Pokemon Dark ages

Do you guys think it will do well?

Basically the story is There is a Castle in the middle ages of pokemon. (Before Pokeballs)
The castle is very important because it protects and is completly attached to a specific, legendary.
After a big fight against an evil king, the castle was left in ruins.
Now it is a home for refugees.
Now there is a new generation to protect the castle and it's secrets.

If there is any questions, Please ask.
And if you can think of anything to help it improve, please do tell.
Thanks

 

Can you elaberate, please?
I get what you are saying, but I'm just kind of confused as to how else to descibe it, or if I need to trow something else in.

 

Well, Ventus is right.
That is the basic premise, but there is more to it.
But ...hmm. Would you guys be fine if I post what I have so far?

 

Story:

In modern day, pokemon are nice, friendly, and lovable. Both them and Humans live in harmony together. Creating bonds and fighting battles. But what was it like before the modern era? Before the pokeball was invented to force friendships? There is a whole world many don’t know of, because the history was lost forever. Our story takes place in xxxx when a powerful nation has taken control of most of the world. But there is one Castle wrapped in mystery, he has not been able to conquer. With out it, he can never have total dominance.

Summary:
Basically this is like a mideval pokemon Rpg. The idea came from the movie “Arceus and the jewel of life”. The Rp is alot more violent and intense than the games and shows are.

Intro:

A man stands in a desert wearing a long, tan robe. The robe complete covers all of his body, but his eyes. As the robe flows in the wind a Charizard in bulky, spiked armor fly’s up and lands right behind him. The man looks up at the charizard and says “We will not survive. You know this right?” The charizard nods his head as The man continues “Well then, today is the day that our story will go down in the books for all history. The day Kiron the Knight and his Charizard had protected there beloved castle, Castle Meso, to there own death.”
The wind subsides allowing the sand to settle revealing a huge castle made of iron and steel standing tall behind them. A cloud of sand fly’s high in front of them. After a few minutes the army travels over a sand dune, coming in the thousands, all lead by there aweful king, King Fredric the Mad, mounted upon a rapidash. The army suddenly stops till a loud trumpet is heard and they all charged forward at high speeds. Half of the men where faster than lightning riding upon any pokemon mountable.
Kiron put his hand into his robe and unsheathed his long broad sword. “Today! We will fight!” He charges forward as a multitude of Ground type pokemon appear out of the ground with there riders mounting them and Bird types by the dozen come flying in, All right behind Kiron running into batlle.


Rules:
-No God modding
-Keep it Pg-13
-You can only have one pokemon
-Must be fully evolved
-No Attack is 100% effective
-You can not have a legendary (Arcanine, Ninetails, Garados, etc. Don’t count as legendaries. Basically if it evolves your good)
-You can be on either side
-A non battle pokemon is fine to have. (Only one please)
-you can have two characters. One on both sides.


I'm not completely through with editing it, but that is basically it.
I need to give little more emphases on why the castle is important.
I just don't want to give too much away about it, because it will be explain through out the Rp.

IF you have anything you want to add to help, please do tell.
Thanks.

 

Thanks, oh and it is going to take place 50 years from the intro.
Thats mainly what I need to edit.

Oh! Or 50 years before the intro.
Brain working!

 

Yeah, I'm defiantly working on my grammar.
Lol.
But, thanks for the pointers.

 

You mean like the moves and such?
Well I'll be going by the literal meanings of each attack.
According to Bublbapidia, of course.
Lol

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