I Think It's Time (Tourney Time That Is!)

And what else? Power over all elements is pretty broad. Does this mean that you can freeze the water in a persons body effectively killing them instantly? Can you make something burst into flames without abiding by the normal rules (Spark+fuel+Oxygen=Heat Energy)? What? Be a lot more specific than this man.

 

I edited it. Is it better now?

 

not really

 

Gosh what do you people want in it then!!!! I cant tell what else I should put into it.

 

May I suggest something?

 

Yes, yes you may.

 

not really. sorry to say but i have to drop out. i'm not gonna be able to get on at all for a while so i've gotta drop out of this.

 

Ok my charecter is denied, but what the heck do I have to do to make my charecter better. (for future refrence.)

 

1. Not make him so broken.

2. Define his powers in such a way that the abilities could not be taken broadly (I.E. "Can use knives". Does not describe the skill in knives, whether he's a master thrower, or what.)

3.There is no 3. Reread 1+2.

 

What do you mean by broken. I said his powers and those are his powers. He has no more powers. Do you want me to describe them more?

 

Does that go for me to?

 

Roxas, look at the front page.

Axel, you need to play more videogames. Broken means overpowered. Granted, some characters still hold a chance at beating him, you basically put the elemental version of Goku into the fray.

 

So should I lower his powers or just use a different power. I personaly really want to hear what Zyraid think. I need to know if I make this guy better then will I be able to join or not.

 

i say lower the powers. he's broken because he has too many and too powerful abilities. tone it down a bit to make it better

 

Well, it isn't so much the number of abilities. All of my characters involved in the arena have like. . . at the least, 10 moves each. I believe Kilet is at seventeen at this moment.

 

So let's say I help him develop that part of his character, will he get in?

 

I changed his powers. He can now only control fire, and can run really fast.

 

This is what I would call the all of the above section. It's more like Mary-Sue, God mod and powerplaying in one. First off, what kind of element can he use? Also, SKy shouldn't even be a god because no one has that kind of power. -___- He can't make it rain. Also, using tornado magic is like one of the top strongest magic of them all that requires a lot of focus and energy, just like when I used Ina against Zerieth's judge in the Rp Arena and she focused her energy so long so she can stop time for at least 10 second and do damage on him but the backside is that she will be vulnerable to many attacks. Trying to say that he can use the biggest tornado that you can ever see does not interest any of us at all. That means that you're saying that for 20-30 minutes, it will take him that long to make one that large. Also, if you're saying the biggest tornado, I'm thinking of a tornado that can take out half of the country.

And you can't just say that a snap with a finger will make meteors fall from the sky because the meteor spell is one of the strongest spell that can drain your magic that good. The same way I used Ina to use Brain Storm on Zerieth's judge to do damage but it drained her, which is why I had her try to use a ether potion to regain some of that magical strength and wasn't able to do it in time and lost. Also, there's no way that you can make a rain turn into a hurricane. Even if you try, all we can do is to make the hurricane turn into ice or I can just have Ina use her powers to control the hurricane and send it straight back at you. -___- And how in the world can you move the mountains? That's like playing god right there. That's just a immediate no and there's no stating as to how or why he can move them. Also, you won't be able to make the earth turn into an abyss. Impossible and earth is a earth magic and a abyss is a dark magic. Also, you can't even say that you can freeze the floor. We can melt the ice right then and there. Also, the part where you said that he can attack one hundred times faster, let me give you an example:

Ina use telekinesis + Take control of sword = Slice the head and automatic win.

What the heck?! Sky cannot be Sonic the HedgeHog, Zeus, Hades, Neptune, Prince of Persia and the liek all into one. That's just unrealistic. Especially the part about leaves can go through even the toughest materials. Seriously, leaves can't go through a wall, a 500 pound bear, a T.V. or Moog's 2012 brand new car ( I wish. XD) I also find it funny as to how water can go through a person. Seriously, the person can just open their mouth and drink it. Plus, water can't even go through the skin (I think it don't). Water can be on the person so that a thunder spell can strike them easily and make them suffer but to say that it can go through, oh well. That's just saying that you want them to be refreshed in my opinion.

You have unrealistic powers that can make your character worn out in just one shot just from one single spell.