jackson walked out into the air of Ba Seng Se and thanked the young couple that allowed him to stay and paid them although he had to pretty much run away so they wouldn't give it back. He wandered through the town for awhile and stumbled upon some people. One was a water bender based on his clothing and the others he couldn't tell. "Hello are any of you part of the resistance?"
     
  13. Nov 3, 2008 #33
    Unbirth

    Unbirth LET ME SPRITE YOU

    "run its a fire nation trap"
     
  14. Nov 3, 2008 #34
    OverLord Abaross

    OverLord Abaross Prince of sayians

    Can you catch me up
     
  15. Nov 3, 2008 #35
    Unbirth

    Unbirth LET ME SPRITE YOU

    <Well pretty much all that has happened so far is me and you made it to the alley way ended up it was a fire nation trap we got caught and Rakdos who is playing Jackson has just spotted what is going on.>
     
  16. Nov 3, 2008 #36
    OverLord Abaross

    OverLord Abaross Prince of sayians

    >alright that is awesome
     
  17. Nov 3, 2008 #37
    W.J. Solomon

    W.J. Solomon Solomon's Reprieve

    >Screw being tied up<
    Will walked up, looking at the trap. "What does this do?" He asked, edging towards it.
     
  18. Nov 5, 2008 #38
    Rakdos

    Rakdos New Member

    "Fire nation.....wait a minute your the bad guys..." Jackson dropped low and let out two dragon shaped flames that shot from his arms and burned the ropes that held people captive. "Leave these people alone or else you'll taste true fire.."
     
  19. Nov 5, 2008 #39
    OverLord Abaross

    OverLord Abaross Prince of sayians

    As Abaross was set free he leaped high into the air and as he flew towards the ground he stomped it with extreme forece causing a masive shockwave knocking all the fire nation gaurds down
     
  20. Nov 5, 2008 #40
    W.J. Solomon

    W.J. Solomon Solomon's Reprieve

    Will was thrown off balance but regained it quickly, forming a sword of ice in his hand.
     
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