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Kingdom Hearts: Unloaded

Discussion in 'Archive' started by 1Gannon1, Mar 22, 2011.

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  1. Destiny

    Destiny Guest

    Hmm that's strange that's a post for completely different RP.

    Well just edit and delete that part. Point is, you did multi post and I'm telling you don't do that.
     
  2. xXAnTiFoRmXx

    xXAnTiFoRmXx New Member

    Name-Aura
    Race-Human
    Age-14
    Weapon-[​IMG] [​IMG]
    Appearance-[​IMG]
    Personality-Dark,negative,and determined. He usually has an emotionless look on his face. He is full of hatred and despises anyone who is on the side of light.
    Abilities- He can dual wield but usually only uses one keyblade. He can use darkness to release dark shock waves and blast. He also can summon heartless out of the shadows and absorb thier energy.
    History-Aura was born into a family that was full of people that fought the heartless. One day his older brother was killed by a heartless. He found out that his brother was being used as bait to draw a really big heartless by his own family. Angered by this he killed his father and vowed to kill anyone who had a strong light in thier heart. If he sees anyone with a strong light in thier heart he will attack.
    Weakness- He is very fast but using dark energy wears him down easily. He also is very headstrong and picks fights with those stronger than him.
    Side- Darkness
     
    Last edited: Mar 25, 2011
  3. 1Gannon1

    1Gannon1 New Member

    Anti form, your character needs a little more work. Maybe nobody but him knows about him, but we should. I also need to know his alignment and strengths/weaknesses. And more work on personality, if possible. Remember, you said Aura was human, not a nobody, so you need more of a personality.
     
  4. xXAnTiFoRmXx

    xXAnTiFoRmXx New Member

    I edited it
     
  5. 1Gannon1

    1Gannon1 New Member

    Alright, that should be fine.

    (Actually, I forgot to say, this has been postponed till we have more members. I want at least one more.)
     
    Last edited by a moderator: Mar 25, 2011
  6. CrimsonBlue

    CrimsonBlue New Member

    Name: Nazex
    Original Name: Zane
    Age: 12
    Gender: Male
    Appearance: He has shoulder length grey hair with long bangs that cover his grey eyes. He wears the typical cloak.*
    Personality: He doesn't have one and talks with as few words as possible.*
    Abilities: Control over darkness and light. He can make blades out the dark and light energy and create shockwaves and beams of light and darkness.
    Bio: Zane was a apprentice under king Mickey until he was turned into a heartless his nobody went on to join the organization. He takes orders from whoever benefits him the most.
     
    Last edited: Apr 2, 2011
  7. 1Gannon1

    1Gannon1 New Member

    I would like a bit more work on your abilities.
     
  8. CrimsonBlue

    CrimsonBlue New Member

    Okay I edited it
     
  9. 1Gannon1

    1Gannon1 New Member

    Alright. As reluctant as I am to accept it with so little work on personality and bio, it's alright. But actually, I would like a BIT more work on the bio. What did he do as an apprentice? What was his life like before then?
     
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