Kingdom Hearts The Darkness War OOC/SU

So would I be able to make a character for this?

 

Name: Atov L. Carcelli
Pen Name: La'Moro DeSanti
Title: The Scribe of The New Ages
Age: 25
Gender: Male
Race: Human

Appearance:
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Personality:
This is generally used as a term to describe the vast spectrum of behavior of a person, often seen in reaction to certain situations, or to emotional conditions. In the case of Atov's persona, these behavioral sets can be complex, and often times confusing to others, as his emotions tend to run very high. Even by the standards of society, he gets too overdone by the effects of certain emotional sets that he is faced with. He is most well known for the frequent bouts of depression, which tend to sweet in on him at every crux within the plot of his own life's story. In these events, he is well known for going into states of extreme isolation, locking himself into some room, or even hiding out in a cave. These depressions can become so severe that even suicide becomes a viable option in his mind, in which case he has been perscribed to administer a powerful antidepressant upon himself. When it comes down the notions of love, he is quite bashful, despite is attractive appearance, and when he loves, it comes upon him hard.

Bio:
You know, I really don't want to do this part. I'm a lot better at revealing this stuff through IC posting. So if that's cool, I'll do that.

Abilities:
Atov possess naught but one ability, which he uses to the best of his ability, and even when under the threat of persecution at the hands of those who despise it. Even all of the magics, and powers in the world cannot compare the power which Atov has been gifted with over his time, and he is surprisingly talented with it for his age. What power could possibly so great that it can be used to a greater effect than even magic? What sort of ability can traverse these great spell casters, and wizards? The answer is quite simply: The power of The Word. Whether speaking out to a crowd gathered with a town square, or writing an essay out by pen, Atov is a master of rhetoric, and a journalist, who has been chronicling the events that have been happening since he learned how to write. Using this great skill he has, Atov has moved hundreds of people to feel his emotions, and imparted his philosophical opinion upon countless more.

Weapon:
Well, you really can't call what Atov uses a weapon very much, seeing as he doesn't do much in the way of fighting anyone these days. he carries with him only the tools which he needs in order to write out his essays, and speeches to people. he has a pack full of books, and blank parchment. Various writing quills and ink bottles are housed carefully upon his person. Other than that, Atov carries a rapier upon him, as it is not always to his fortune that he has a bodyguard to escort him through perilous areas. He is actually very skilled in the use of this blade, and can usually hold his own in an outright dual, provided that no magic is used. Still, he prefers to use his words, and his writing to resolve conflicts with others, as he feels that bloodshed should be a last resort, for when the words fail.

 

Ummmm...... Is my character in?

 

Don't you think that things are... moving a little bit too fast? I mean it seems like there's already fight going, and the RP isn't even in the second page.