Modern Legend of Zelda (OOC + SU)

So.... let's all get this ball rolling again!

 

It's not just you. The site is in one of its infamous slow-downs.

 

Can't wait to get into the destruction! That's always a fun part of an rp... that and killing people XD Jkjk

 

Why? Isn't Zalor important enough xD? You'll get your spotlight time, believe me. Making more characters just makes things more complicated, though sometimes quiet entertaining.

 

What we need is some more lieutenant characters to operate under the Demon Lord when he makes his comeback. I don't want to play the entire legion of darkness on my own. Which, by the way, I've populated as such thus far:

Moblins = General ground forces of DL. Though a bit simple minded, they're decent warriors, and a few tactically savvy minds manage to become officer material. They can number in the thousands in large battles.

Iron Knuckles = Elite Warrior Class. Effectively forged by means of dark magic, these are warriors who wield incredible strength and dueling acumen. Known for their heavy armor and large battle axes, their mere presence on a battlefield can be enough to cause an enemy to submit. They number in the low hundreds.

Great Moblins = Though physically genetically abnormal Moblins, these massive creatures are rendered the equivalent of trolls. They'll obey orders blindly, swinging their large clubs without much care for even their allies. If no for their overwhelming stupidity, their strength would prove a match for even iron knuckles.

 

**Goht- The Demon Lord's Sentient Weapon**

I may make an iron knuckle or a lieutenant

 

I repeat, we should get more DL supporters ready to go.

 

My Lieutenant

I'm not sure if a full profile would be needed for an Iron Knuckle general, but I'll make a basic one.


Name: Zer'Dag

Race: Sheikah/Iron Knuckle(male)

History: Zer'Dag was originally a Sheikah warrior under General Eizo but was captured by the Gerudo and killed because he was male. However, the Demon Lord would not allow Zer'Dag's soul to rest. Instead, he had his loyal minion, Koumake, enslave Zer'Dag's soul and corrupt him, before having his loyal minions build an armor fashioned after an Iron Knuckle's. The Demon Lord did not work cheaply either, Zer'Dag's armor is made of rock hard diamond plating, and instead of an Axe, Zer'Dag wields his magic sword he had as a soldier. Fed lies that it was Eizo that got him killed, Zer'Dag awaits the order to release the Sentient weapon so he can get revenge on his former commander.

Weapon: The Bane of Shadow- A blade crafted in ancient times, it has been passed down in Zer'Dag's family for millennia. It is one of the few relics that signify truth to the old legends, as it was this blade that severed the limbs of the Shadow Beast, that was trapped within the Well of Three Features. The Sheikah legend says the great guardian Impa used this blade to seal Bongo Bongo after his defeat by the Mythical Hero of Time, and that should the sword be broken, his spirit would be free to return to the mortal plane. The blade has the unique ability to return to its master's hand after a very short time, and it, according to legend, has the ability to trap souls. Though even if the legend is true, Bongo Bongo's soul is already trapped inside, which would prevent any other souls from being absorbed.

Other:

Zer'Dag's armor is far more durable due to Sheikah magic, only another pure blooded Sheikah can remove the magical seal which would make Zer'Dag vulnerable. Zer'Dag would be unable to reapply the seal while in battle.

Zer'Dag is one of the Demon Lord's most aggressive Generals. Though he is a Sheikah at heart, and the last bit of light in his soul would undoubtably prevent him from attacking a member of the Royal Family. However, anybody else who gets in his way will be considered an enemy and will be attacked on sight.

Zer'Dag is eight feet tall, towering over most humanoids.

Zer'Dag moves faster then an ordinary Iron Knuckle, perhaps due to his Sheikah host.

Zer'Dag's army consists of thirty other Iron Knuckles and the Sentient weapon Goht.

Zer'Dag died at age thirty, which is why he leads thirty Iron Knuckles.

Zer'Dag was killed ten years ago.

Rumor has it that Eizo knows what became of Zer'Dag. It's also believed that Eizo blames himself for Zer'Dag's death, though nobody has the guts to ask about either.

Before his death, Zer'Dag's full name was Zerio Dagge.

 

Just a few issues that I'd prefer to have revised:

1) Just change the bio so that it's an underling of the Demon Lord that made him an Iron Knuckle. The Demon Lord couldn't have done anything to him since he's been sealed away.

2) I'm not opposed to him wielding a sword. But I think it's a bit much to give him something of such reputation. And I'm not too sure about him having the ability to capture souls in it, though I'll leave that up to Hope when she comes back on.

3) Cut five or six feet off his height and it's good, seeing as the height of the host would have been around six feet. Thirteen feet tall is just a bit over the top.

 

I question the "Zelda spirit" in your character, no offense.

 

I just think that you could have at least placed his origins a bit closer to the RP's plot. He just seems like he's out of place here. All you really need to know about the Zelda Franchise can be pretty easily gleaned from wikipedia. We're taking some liberties from the series in this.

 

1. Perhaps Koumake did it then?

2. Whoops, XD I knew I forgot something. Only one soul in the sword at a time, and Bongo Bongo's soul is currently trapped within... according to legend.

3. Seven to eight feet then?

 

How'd I miss that? I should call shenanigans on that. Invincibility is not condoned by RP rules.

 

I can always count on Coffee Man to find stuff I forgot to(or I was to lazy to at the time) explain.

He isn't invincible, he can be hurt by Eizo, who will be the only one Zer'Dag will fight. Think of it like this: There is always that one boss who just tosses you aside like it was nothing and is unbeatable until you reach a certain point in game. For example, Atlas in FFXIII-2 cannot be defeated unless you resolve the paradox. Once the game has been beaten however, it becomes possible to defeat Atlas without resolving the paradox.

Even if Sol or Jos attacked him, Zer'Dag is still an honest warrior. He has no qualms with them and thus would not fight them. Think of him as a sub-plot nemesis for Eizo ^^