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Poetry, a skill that is useful in times of need

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics' started by Rainbowkeyblade, Aug 31, 2011.

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  1. Aug 31, 2011 #1
    Rainbowkeyblade

    Rainbowkeyblade New Member

    Welcome
    Please read some of my poems.
    -------> I will update this daily!

    Today
    Today I start a beginning
    but I don't know where the end is
    Yet I see a friend there to guild me.

    Today I am almost finished but I don't want it to end,
    I have so much I still want see, tell, and do!

    Today*
    I leave but with no glee in my step
    My feet feel like cement blocks as I am pushed towards
    the doorway of the school.
     
  2. Sep 20, 2011 #2
    Axl

    Axl New Member

    I really like this =D
     
  3. Sep 20, 2011 #3
    Rainbowkeyblade

    Rainbowkeyblade New Member

    Got a new one

    Summer
    Summer,alone and sad I miss my friends ,and I know they miss me ,laughing with, talking to, and teasing them.

    Summer, happy yet lonely, my heart feels as if it drops into a black hole,deeper and deeper *it falls.

    Summer,happy and excited just a few more days until it is over, then I won't have these horrible heart aches at night.
     
  4. Sep 20, 2011 #4
    Axl

    Axl New Member

    And again, I like it too much! I like this one more than the first one.
     
  5. Sep 20, 2011 #5
    Rainbowkeyblade

    Rainbowkeyblade New Member

    Aww thanks -blushes-

    I sit under a willow tree smelling Apples from the nearby orchard
    And shut my eyes for a while
    When I open them I discover*
    Myself in a beautiful garden
    I get up and notice I am wearing*
    Flowers for clothing.*I thought

    What a surprise it is to be wearing
    Flowers instead of cloths. I then*
    Fall asleep once more and awaken
    To find myself back under the

    Willow tree. I thought I must have Been the wind so I blamed it on*
    That. what I didn't know was there Were petals on the wind and they Took me to Fey wild for a while
    Then they took me home.so I fell Asleep once more under the willow Tree smelling apples from the Orchard nearby.
     
  6. Sep 20, 2011 #6
    Axl

    Axl New Member

    Two in a day =3... I like it... The new one is the best ewe... I'm your fan -w-
     
  7. Sep 20, 2011 #7
    EtherealSummoner

    EtherealSummoner Lamentations 3:22-26

    ??? "guild me?" I think you mean guide. Guild is more for an organization.

    As for the summer poem: You do not have to use commas each time. You can use colons and semi colons. For example:

    Summer: Alone and sad. I miss my friends and I know they miss me; laughing, talking and teasing.

    Summer: Happy yet lonely; my heart feels as if it had dropped into a black hole, deeper and deeper it falls.

    And your last poem has some grammatical errors. The three poems are ok but they need to learn how to flow.
     
  8. Sep 21, 2011 #8
    Rainbowkeyblade

    Rainbowkeyblade New Member

    Ah be quiet,summoner and Yeah I have now!

    Rain
    Drip drop splat! It makes a sound I love.
    Pitter patter, it makes a sound on my window.
    Splish Splash! I jump into a puddle and it makes a sound.
     
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