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small poem

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics' started by xrawrxmassacre, Aug 25, 2008.

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  1. xrawrxmassacre

    xrawrxmassacre New Member

    well i wrote this poem a long time ago for someone who was special to me (but who is no longer special to me)

    a lot of people said that they loved this poem.

    Nothing Could Stop Me From Loving You
    by xrawrxmassacre


    The sun can't match your radiance
    The blue skies are mere dulled stones to your eyes
    If I could fight the darkness
    I'd be with you forever

    I'd dive into a pit of molten lava,
    Just to hear your name.
    If someone comes between us
    I'd fight demons just to make them step aside
    Only to see your smile.

    Please, I want to put into words how I feel
    But just three don't seem worthy.
    I'd need a million words just to finish one part.
    But then again, that's not enough.

    If I had to choose between seeing you cry
    Or going through a thousand pains myself
    I'd choose to hurt myself
    Just to see you happy

    I love you, are mere words
    I'd pluck the moon from the sky to see you laugh
    I'd pick a hundred roses to see you blush
    And I'd hold you throughout the nights to make sure you were safe

    I don't want to see you sad
    I don't want to see tears fall from your eyes
    I don't want to see you broken and scared
    Because of some fear

    I want to protect you
    And love you.....
    Forever.



    opinions?
     
  2. LDC1121

    LDC1121 New Member

    :eek: I was so impressed with this poem, it was ridiculous! I loved it! I loved your use of descriptions and how you argued that three words were not enough to express your feelings for him! :D
     
  3. Well speaking as a guy id like that poem if it was written for me :)

    Maybe you should submit it to a poetry thingymabob.
     
  4. Kyuu

    Kyuu your worst nightmare.

    Whoa! Awesome! I can't say anything else! Love it! O__O
     
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