• Square Elite
  1. If you are having trouble logging in, check the box, "stay logged in" to fix the issue. Thanks! —KHP Staff
  2. Hi Guest, you may have noticed that we aren't khplanet.com anymore. For more information on why these changes are happening, check out our thread, Site Re-Brand Updates

A Step Too Far Into Darkness (OCC/SU)

Discussion in 'Archive' started by BK-201, Apr 5, 2012.

  1. .Leggo

    .Leggo New Member

    Oh. My. God. I hate autocorrect, sorry about that, he desnt fight with husbands it should be his hands. And for sone reason it's not letting my edit. I will try again later.
     
  2. BK-201

    BK-201 Member

    Anyone gonna post in the actual RP or VM me ?
     
  3. King of Darkness

    King of Darkness What up Monica

    Was gonna wait on someone else, but whatever I'll post lol.
     
  4. King of Darkness

    King of Darkness What up Monica

    I'm only double posting because you guys are posting posts with only one line whereas the minimum for RP's is 3, I believe. Plus you guys are kind of machine gun posting, posting at a rapid pace behind one another. The RP isn't going anywhere, it can wait until morning.
     
  5. BK-201

    BK-201 Member

    That is true.
     
  6. Remedy

    Remedy Remnant

    I meant to sign up yesterday. Is it too late now?
     
  7. W.J. Solomon

    W.J. Solomon Solomon's Reprieve

    Pretty sure its fine, but I believe we need humans and full bloods, no half breeds.
     
  8. BK-201

    BK-201 Member

    I'll open more half-breed slots later maybe but for now it's vampires and humans only.
     
  9. Destiny

    Destiny Guest

    Well I feel the dim-light hybrids is unbalanced. Like there's two hybrids on the human side(aka two that know each other) and one on the vampire side(leaving mine all alone)
     
  10. Key King

    Key King Member

    awesome! I'm in!

    Name- Benjamin Stone
    Age- 27
    Gender- male
    Appearance- [​IMG]
    Height- 6 "1
    Weight- 270
    Eye Color- red
    Hair Color- red
    Nationality- Vampire (Nocturne)
    Abilities(s)- Inhuman strength, and the ability to hit whatever his target is
    Weapon(s)- [​IMG] (8 gauge)
    [​IMG]
    Bio- He is a vampire living in America. No one knows. Whenever he is seen it is usually in the shadows. He lives in an underground cave of sorts, and sends intel back to a secret organization.
    Personality- quiet, solemn, usually angry
    Theme-
    Other-
     
  11. BK-201

    BK-201 Member

    Okay lots of things need to change but they're all quick fixes.

    One, beef up the description on the bio, what is this secret organization
    Two, I need some info about his past and how he got to where he is now
    Three, I need some more details on his abilities, and also the enhanced strength is already a "built-in" sort of ability for a vamp so you can always add something else like the ability to fly, cryokinesis, etc
    Four, I won't nit pick on the personality but I think it needs to be more descriptive at least one or two full sentences.
     
  12. Abyssal Knight

    Abyssal Knight I step back into the light of...

    My Bio is complete Bk. I don't really want to reveal to much about Rain may mess up his being.
     
  13. BK-201

    BK-201 Member

    I see, if thats the case PM me more of the details, but for now, you are accepted.
     
  14. BK-201

    BK-201 Member

    Forgive me for my terrible absence and double post...

    Okay I'm opening four more Dim Light slots, also who is planning to still be active on this ?
     
  15. W.J. Solomon

    W.J. Solomon Solomon's Reprieve

    I'm still in. I actually made a post a week ago to make sure it was still up
     
  16. King of Darkness

    King of Darkness What up Monica

    I'm in. Me Gusta teh plot.
     
  17. Destiny

    Destiny Guest

    I'm in, HOWEVER you doing this active one second then disappearing and gone the next, you won't be able to keep this thing survived and if you do that, I'm out. I've watched so many RP's you join in that I'm in then you disappear and come back trying to jump back in but you can't, it's kind of annoying.
     
  18. BK-201

    BK-201 Member

    I know that, anyway we need more people for Ilumination.
     
  19. Noir

    Noir

    Name- Aerknard Hakyu

    Age- 16

    Gender- Male

    Appearance-
    [​IMG]

    Height- 6'8"

    Weight- 120

    Eye Color- Violet

    Hair Color- Red

    Nationality- Japanese

    Abilities(s)-
    Increased Strength -
    Hakyu can lift and move heavy objects that can't be lifted by normal people. He also can break hard things, even the ground.

    Increased Speed -
    Hakyu can run faster than an ostrich. Because of his increased speed, he can jump high.

    Increased Dexterity -
    He can think how some things work, can see his back without looking and much more.

    Sword Mastery -
    He has mastered swords and anything related to it (katana, scimitar, etc.). He is great at parrying, deflecting and using skills with it.
    His sword skills:
    • Infinity Counter -
      His strongest skill. He takes the enemy to the air, and summon 8 clones of his katana. Every time he collects his sword, he slashes the enemy at a perfect timing. Once he collects all of them, he stabs the enemy with his swords and manipulated swords. (similar to Cloud's Omnislash Version 5.)
    • Ground Stomp -
      He stomps the ground with his Katana.
    • Black Fire Tempest -
      He strikes the enemy to the air and stabs himself with the katana without being hurt, then he breathes black fire.

    Telepathy -
    He can move things by force without holding it by using his mind.

    Weapon(s)-
    Hakyu's Katana - His Katana
    The Katana appears to any worthy family member who aren't weak or even strong, but is worthy. It once belonged to Hakyu's ancestor. It also possesses a power to summon clones of itself and to summon and manipulate black flames. Sometimes, the katana can talk when it's eye has appeared on it's blade.

    Bio-
    Hakyu is born with a vampire father and a human japanese mother. His father was an excellent vampire who was decided to leave his race and the humans, now he began missing.
    His mother was a special, young woman who could actually manipulate water due to drinking a water that is special called a Shiro, meaning White in Japanese.

    Hakyu started learning how to use and master the Sword at the age of 5, only he started with toy, bamboo and wood swords. At the age of 7, he started using real swords. He was special with it, he started training so hard.

    As he grew older, he found and awakened his own powers which were said to be "dangerous". His mother was shocked to see his powers, but she already did understand he had powers.

    His mother starts to study on his powers, and by enough studying, she trained her son how to use his powers properly and master them. But, after that night, her mother died due to an evil vampire.

    At the age of 13, he decided to join the government and had a lot of accomplishment with the government. As he grew up at the government, he met a katana which is revealed to be a legendary unnamed katana which has several powers.
    Hakyu was interested on the katana. Before touching it, the katana floated and an eye appeared.
    The katana then said it was a katana once owned by Hakyu's and his father's ancestor.

    The katana needed to talk to Hakyu first if he is worthy enough to wield it.

    Hakyu then just tried to hold it, but the katana stopped Hakyu and it looks at Hakyu's face and said he looks like his father.
    The katana then instantly shone that Hakyu was already worthy, it said, and so it calmed down.

    With that katana, he created several abilities by using it's powers. And now so on...

    Personality- Quiet, a little strict, kind and loyal. He is very proud of his awards and accomplishments. He is always protective of his loved ones and even his precious things, especially his katana.

    Theme- Two Steps from Hell - Protectors of the Earth
     
    Last edited: May 9, 2012
  20. BK-201

    BK-201 Member

    Explain more about the unnamed katana.
     

Share This Page